Gurl you definitely should! It's really inspiring being around a lot of other writers who have the same passion as you.
Also, I guess the broad term for the genre I write in would be pop, although in my head, some of it is EDM, some is Dubstep (Yes I do write songs that I would want a Dubstep breakdown in), then some, like the You (Of All People) one I posted, would be closer to ballad/R&B style.
By the way, here is a song I wrote for Platinum Hit. The theme was called "Right up Hugamari's Alley" (because the last song I sent in was about 69 ) and the challenge was to write a sexual song. Here is what I wrote
I Want Your Rough
Verse 1:
I’m feeling animalistic
I just want to go ballistic
(I got you in my sights
I’ll get you feelin’ right)
This isn’t usually me
But you’re like a dark fantasy
(I want you in my arms
Boy, I don’t mean no harm)
It’s like a voice inside my head
That just wants in your bed instead
(I’m really feelin’ it
I just need a quick hit)
And if you wanna take control
Then I really like how you roll
Hook:
You got me in a thirst
You got me at my worst
Want you to rough me ‘til it hurts
(ha-ha-hi-hihi-hu-urts)
You got me in a haze
Come put me in a daze
We can just go at it for days
(dadada-di-di-dadays)
No need for wasting time
Just come inside my mind
And boy, I swear I’ll make you mine
(m-m-my-my-mymine)
Chorus:
I want your rough rough rough, I can’t get enough
But it’s not love love love, it’s a bit of fun
I want your rough rough rough ‘til I’m screamin loud
(From the mo-on, to the su-u-un, until there isn’t a doubt)
I want your rough rough rough, I just want to endure
Keep goin’ tough tough tough, I can’t take anymore
I want your rough rough rough, what ya waitin’ for?
(From the da-ark, to the li-i-ight, I wanna see what’s in store)
Verse 2:
Right now, I’m feeling so raunchy
So unbelievably naughty
(I got you in my sights
I’ll get you feelin’ right)
It’s not usually my thing
But you’d be one hell of a fling
(I want you in my arms
Boy, I don’t mean no harm)
It’s like you’re calling out my name
No words, yet I’m goin’ insane
(I’m really feelin’ it
I just need a quick hit)
But if you wanna take my hand
Then show me how you be the man
Hook:
You got me in a thirst
You got me at my worst
Want you to rough me ‘til it hurts
(ha-ha-hi-hihi-hu-urts)
You got me in a haze
Come put me in a daze
We can just go at it for days
(dadada-di-di-dadays)
No need for wasting time
Just come inside my mind
And boy, I swear I’ll make you mine
(m-m-my-my-mymine)
Chorus:
I want your rough rough rough, I can’t get enough
But it’s not love love love, it’s a bit of fun
I want your rough rough rough ‘til I’m screamin loud
(From the mo-on, to the su-u-un, until there isn’t a doubt)
I want your rough rough rough, I just want to endure
Keep goin’ tough tough tough, I can’t take anymore
I want your rough rough rough, what ya waitin’ for?
(From the da-ark, to the li-i-ight, I wanna see what’s in store)
Hook:
Now you tell me what’s wrong with a little elation
The feelin you get, oh it’s a tinglin’ sensation
If you relax, I’ll take your body on vacation
And if you’re feelin’ down, I’ll be your medication
Now you tell me what’s wrong with a little elation
The feelin you get, oh it’s a tinglin’ sensation
If you relax, I’ll take your body on vacation
And if you’re feelin’ down, I’ll be your medication
I’ll get you mine in no time
So good that you’ll be seeing white
Chorus:
I want your rough rough rough, I can’t get enough
But it’s not love love love, it’s a bit of fun
I want your rough rough rough ‘til I’m screamin loud
(From the mo-on, to the su-u-un, until there isn’t a doubt)
I want your rough rough rough, I just want to endure
Keep goin’ tough tough tough, I can’t take anymore
I want your rough rough rough, what ya waitin’ for?
(From the da-ark, to the li-i-ight, I wanna see what’s in store)
From the mo-on, to the su-u-un, until there isn’t a doubt
From the da-ark, to the li-i-ight, I wanna see what’s in store
Gurl you definitely should! It's really inspiring being around a lot of other writers who have the same passion as you.
Also, I guess the broad term for the genre I write in would be pop, although in my head, some of it is EDM, some is Dubstep (Yes I do write songs that I would want a Dubstep breakdown in), then some, like the You (Of All People) one I posted, would be closer to ballad/R&B style.
By the way, here is a song I wrote for Platinum Hit. The theme was called "Right up Hugamari's Alley" (because the last song I sent in was about 69 ) and the challenge was to write a sexual song. Here is what I wrote
I Want Your Rough
Verse 1:
I’m feeling animalistic
I just want to go ballistic
(I got you in my sights
I’ll get you feelin’ right)
This isn’t usually me
But you’re like a dark fantasy
(I want you in my arms
Boy, I don’t mean no harm)
It’s like a voice inside my head
That just wants in your bed instead
(I’m really feelin’ it
I just need a quick hit)
And if you wanna take control
Then I really like how you roll
Hook:
You got me in a thirst
You got me at my worst
Want you to rough me ‘til it hurts
(ha-ha-hi-hihi-hu-urts)
You got me in a haze
Come put me in a daze
We can just go at it for days
(dadada-di-di-dadays)
No need for wasting time
Just come inside my mind
And boy, I swear I’ll make you mine
(m-m-my-my-mymine)
Chorus:
I want your rough rough rough, I can’t get enough
But it’s not love love love, it’s a bit of fun
I want your rough rough rough ‘til I’m screamin loud
(From the mo-on, to the su-u-un, until there isn’t a doubt)
I want your rough rough rough, I just want to endure
Keep goin’ tough tough tough, I can’t take anymore
I want your rough rough rough, what ya waitin’ for?
(From the da-ark, to the li-i-ight, I wanna see what’s in store)
Verse 2:
Right now, I’m feeling so raunchy
So unbelievably naughty
(I got you in my sights
I’ll get you feelin’ right)
It’s not usually my thing
But you’d be one hell of a fling
(I want you in my arms
Boy, I don’t mean no harm)
It’s like you’re calling out my name
No words, yet I’m goin’ insane
(I’m really feelin’ it
I just need a quick hit)
But if you wanna take my hand
Then show me how you be the man
Hook:
You got me in a thirst
You got me at my worst
Want you to rough me ‘til it hurts
(ha-ha-hi-hihi-hu-urts)
You got me in a haze
Come put me in a daze
We can just go at it for days
(dadada-di-di-dadays)
No need for wasting time
Just come inside my mind
And boy, I swear I’ll make you mine
(m-m-my-my-mymine)
Chorus:
I want your rough rough rough, I can’t get enough
But it’s not love love love, it’s a bit of fun
I want your rough rough rough ‘til I’m screamin loud
(From the mo-on, to the su-u-un, until there isn’t a doubt)
I want your rough rough rough, I just want to endure
Keep goin’ tough tough tough, I can’t take anymore
I want your rough rough rough, what ya waitin’ for?
(From the da-ark, to the li-i-ight, I wanna see what’s in store)
Hook:
Now you tell me what’s wrong with a little elation
The feelin you get, oh it’s a tinglin’ sensation
If you relax, I’ll take your body on vacation
And if you’re feelin’ down, I’ll be your medication
Now you tell me what’s wrong with a little elation
The feelin you get, oh it’s a tinglin’ sensation
If you relax, I’ll take your body on vacation
And if you’re feelin’ down, I’ll be your medication
I’ll get you mine in no time
So good that you’ll be seeing white
Chorus:
I want your rough rough rough, I can’t get enough
But it’s not love love love, it’s a bit of fun
I want your rough rough rough ‘til I’m screamin loud
(From the mo-on, to the su-u-un, until there isn’t a doubt)
I want your rough rough rough, I just want to endure
Keep goin’ tough tough tough, I can’t take anymore
I want your rough rough rough, what ya waitin’ for?
(From the da-ark, to the li-i-ight, I wanna see what’s in store)
From the mo-on, to the su-u-un, until there isn’t a doubt
From the da-ark, to the li-i-ight, I wanna see what’s in store
I got 3rd place that round...out of 6 people. So yah, there were a lot of brilliant writers that season. I will be participating again this upcoming season so hold onto your wigs gurls. :alex2:
(It's a shame that I was the first actual elimination...everyone else got eliminated for inactivity)
Oh and grats TheoJuke
EDIT: OMG a rhyming dictionary!!! I ****ing love you ORM
Soldier of mine
You keep falling behind
You cant stop the drums from beating
You cant stop my army's marching
Oh my dancing warrior
Always fighting your war
You don't wanna be alone
It chills me to my bones
You keep falling, falling
Down the bomb's descent
The further that you go
It truly breaks my heart
You keep calling, calling
Reaching out for me
but I won't be there
To pick the pieces up
Boxer in the ring
Trying to defend me
You cant stop me from bleeding
It's my life I need to be free
Oh my darkest knight
I'm not the greatest prize
I will break down on you
I come with no receipt
You keep falling, falling
Down the bomb's descent
The further that you go
It truly breaks my heart
You keep calling, calling
Reaching out for me
but I won't be there
To pick the pieces up
I can hear the bombs
Go BOOM BOOM!!
You keep falling, falling
Down the bomb's descent
The further that you go
It truly breaks my heart
You keep calling, calling
Reaching out for me
but I won't be there
To pick the pieces up
Quote:
Originally posted by Danny789
I wrote this back in 2006
For my aunt Maggie
when my uncle died
Waking Up
Must be hard
Looking out at the yard
Thinking of what it was
Thinking of what you’ve lost
Don’t be scared
Maggie Dear
I will always be right here
If you ever feel alone
I’ll buy you an ice cream cone
Next to you I’ll be right here
Memories
In your mind
Flashing right past your eyes
Keep them close, don’t let them go
And make some new ones
Don’t be scared
Maggie Dear
I will always be right here
If you ever need to talk
We will climb a big bean stalk
Next to clouds I’ll be right there
Laughing will come again
Soon someone else will be inside of your head
Your heart will never die
Even if the blood stops pumping inside
Don’t be scared
Maggie Dear
I will always be right here
If you’re ever feeling down
We’ll ride a merry go’ round
Next to you I’ll be right here
Don’t be scared
Maggie Dear
I will always be right here
If you ever need a friend
Your broken heart I will mend
Next to you I’ll be right here
Maggie Dear
I’m right here
Forever and Always
Don’t be scared
Maggie Dear
I will always be right here
If you ever feel alone
My hand is right here to hold
Next to you I’ll be right here
Quote:
Originally posted by Danny789
There always talking about us
It makes me sad
They don't know anything about us
Don't understand
But to you
our love
was dead
I left instead
But I'd do it
again
If you asked me to
Do you want me to
I've always seen the truth
I've been blinded by you
It's time to make a move
And I'm sticking here with you
Don't care what they say
Don't care what you do
I've always been true to myself
They're always talking about me
Like I'm a fool
They don't don't know anything about me
Don't know the truth
All
The lies
you told
have come
undone
I left
I'm gone
But id do it
again
If you want me to
I've always seen the truth
I've been blinded by you
It's time to make a move
And I'm sticking here with you
Don't care what they say
Don't care what you do
I've always been true to myself
I've always seen the truth
that I'm in love with you
I've always seen the truth
Do you love me too?
I've always seen the truth
I've been blinded by you
It's time to make a move
And I'm sticking here with you
Don't care what they say
Don't care what you do
I've always been true to myself
Gurl you definitely should! It's really inspiring being around a lot of other writers who have the same passion as you.
Also, I guess the broad term for the genre I write in would be pop, although in my head, some of it is EDM, some is Dubstep (Yes I do write songs that I would want a Dubstep breakdown in), then some, like the You (Of All People) one I posted, would be closer to ballad/R&B style.
By the way, here is a song I wrote for Platinum Hit. The theme was called "Right up Hugamari's Alley" (because the last song I sent in was about 69 ) and the challenge was to write a sexual song. Here is what I wrote
I Want Your Rough
Verse 1:
I’m feeling animalistic
I just want to go ballistic
(I got you in my sights
I’ll get you feelin’ right)
This isn’t usually me
But you’re like a dark fantasy
(I want you in my arms
Boy, I don’t mean no harm)
It’s like a voice inside my head
That just wants in your bed instead
(I’m really feelin’ it
I just need a quick hit)
And if you wanna take control
Then I really like how you roll
Hook:
You got me in a thirst
You got me at my worst
Want you to rough me ‘til it hurts
(ha-ha-hi-hihi-hu-urts)
You got me in a haze
Come put me in a daze
We can just go at it for days
(dadada-di-di-dadays)
No need for wasting time
Just come inside my mind
And boy, I swear I’ll make you mine
(m-m-my-my-mymine)
Chorus:
I want your rough rough rough, I can’t get enough
But it’s not love love love, it’s a bit of fun
I want your rough rough rough ‘til I’m screamin loud
(From the mo-on, to the su-u-un, until there isn’t a doubt)
I want your rough rough rough, I just want to endure
Keep goin’ tough tough tough, I can’t take anymore
I want your rough rough rough, what ya waitin’ for?
(From the da-ark, to the li-i-ight, I wanna see what’s in store)
Verse 2:
Right now, I’m feeling so raunchy
So unbelievably naughty
(I got you in my sights
I’ll get you feelin’ right)
It’s not usually my thing
But you’d be one hell of a fling
(I want you in my arms
Boy, I don’t mean no harm)
It’s like you’re calling out my name
No words, yet I’m goin’ insane
(I’m really feelin’ it
I just need a quick hit)
But if you wanna take my hand
Then show me how you be the man
Hook:
You got me in a thirst
You got me at my worst
Want you to rough me ‘til it hurts
(ha-ha-hi-hihi-hu-urts)
You got me in a haze
Come put me in a daze
We can just go at it for days
(dadada-di-di-dadays)
No need for wasting time
Just come inside my mind
And boy, I swear I’ll make you mine
(m-m-my-my-mymine)
Chorus:
I want your rough rough rough, I can’t get enough
But it’s not love love love, it’s a bit of fun
I want your rough rough rough ‘til I’m screamin loud
(From the mo-on, to the su-u-un, until there isn’t a doubt)
I want your rough rough rough, I just want to endure
Keep goin’ tough tough tough, I can’t take anymore
I want your rough rough rough, what ya waitin’ for?
(From the da-ark, to the li-i-ight, I wanna see what’s in store)
Hook:
Now you tell me what’s wrong with a little elation
The feelin you get, oh it’s a tinglin’ sensation
If you relax, I’ll take your body on vacation
And if you’re feelin’ down, I’ll be your medication
Now you tell me what’s wrong with a little elation
The feelin you get, oh it’s a tinglin’ sensation
If you relax, I’ll take your body on vacation
And if you’re feelin’ down, I’ll be your medication
I’ll get you mine in no time
So good that you’ll be seeing white
Chorus:
I want your rough rough rough, I can’t get enough
But it’s not love love love, it’s a bit of fun
I want your rough rough rough ‘til I’m screamin loud
(From the mo-on, to the su-u-un, until there isn’t a doubt)
I want your rough rough rough, I just want to endure
Keep goin’ tough tough tough, I can’t take anymore
I want your rough rough rough, what ya waitin’ for?
(From the da-ark, to the li-i-ight, I wanna see what’s in store)
From the mo-on, to the su-u-un, until there isn’t a doubt
From the da-ark, to the li-i-ight, I wanna see what’s in store
I really like your sex song.
It's giving me Rihanna teas, like a more subtle, modest version of S&M.
And I write mainly pop too. I think when my writing becomes more complex (I haven't been doing it long and I haven't saved any demos or lyrics) I will move on to more genres.
Ah it makes sense! There is other ways too I'm sure haha but yeah hard to imagine without it! Well I have one but I can't pay it well teaching myself sucks..
I have like one I'm semi proud of.. don't wanna be a posting ***** xD but here's one I did myself. I recorded and all (my voice is always nervous when I push that 'record' button LOL!) Mind checking it out y'all?
Holy Swords - HRjr
Lyrics:
The greatest treachery comes from the
coldest depths
There's no sanctuary in the waters
you tread
No air beneath you to support
your wings
Everything you know and are is
gone with the wind
Your dark and wicked customs become
your law
There's nothing you can do about it
at all
And suddenly your head's not
on your neck
Your heart's not underneath
your lungs
Right when you thought you won, the battle
has just begun
In your future you're destined to slay a sinful beast
so prepare your holy swords
And don't be scared to the very least
for this upcoming war
The greatest honour comes from facing the
real music deliberately
Focusing on the subtle rhythms and not the
obvious melody
Whatever the price of the burden may be
not walking away
You know it's a debt you'll
have to pay
Maybe the waves will prove to
hold the truth
You have no one to
believe in
Maybe the cool water of the ocean
blue
Will cleanse your soul as it wets
your skin
Send your army of ships and men away
for now
The one you'll have to conquer
alone
Gather all your bows and arrows and guns and spears
and knives
Train your head, for this will be fought with
the mind
In your future you're destined to slay a sinful beast
so prepare your holy swords
And don't be scared to the very least
for this upcoming war
You feel it through your hands as you attempt to get to your feet/don't let this steady ground crumble from beneath you/All you know is now gone, perfect chance for a clean slate/It's the dark before the dawn, this was you without a teammate/Now all that's left is what you chose to drag along/You're closer to the end than the start now/ Your heart will mend, you'll learn there is no wrong/ Only unfortunate events that resulted in this crown/All you have to do is wait/Wait, just wait/ Wait/Wait
I know because in my past I slayed a sinful beast
Fought with my holiest sword
I was scared to say the least
But the absence of panic helped me win this war
Adam, you know what we should do? We need to make a preliminary list of people who would be interested in Platinum Hit, and then PM them when the next season is up.
@TheoJuke: No matter what method you go about song writing, it does not make it any better or worse than someone elses. (Unless you are like playing Mad Libs with someone elses lyrics of course.) If you randomly sing a lyric, you may want to write it down. You might think of a continuation to it later. Before you know it, you have a song! Honestly, it's amazing all the different ways inspiration can come to you.
I got 3rd place that round...out of 6 people. So yah, there were a lot of brilliant writers that season. I will be participating again this upcoming season so hold onto your wigs gurls. :alex2:
(It's a shame that I was the first actual elimination...everyone else got eliminated for inactivity)
Oh and grats TheoJuke
EDIT: OMG a rhyming dictionary!!! I ****ing love you ORM