Originally posted by Evun

@ the subliminal flash gif. That was a fantastic ending. It was a cute entry. It dragged a bit and the joke didn't sustain itself all that well through the middle section, but it was still good overall.

Originally posted by Vato

was my favorite entry this time around. His review was thorough, creative, and a very interesting read. Out of all the participants, I feel he displayed the most creativity out of everyone. I would probably buy the whole story if I was an average person oblivious to pop music. Very well done.

Originally posted by Katie

*one of the hints* *didn't specify*

Originally posted by Matty

*reading, reading, reading, reading* “Oh Chelsea Lately is on!!!” *watches Chelsea Lately*. That was pretty much me while reading your entry. Besides being quite long, it was humorous and it fit well. I just wouldn’t believe it. Overall okay. Biased aside, I didn’t judge you on choosing a Justin Bieber song.

Originally posted by Evun

Cute! Good photos. The joke is good, but a bit one note. The whole entry is fairly samey.

Originally posted by Vato

was also a favorite of mine. Not as interesting as boyonce, but definitely funnier.

Originally posted by Katie

*one of the hints* *didn't specify*

Originally posted by Matty

Creative and is making me crave Starbucks right now. On with the entry, who knew Keri Hilson had the ability to write anything that could be sung outside of the Walmart parking lot. Your entry was more cohesive with the example of a Britney song with Britney and Starbucks, was also entertaining to read. I’d sort of believe it, but yet I can’t.

Originally posted by Evun

This entry didn't sit well with me. I feel like it's supposed to be funnier than it actually is. The joke just falls flat for me. Like, I get it, but it almost isn't outlandish or shocking enough. I can predict the majority of the rest of your entry after reading the first analysis, and that makes it boring.

Originally posted by Vato

was decent. Creative definitely, but I feel it was a bit half-assed and had a lot more potential.

Originally posted by Katie

*one of the hints* *didn't specify*

Originally posted by Matty

Entertaining, but very 1-2-3. What I mean by that is, it’s basically a soft interpretation of the song. Yes that is what this challenge was about, yes I would believe it, I mean it’s Nicki, Roman probably had a gay rendezvous, but it just wasn’t as creative as I would have liked.

Originally posted by Evun

I love that you had a surprise ending. Very effective and distinctive. You should have explained the chorus better, but I'll get over that.

Originally posted by Vato

was my least favorite this time, sorry papi! The first 3 acts were boring and the 4th act was disgusting with the bacteria and bowels being mentioned. Definitely not up to par with the other participants.

Originally posted by Katie

*one of the hints* *didn't specify*

Originally posted by Matty

What? What!? What!?!? I am so confused. How did all that fit with the lyrics of the song? I haven’t been this confused since I read the first chapter of the first Harry Potter book years back. I re-read this entry multiple times and I just don’t get it. I will give you points for the Enrique comment and that out of nowhere last act.