Thinking of You

****** motel room, diluting my gloom
With the thought of you
No one is around, there's only one sound
My heart's starting to pound
I time my breathing, my body's seething
Touching, believing
You may not be there, but I really don't care
Breathe in the sweaty air

Sigh, moan, touch, groan
Feel, wet, heat, sweat
Pull, grip, ****, wish
Lips, smoke, bite, choke

Because I'm thinking of you
In the light of the moon
And I can't stop now, no, I can't stop now
I wish these were your hands
Like a cigarette stained dance
And it hurts like hell, yeah, it hurts like hell
My bed is like the ocean blue
My hand a boat that's guiding through
And I'm thinking of you, yeah, I'm thinking of you

Your body is my light, I won't give up this fight
I'll hold on with my might
Please don't end too fast, in the tingling I bask
Too soon to climax
I clench my upper jaw, I am holding on
Because your touch is gone
Your features are a blur, the architecture
Of your body burns

Sigh, moan, touch, groan
Feel, wet, heat, sweat
Pull, grip, ****, wish
Lips, smoke, bite, choke

Because I'm thinking of you
In the light of the moon
And I can't stop now, no, I can't stop now
I wish these were your hands
Like a cigarette stained dance
And it hurts like hell, yeah, it hurts like hell
My bed is like the ocean blue
My hand a boat that's guiding through
And I'm thinking of you, yeah, I'm thinking of you

Red eyes, so high, Coors light, satin night
Torn from your grasp
Opulence, confidence, kicking sheets, heartbeats
You're my wonderland
Dark beasts, instincts, bodies together, mine forever
But tonight you are gone

Because I'm thinking of you
In the light of the moon
And I can't stop now, no, I can't stop now
I wish these were your hands
Like a cigarette stained dance
And it hurts like hell, yeah, it hurts like hell
My bed is like the ocean blue
My hand a boat that's guiding through
And I'm thinking of you, yeah, I'm thinking of you

Wishing you were here

[It's not that good, we wrote it in like ten minutes but we thought it was funny]

Some of the best songs were wrote in 10 minutes. Sounds like a smash.

Thanks

P!nk yours is freaking amazing

Wow! Thank you so much!

Means a lot.

aww thanks. i just thought it was me personally that i couldn't find a good rhythm, cause i admit, i suck at trying to read the structure of anything without knowing how the beat goes Dx

I wrote this when my friend has been through a tough time, her boyfriend left her for other gurls

"Come And Go"

We used to be together
Searching our own world
We let the time goes by
I fall in love with you boy
But you never feel like one
I pack my bags and go

I don't care right now
If you on my feet, begging on your knees
You have to think right now
I'll say goodbye before the morning

Here we go, I can go
Let me take control oh
Don't you see what is this?
I'd rather be get gone
I don't think we should wait
To give it another chance
Boy like you is come and go

See right now, all the sparks
Flying across everywhere
We not meant for do this
We don't even try it
Time's it up, hear the shots
Let's do it our own way
Boy like you is come and go

I can't arrive to your house (your house)
To get my stuff back (to get my stuff back)
I'm a little ashamed (a little ashamed)
Because I once love you

I don't care right now
If you on my feet, begging on your knees
You have to think right now
I'll say goodbye before the morning

Here we go, I can go
Let me take control oh
Don't you see what is this?
I'd rather be get gone
I don't think we should wait
To give it another chance
Boy like you is come and go

See right now, all the sparks
Flying across everywhere
We not meant for do this
We don't even even try it
Time's it up, hear the shots
Let's do it our own way
Boy like you is come and go

The stars is going down
It's stays midnight and there's no light
And there you are
Standing there at the end of me
Why can't I let go?
All the memories that haunt me before

Here we go, I can go
Let me take control oh
Don't you see what is this?
I'd rather be get gone
I don't think we should wait
To give it another chance
Boy like you is come and go

See right now, all the sparks
Flying across everywhere
We not meant for do this
We don't even try it
Time's it up, hear the shots
Let's do it our own way
Boy like you is come and go

Is come and go
Is come and go

Yes.

I do write songs,don't like sharing :s

YOU'RE ALONE

If I only could turn back that time
I wouldn't give you hope only for us
You often say
"what will happen will happen"
It's not my fault,
life writes it for me again.

The first year with you, it was a love
Second one I was not happy at all.
That time someone appeared and burned that,
the one last thing that we tried hard to pretend.

I have met him, so please believe me
It wasn't planned, he didn't want to steal me
It's happening what I write so hardly
Tonight I confess it

You're alone, because I have man with whom meaning it has
You're alone, because I have life that will give me a sense
I already have...what I have been searching for years
You're alone, so find a strength because you're staying alone
You're alone.

He's not that attentive, like you have been.
His body isn't good like your has been.
He can't give me the things you were giving.
Can't command my heart, that's how it is.
At the beginning it was experiment
Then I found out it was the allurement
Then it showed to me it was a big love
No strenghth for those disgusting lies

I have met him, so please believe me
It wasn't planned, he didn't want to steal me
It's happening what I write so hardly
Tonight I confess it

You're alone, because I have man with whom meaning it has
You're alone, because I have life that will give me a sense
I already have...what I have been searching for years
You're alone, so find a strength because you're staying alone
You're alone.

You miss me, sometimes I miss you
But it's not what matters... anymore
You have dreams with me, you're struggling to sleep
It's not us anymore, a good relationship
you are only past, so please forgive me
I rejected you and life punished me oh-oh,
I am happy this way

You're alone, because I have man with whom meaning it has
You're alone, because I have life that will give me a sense
I already have...what I have been searching for years
You're alone, so find a strength because you're staying alone
You're alone.

I do, ever since I can remember.

I'm writing one right now
It's called: Your Lost

Yes

this is a bit of one


I’ll only regret the fall if you’re not there to catch me
Take my hand in yours and the world seems to fade
Your eyes tell me everything that you can’t seem to say
I think I fall a little more for you day after day
When I’m in your arms, I’m safe from harm, with you I will stay
Forevermore, I’m always yours, till my last breath I’ll stay
I’ll lay by your side, night to night
In your embrace is when I feel right
The simple things make life worth living
The touch of your hand, makes a kiss worth giving
Look in my eyes, I’m paralyzed, my heart skips
When I take my last breath…I hope it’s against your lips.

That is so damn beautiful

why can't we have a big talent sharing thread so that we can keep sharing things without having to make new threadss

Ke$ha's flaw-free "Run Devil Run" doesn't rhyme in the verses.

Yes I do, but I don't like to post them online.

http://soundcloud.com/finishmydemos/snippet-me-singing-the-bridge


quick bridge

omg. this was like a year ago. This is a really bad instrumental to a song I wrote about guys who don't have endurance in uhm...


http://soundcloud.com/finishmydemos/engine-running


so horrible