To all those ATRLers who like to write songs, please post the lyrics to one of the songs you have written in this thread.

I thought it would be nice to see the songwriting talent amongst ATRLers, and appreciate the best songwriters.

I would post mine, but I'm scared someone might rip me off. Idk.

I do have better songs but I don't want people to copy, so I will choose one I don't like lol. It is a work in progress but I wrote it this morning. It is called 'Exposed', and is a bit s**t really but oh well here it is anyway...

VERSE 1:
I wish I could see, see past the lines,
I wish I could be, be a stronger kind,
I want to respect, humanity,
But I can not do that, if it's not respecting me,

CHORUS:
We can run run run,
We can run away to heaven,
But we'll still be seen,
We can go go go,
We'll push emotions to the boundries,
Where they should be,
But they'll still be exposed,
Yeah they'll still be exposed,

VERSE 2:
I want to believe, it is all a plan,
For just me and you,
To run away from man,
We need to rise high,
Higher than the throne,
For us to grasp the sovereign,
And to contently roam,

(CHORUS)

BRIDGE:
It is not your fault,
Nor is it mine,
I don't know who to blame,
Do I blame mankind,
Or shall I blame no one,
Until I know,
How I can soar freely,
To search for hope, where shall I go?

(CHORUS)

This is the third time in the past two months that this thread has popped up.

Praise accepted

Last night I cried,
Tonight I'm fine,
Tomorrow I'll be much better.
Life can be so hard at times,
Can feel like there's no end in sight,
But when it comes to you and I:
I feel like the stars shine at night
And the moon is no longer so dark..
Just knowing that you're in my life,
Can change the way I feel inside,
Can turn my sorrows into joy.

Love is not a game or a toy
I guess that man thought otherwise because he didn't mind destroying
my heart, the part of me I hold so dear
the part of me I've always feared
victim of puppets play.......
foolish me.

Omg well done they're both so good! Put mine to shame :/

Would it be right, if I tell you I was wrong?
Will you be glad, if I tell you I was hurt?
You've already told me, all of your thousand lies.
I wouldn't want for you, to hear my own cries.

Loving you forever won't be wrong
But hurting me forever won't be right either.
If i just ended it with you right from the start
I wouldn't even have, a broken heart.

I know some of you will think that I used some Lana lyrics (loving you forever.., Dark Paradise, i think) well, I didn't, but feel free to sue me

Thoughts?

Hmmmm

Here's a snippet of me singing a bridge to a song I wrote:


http://soundcloud.com/finishmydemos/snippet-me-singing-the-bridge


(Link if it doesn't work: http://soundcloud.com/finishmydemos/...ing-the-bridge)

That was amazing

Thank you