Your eyes whispered, "Have we met?"
Across the room your silhouette
Starts to make its way to me
The playful conversation starts
Counter all your quick remarks
Like passing notes in secrecy
This is me praying that
This was the very first page
Not where the story line ends
My thoughts will echo your name
Until I see you again
These are the words I held back
As I was leaving too soon
I was enchanted to meet you
Please don't be in love with someone else
Please don't have somebody waiting on you
This night is sparkling, don't you let it go
I'm wonderstruck, blushing all the way home
I'll spend forever wondering if you knew
This night is flawless, don't you let it go
I'm wonderstruck, dancing around all alone
I'll spend forever wondering if you knew
I was enchanted to meet you
Oh, so your feedback wasn't that good the first time around?
It wasn't like "this sucks" but there were more corrections than I've ever had before, but that might be because this is a full song so there's more room to go wrong.
I'm working on a song for the flowers, but it's too similar in topic to what I did last week (and what the judges didn't like) I don't know whether to choose something else or stay with this one because I quite like what I've done so far