Verse 1
I’ve got a secret
But I want you to know it; I promise that I really do
Swear that you’ll keep it?
‘Cause it’s kind of a scandal involving me and maybe you
Pre-Chorus
But every time that I try and explain to you why
I get choked up inside and I feel butterflies
I don’t know what to do when I’m looking at you
And this question just won’t leave my mind
Chorus
I gotta know, is this real?
‘Cause I’m losing my head, hanging on by a thread
Don’t you know, how I feel?
When you look at me like that, it’s taking me right back
To that cold winter night, you were holding me tight
And you whispered my name in the candlelight
Yeah I gotta know, how you feel
If you want me I’m ready to go, so I gotta know
Verse 2
Where is this going?
You’ve been texting me all night, we might as well talk face to face
Both of us knowing
It’s the perfect excuse to get me all alone at your place
Pre-Chorus
But every time that I try and explain to you why
I get choked up inside and I feel butterflies
I don’t know what to do when I’m looking at you
And this question just won’t leave my mind
Chorus
I gotta know, is this real?
‘Cause I’m losing my head, hanging on by a thread
Don’t you know, how I feel?
When you look at me like that, it’s taking me right back
To that cold winter night, you were holding me tight
And you whispered my name in the candlelight
Yeah I gotta know, how you feel
If you want me I’m ready to go, so I gotta know
Bridge
Don’t lead me down this road again
We’re past the point of no return; we can’t just be friends
Look in my eyes and speak the truth
I feel the sparks, the chemistry; do you feel it too?
Chorus
I gotta know, is this real?
‘Cause I’m losing my head, hanging on by a thread
Don’t you know, how I feel?
When you look at me like that, it’s taking me right back
To that cold winter night, you were holding me tight
And you whispered my name in the candlelight
Yeah I gotta know, how you feel
If you want me I’m ready to go, so I gotta know
It's nothing special, just a cute little Carly Rae Jepsen / I Really Like You inspired basic bop. Just wanted to write a song before the competition started.
The Carly inspiration was real but this was AMAZING
Now I feel like i have to add one thing
because you were just acting Disgusting
I felt a sting
when you back stabbed me,
all of our ties
all your lies
I didn't think it was wise
for all the chaos you demised
Don't apologize
Don't act laid back
because it's time for your payback
if you were wondering, this song is dedicated to you
I hope you now realize, you are trash.
Now I put you in the trash with the others
the garbage man will pick you up in the morning
i cant even,
look at you,
cause you are trash
OUTRO
Down like a feather
killed like leather
now trash like the others
Now it's time for you to go
to the wasteland you belong
now i hope you realized
how you treated me..
.. YOU ARE... TRASH!
I don't usually like diss tracks but this is PRETTY fire You better go IN!
what songs are you guys best are writing / your favorite?
Mine is Revenge / pop-dance songs
I definitely see myself as an upbeat, pop songwriter. I've written a rap song before and it turned out okay. I'm not so much into darker themes but I've also written them before to mixed reception.
Here's the first song I wrote, when I was like 12.
Verse 1:
Red lights flashing
Through my bedroom window pane
Ambulance outside
Howling as it speeds away
I don't know where it's going but I wish it would take me
Chorus (x2)
Did you ever have a night like this
Did you ever get the feeling something needed to change
Did you ever have a night like this
I'll keep bending just because I know eventually I'll break
Verse 2:
Red light flashing
On my old answering machine
Don't want to hear
The message that's waiting for me
I don't know what you'll say but I know it will hurt me
Chorus x2
Bridge:
It's so dark and the sky's so clear
I could read the star signs if I only knew how.
It's too late and the end is near
The flashing lights have faded and I'm all alone now.
ngl Sam the song you posted reminds me of the songs I didn't like from you in the 3rd quarter of last season
I figured that would be the case actually. Your writing style is so different to mine though so that's no surprise. As I wrote the line "'Cause I'm losing my head, hanging on by a thread" I thought "GotSkill will hate this double cliche."
Verse 2
I was like a giddy kid in a candystore
So many brands, that I could take home
You called to me, you looked so sweet
Could I just have one taste
It reminds me of this song in a way:
Hopefully I'll come up with something better for my first round entry though.
I Gotta Know
Your writing style is so different to mine though so that's no surprise. As I wrote the line "'Cause I'm losing my head, hanging on by a thread" I thought "GotSkill will hate this double cliche."