[Blue.]

I chose the trees

[Stark]

Thanks Tymps.!

[Gladion]

Do I write a bop about a waiter getting extra money on his tip then they fell in love

Or a ballad about even without money a couple will still love each other ?

[moijejoue]

I've decided my dance pop ballad will be inspired by UF.

[ForeverNow90]

I mean when I saw my name there I immediately started putting something together. It's my best work to date. I'd be happy to submit

[Stark]

Originally posted by Tymps.

I like the near rhyme of seas and three juxtaposed with the mind rhyme of seven and three!

Oops, seems like I might submit that

[Gladion]

I think I've finalized my idea, I love it

[UFO]

Originally posted by HausofNiko

Do I write a bop about a waiter getting extra money on his tip then they fell in love

Or a ballad about even without money a couple will still love each other ?

You can combine them both.

[8thPrince]

Originally posted by dwuw

What rhymes with WAVES? Don't say slaves or graves or things like that.

Tip: It doesn't have to be a perfect rhyme. (Cat/bat/hat/fat/mat) As long as it has the eh/ay sound in it, it's good enough (Cat/rap/drag/whack/laugh)

ie:
I sailed over crests and through the waves
To be by your side, my saving grace

[Gladion]

Omg euph sis, thank you

[Temporal]

Originally posted by Tymps.

Here's a tip. Write a bunch of choruses, like ten of them. Write whatever comes to mind and don't spend to much time thinking it over. Then, look at what you've done and see what you want to keep from that. Then you can polish what you kept and you have a great chorus!

This is literally the exact opposite advice Truthy gave to Niko

[Stark]

Originally posted by 8thPrince

Tip: It doesn't have to be a perfect rhyme. (Cat/bat/hat/fat/mat) As long as it has the eh/ay sound in it, it's good enough (Cat/rap/drag/whack/laugh)

ie:
I sailed over crests and through the waves
To be by your side, my saving grace

oops thanks

[Truth Teller]

Originally posted by ForeverNow90

Girls, why am I still on under "remaining contestants" ? Didn't I get eliminated yesterday? The good sis Buyonce too

Your name is not there though

Buyonce won the mini comeback round. There'll be another comeback round possibly, but only active members will be invited to it cause we can't have 20 comeback entries. Which means, stay perched, stay active, stay present

[Jezang Looz]

Can I PM someone a verse that I just wrote

[Temporal]

Wow, I'm writing a happy song now. What the actual ****.

[Gladion]

what a girl wants, what a girl needs just came on the radio, I instantly thought of you TT

[Temporal]

Originally posted by Jezang Looz

Can I PM someone a verse that I just wrote

You can PM it to me but I might scalp you because I love you and I need you to stop coming so close to elimination

[Truth Teller]

Originally posted by ClarksonSlays

This is literally the exact opposite advice Truthy gave to Niko

Yeah, I think writing more than one thing is the worst process anyone can follow (no shade Tymps.)

If they're all good, you'll have trouble picking
If they're all bad, you'll get frustrated and quit
If they're all average, you'll try to combine them into something good and you'll make a mess

You'll also waste too much time and energy on a pointless process. Just put your all into ONE thing and slay it. Focus on it, rewrite it 5,000 times if you will to change one word or one rhyme, but make sure it's ONE thing, ONE concept, ONE idea.

At least that's my advice. The best thing about having 5 judges is the different perspectives and we're all very different to one another. Just pick the piece of advice that sounds like it will work for you

[8thPrince]

Originally posted by HausofNiko

Do I write a bop about a waiter getting extra money on his tip then they fell in love

Or a ballad about even without money a couple will still love each other ?

WAIT I know you're just vomiting ideas, but this would be a really cute midtempo premise. A meets B who is A's waiter, thinks B is cute, leaves extra tip money, B likes her but fails to get her number and wants A to come back, A keeps returning to the restaurant to get B as her waiter, at the end they finally get the same table. A starts to leave a tip, but B asks for her number instead. The End!

[Truth Teller]

Originally posted by HausofNiko

what a girl wants, what a girl needs just came on the radio, I instantly thought of you TT

Awwwww