[Jezang Looz]

Originally posted by Poe Dameron

Time goes by so slowly for those who wait

True

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Woah oh oh oh oh oh oh



Woah oh oh oh oh oh oh

[IMadeYouReadThis]

HERE IS THE SECOND DEMO OF MY SONG

It's still not incredible, the lyrics are the same, but I did add a few cool stuff here and there and re-recorded the vocals!

I'd appreciate any comments from y'all!!!

[KasioKas]

The site is unbearable rn

Save us from 522 Athens!!

[LiMe]

Originally posted by IMadeYouReadThis

HERE IS THE SECOND DEMO OF MY SONG

It's still not incredible, the lyrics are the same, but I did add a few cool stuff here and there and re-recorded the vocals!

I'd appreciate any comments from y'all!!!

It has potential, not quite sure about the lyrics... but the vocals are giving me slight Crosses vibes.

[Dessy Fenix]

I hate my allergies.

Edit: Ew the site is back to it 522 mess again. Bai.

[Shendelzare]

too much 522s

[IMadeYouReadThis]

Originally posted by LiMe

It has potential, not quite sure about the lyrics... but the vocals are giving me slight Crosses vibes.

Aw thanks

Dont like my vocals (at all), and yeah, the lyrics are basic thanks thooo

Also, just wanna clear that despite the 'positive'ish nature of the lyrics it actually isn't about some happy relationship... It's about something that's not to be, yet there's a bit of longing there... If that makes sense...

[ABEL-o-matic]

Freaking KimYe and Taylor causing these 522's.

[LiMe]

Looks like it's gonna be one of those kinda days.

Originally posted by IMadeYouReadThis

Aw thanks

Dont like my vocals (at all), and yeah, the lyrics are basic thanks thooo

Also, just wanna clear that despite the 'positive'ish nature of the lyrics it actually isn't about some happy relationship... It's about something that's not to be, yet there's a bit of longing there... If that makes sense...

Yeah I feel like I get that vibe from the song.

[Almodusa]

This class is boring me today

[Citrus]

No shade but when I saw I got a warning in the Taylor thread I thought it would be for something actually mean or nasty but w/e

http://atrl.net/forums/showthread.ph...1#post35259781

[IMadeYouReadThis]

Originally posted by LiMe

Looks like it's gonna be one of those kinda days.





Yeah I feel like I get that vibe from the song.

what do you mean? :P kind of blanking out right now

[Dessy Fenix]

I hate my allergies.

Edit: Ew the site is back to it 522 mess again. Bai.

[Nemo]

I woke up like dih

[LiMe]

Originally posted by IMadeYouReadThis

what do you mean? :P kind of blanking out right now

"It's about something that's not to be, yet there's a bit of longing there... If that makes sense."

The instrumental kinda makes me feel that emotion.

[Shendelzare]

Originally posted by Citrus

No shade but when I saw I got a warning in the Taylor thread I thought it would be for something actually mean or nasty but w/e

http://atrl.net/forums/showthread.ph...1#post35259781

you got warned for that?

[Nemo]

:P

[Jezang Looz]

Mess at the 522s

[IMadeYouReadThis]

Originally posted by LiMe

"It's about something that's not to be, yet there's a bit of longing there... If that makes sense."

The instrumental kinda makes me feel that emotion.

awesome. that's what I've been going for!!!!!!!

Can you go into a bit more detail about what you'd change about the lyrical content? I know it's not some genious lyrics but I would appreciate any comments to make any future attempts better :P

[LiMe]

Originally posted by IMadeYouReadThis

awesome. that's what I've been going for!!!!!!!

Can you go into a bit more detail about what you'd change about the lyrical content? I know it's not some genious lyrics but I would appreciate any comments to make any future attempts better :P

I think someone better could help you with that.

I'm not a good lyricist at all.