[Jackson]

Originally posted by TheCheetahwings

I'm doing instrumental 5 Pretty happy with how it's going so far.

Oh cool, that's the one I'm doing too

[Achilles.]

Originally posted by swiftie13

808 is a bop omg

It really is. I wish I was using it. But I'm using "World."

I think I've got verses and a chorus down. Now I need to figure out wtf to do about the pre-chorus and bridge.

[Citrus]

Originally posted by Aciid

fefe citrus and hug better slay

[Tymps.]

https://www.dubtrack.fm/join/platinumhitz lolZ

[swiftie13]

you really are my ecstasy
my real life fantasy
oh yeah

[feelslikeadream]

cause there could be no sadder
sight
to
see
then if we were to miss this
opportunity

[Achilles.]

I came up with a great lyric earlier (the kind PH judges salivate over; my WIP song has none lol), but I don't think it fits any of these instrumentals so oh well.

[Cupid]

Song For The Lonely is the most influential song of all time

[feelslikeadream]

Originally posted by Achilles.

I came up with a great lyric earlier (the kind PH judges salivate over; my WIP song has none lol), but I don't think it fits any of these instrumentals so oh well.

PM it to me and I'll make it fit in my song

[Cupid]

Hope I get that save from the judges, I thought of a really great concept for a song. [inb4 it doesn't fit next rounds challenge]

[swiftie13]

I was so eggcited to mentor y'all this weak but only a couple took advantage and I'm salty, I low key wanted to hear everyone's and I hope you all fail!

[Citrus]

Originally posted by feelslikeadream

PM it to me and I'll make it fit in my song

Fire at my feet again
Vultures all start circlin

[Cupid]

Originally posted by swiftie13

I was so eggcited to mentor y'all this weak but only a couple took advantage and I'm salty, I low key wanted to hear everyone's and I hope you all fail!

You really helped me out so I'm super appreciative! Who was that singing in the msg btw lol.

[Hugamari]

Originally posted by swiftie13

I was so eggcited to mentor y'all this weak but only a couple took advantage and I'm salty, I low key wanted to hear everyone's and I hope you all fail!

I am beyond saving this challenge, so I didn't bother sending to anyone so they could crush my songwriting into the dirt! I'll just take my L thanks.

Also, if you heard what I put to your track you would've been ashamed.

[swiftie13]

That was my tragic voice on the memo I sent you

[swiftie13]

Originally posted by Hugamari

I am beyond saving this challenge, so I didn't bother sending to anyone so they could crush my songwriting into the dirt! I'll just take my L thanks.

Also, if you heard what I put to your track you would've been ashamed.

Swigie is never ashamed of son

[Achilles.]

Originally posted by Vision

Song For The Lonely is the most influential song of all time

True. The Edge of Glory, one of the greatest pop songs of all time, wouldn't exist without it.

Originally posted by feelslikeadream

PM it to me and I'll make it fit in my song

Based on reviews I've read for your past songs, this line I came up with may actually be consistent with things you've been writing.

Originally posted by swiftie13

I was so eggcited to mentor y'all this weak but only a couple took advantage and I'm salty, I low key wanted to hear everyone's and I hope you all fail!

If I send you what I have so far will you please ghost-rewrite it all to make it better?

[swiftie13]

I've ghostwritten before so I don't have a problem with that.

[swiftie13]

Life is one big ****ing fat backstabbing bitch ain't it?

[Achilles.]

Originally posted by swiftie13

Life is one big ****ing fat backstabbing bitch ain't it?

Life is a Katy Perry, yes.