Quote:
Originally posted by Citrus
this elitism from a comedy queen
Don't worry, I can write melodrama just as well 
|
Honestly I can low key see it coming across of elitist

it's odd, because I really wanted to like your song and I know you're a good writer, but I didn't find any of it funny. And, it's not even that I prefer melodramatic songs either. Like, one of the eliminated contestants wrote one but it just wasn't well executed, which was kind of the same feeling I had in regards to your song. If you really do wanna talk it out, you can do it however you like, be it my wall, pms or just in posts like this, but I can't really find many ways to word it other than stating that I just didn't like the premise of the song at all. I'm sure you can appreciate that what you were going for was very niche, and sadly it just didn't work for me. Luckily, you're still in and two judges loved your entry, so you have an opportunity to either a) prove me wrong again in the next round or, b) impress me.