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Tournament: ATRL's Platinum Hit | Season 2 | Episode 9: New Assignment!
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The first FIVE safe are:
 doodledot13
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funnellegs - 7/10
I love the technicality behind your song, the lyrics are very detailed and I really love wordy songs rather than concise ones, solid job!
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ImARudeBoy - 8/10
I really like the concept and how you didn't necessarily rhyme everything. It felt more like a story being told than a song being sung. Good job!
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Hugamari
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funnellegs - 9/10
There's something kinda pop-punky about these which I love, reading it I was humming a melody and the lyrics are just crammed with potential hooks but keep a depth to them, well done!
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ImARudeBoy - 9/10
I have always loved your work and I already can see you are a front runner in this competition. Fantastic work, I can almost hear your hooks on the radio already.
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inspidepariscloset
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funnellegs - 6/10
Not a bad job by a long way, but although repetitive choruses can be great, I'd have liked a little more. Maybe write a full song next time just so I can see where you're going with it.
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ImARudeBoy - 5/10
I don't know, it just didn't click with me. I still like it, but I just don't love it.
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Nait Phoenix
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funnellegs - 8/10
Really good, it sounds kind of fun even though subject-wise it's very serious. Absolutely adore the switch of genders from verse to verse to make it universally relatable.
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ImARudeBoy - 8/10
I really like it! I love the tone and I love the way you wrote it out. Some of the lyrics are kind of cheesy, but I like. 
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Kavish
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funnellegs - 9/10
Love the dark imagery of this, a super negative backdrop but the chorus brings a glimmer of hope which makes it possibly the most uplifting of all the songs submitted. Keep it up!!
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ImARudeBoy - 10/10
An easy 10 for me. You have a way of making me feel like the song was written about me and my own experiences. Fantastic job.
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The next FIVE safe are:
Midnight
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funnellegs - 9/10
Another favourite of mine, I love the words you've used in your song. The message is really simple but the execution is much more complicated, good job.
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ImARudeBoy - 8/10
I saw your work in another thread a while back and I was enamored, and I still am. This is a great piece and I love love love it.
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Danny789
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funnellegs - 7/10
Seems pretty hooky, but I feel like I've read lyrics like that 100x before. It's not bad, it's just not great which in the early stages of a competition like this you need to be to get through because there's so many people in it.
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ImARudeBoy - 5/10
It was good, but it reminded me too much of "Tonight, Tonight" from Hot Chelle Rae. It has a good vibe, but it just feels like a reworked copy of that song.
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kylespearsfenty
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funnellegs - 7/10
These are a great starting point for you, love the rhyming you have in the chorus. I like the book metaphor but something's missing, I don't know what, but if you're around next week just keep doing what you're doing!
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ImARudeBoy - 8/10
Great start! I've never really gotten to know you so I had no idea what kind of lyrics you would send, so I was pleasantly surprised. Even though, there is a lot of good, there was some bad. It seemed rather bland, like I didn't feel it like some of the other entries.
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Swiftie13
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funnellegs - 6/10
This actually sounds like something Taylor Swift would sing, which is no bad thing! It's good but like some of the others just not enough to stand out and make me remember you.
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ImARudeBoy - 5/10
To be honest, it was kind of flat and didn't really catch my attention. While it is still a good song, it just wasn't as good as I was hoping.
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TheSeenScene
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funnellegs - 7/10
A tiny bit juvenile but I think that works well with this song, love the in your face attitude and the word play, anyone that can work "Karma's a bitch just like them" into a song is a good writer in my book!
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ImARudeBoy - 8/10
I like how bright and upbeat it is. It has a little bit of angst, a little bit of cockiness and some sweet revenge. Are you secretly Avril Lavigne?
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Am actually nervous 
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The next TWO safe are:
Jack!
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funnellegs - 6/10
This could be good with just a little reworking, it's simple and cute-sie but needs a bit more of a lyrical punch to stand out. If you're here next week, write something the day you get the task, wait a couple of days, go back and edit it; then submit - it helps!
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ImARudeBoy - 7/10
This isn't your best, my brotha. I still like it, though. It's still a great submission. It was a good read, but I just want something with more OOMPH behind it. I know you're capable of it.
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Mastamind
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funnellegs - 5/10
I don't know if I'm missing something, but although parts of it are uplifting the final statement of "In hell, you'll defeat me" doesn't seem to be uplifting it seems to be more self-deprecating; but ok job.
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ImARudeBoy - 4/10
It felt like a bunch of incomplete sentences and I just didn't follow or relate. Hopefully we get something completely different next round.
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Member Since: 9/15/2012
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Holy crap why do you do this to me 
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Adam in convulsing right now to be honest.
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 omg I'm so happy to be safe! I was so afraid that my lyrics were terrible.
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ATRL Contributor
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Oops, eliminated.
Stupid ATRL lag + stupid me + stupid slow computer. Oh well.
Have fun, y'all! 
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There's still 8 left right
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DRIPDRIP AND ADAM ARE MAKING ME NERVOUS. Would be odd to eliminate 2 people even though half the people didn't even submit 
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Yay, I'm safe. 
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Member Since: 9/12/2012
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WAIT DRIP AND ADAM ARE SAFE! Ty Google translate
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Member Since: 7/15/2012
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What kind of Assassin's Creed hidden message teas?
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