[Temporal]

Originally posted by Ventitonic

You know we actually have an ATRLer who is currently transitioning to female to be with Shawn Mendes, and will ultimate transition back to Male when Shawn comes out.

Girl WHAT That's serving Kevin Loibil/Christina Grimmie teas and I do NOT like it

[Nait Phoenix]

Wow, a lot of the reviews are overall "I'm not sure I understand what you mean". I'll do a blow-by-blow after I get off of work…

[feelslikeadream]

I purposely did that "bed" and "bedroom" line like that I think it sounds good. Shows how this is all a matter of taste (And the closet line is there because the NEXT line is like, "But we don't care about physical spaces like that.")

And no, I haven't done this theme yet I've done like 4 songs for the EP and y'all act like I do it every week.

W. 37th Street: Returning to an old home
Distant: Leaving home behind for something better
Rest: Final home = death
Spaces: Home as emotional rather than physical

[Jackson]

Originally posted by feelslikeadream

I purposely did that "bed" and "bedroom" line like that I think it sounds good. Shows how this is all a matter of taste (And the closet line is there because the NEXT line is like, "But we don't care about physical spaces like that.")

And no, I haven't done this theme yet I've done like 4 songs for the EP and y'all act like I do it every week.

W. 37th Street: Returning to an old home
Distant: Leaving home behind for something better
Rest: Final home = death
Spaces: Home as emotional rather than physical

Which was the one with the grass in central park or whatever?

[feelslikeadream]

Originally posted by Jackson

Which was the one with the grass in central park or whatever?

Wild? That wasn't about "home" at all. I guess mentioning Central Park made you think of it as a New York song or something, but the chorus is just about how we were ~too wild~ to last as a couple and doesn't have any conceptual relationship to the EP.

[Jackson]

OK but where are 8ths supposedly finished reviews?

[Temporal]

Originally posted by Jackson

OK but where are 8ths supposedly finished reviews?

Did he say he was finished?

[Temporal]

Originally posted by feelslikeadream

I purposely did that "bed" and "bedroom" line like that I think it sounds good. Shows how this is all a matter of taste (And the closet line is there because the NEXT line is like, "But we don't care about physical spaces like that.")

And no, I haven't done this theme yet I've done like 4 songs for the EP and y'all act like I do it every week.

W. 37th Street: Returning to an old home
Distant: Leaving home behind for something better
Rest: Final home = death
Spaces: Home as emotional rather than physical

Maybe I was just remembering the initial description for your album that you sent with your intro.

[Ventitonic]

Its too bad the pokemon Go didn't exist (to the masses) when the pokemon challenge was a thing
the possibilities

[Temporal]

Originally posted by Ventitonic

Its too bad the pokemon Go didn't exist (to the masses) when the pokemon challenge was a thing
the possibilities

Ugh, that would've been during my road trip too

[Tylerbv]

im still fff at my song not being 100% slaughtered

some of the entries this round have me curious tho

[Citrus]

I'm in my gracious era but I *do* wanna mention to mystery judge that comedy =/= parody and that's your loss if you believe otherwise!

[Jackson]

Originally posted by Citrus

I'm in my gracious era but I *do* wanna mention to mystery judge that comedy =/= parody and that's your loss if you believe otherwise!

What did we talk about!

[Citrus]

I waited a couple hours to reply to the review but I couldn't find many critiques to reply to! Just a paragraph-ish denunciation of vulgarity mixed with condescension about me not deciding to tackle something ~artsier~

Citrus - Father
First off, I don't know how you thought it was at all a good idea to submit a vulgar rap song as your introduction to a new panel member, but okay. It felt vulgar and contrarian just for the sake of it. The overuse of random and irrelevant references was annoying and unneeded. It is evident by the writing skills that you showed here, that you are capable of actually writing a good song - but this just isn't. You wasted what was possibly a great opportunity to write something completely representative of you and say anything you wanted to say, but instead you decided to write this. I don't really know why. the Free Zone is your chance to show yourself, not to write a parody song. And, if this is really what you want your style to be, then thats cool to, but it's not for me and I can't understand why you'd wanna waste your talent or something like this.

Those two sentences are the only thing that approach critique, the rest is just them going on about how I should've written something else. That's not helpful. Aaaaaaand, again, it's lowkey rude to reduce an original song to parody simply because i
i happen to have a sense of humor and let it extend to my writing. No T no shade no pink lemonade, but this is as unhelpful to me this round as 8th's review was to Moonchild in R1. Hate my song all you'd like, but give me a reason so I can try to appease your bitch ass !

[Cupid]

I legit rushed through my song while waiting to go into surgery mess, so I wouldn't be surprised if I got eliminated.
But looks like I might be somewhere around the bottom, we'll see!

[Citrus]

I had the WEIRDEST dream. Lynx was the new judge and he PM'd me and said "I know you didn't like my review, but maybe we could work something out" and then he was in my house and I made him breakfast.

[Temporal]

Originally posted by Citrus

I had the WEIRDEST dream. Lynx was the new judge and he PM'd me and said "I know you didn't like my review, but maybe we could work something out" and then he was in my house and I made him breakfast.

Well that's one way for you to win I suppose

[keshaspearsxo]

Originally posted by Citrus

I had the WEIRDEST dream. Lynx was the new judge and he PM'd me and said "I know you didn't like my review, but maybe we could work something out" and then he was in my house and I made him breakfast.

oh please no

[feelslikeadream]

Originally posted by Temporal

Maybe I was just remembering the initial description for your album that you sent with your intro.

Yeah. When you said that, I remembered writing that as a potential theme.

[feelslikeadream]

Originally posted by Citrus

I had the WEIRDEST dream. Lynx was the new judge and he PM'd me and said "I know you didn't like my review, but maybe we could work something out" and then he was in my house and I made him breakfast.

I had a dream that I was taking part in some talent show so I recruited like 6 of my female friends to be my backup dancers. I taught them the choreo and everything and they were complaining that it was too hard and they couldn't remember the steps. I was so annoyed and kept making them work harder. Finally, they all quit. I would say it was the WEIRDEST dream but it's basically exactly how a situation like that would play out IRL.