One of my ideas was going to be about a relationship where one person just wants what's best for the other, even if hat meant not being with them...but then I remembered how many damn songs about relationships I had to read as a judge and decided against it.
I had an idea for a song about standing on the edge of a shopping centre carpark and contemplating throwing myself off but I've already written like 4 suicide songs this season so...
HBU?
Well that would certainly be an interesting read
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I got nothing so far.
I don't know whether to step out of my comfort zone or not. I don't even know if I have a comfort zone
I don't know whether to step out of my comfort zone or not. I don't even know if I have a comfort zone
It was an interesting read the first couple of times I did it but there's only SOO many ways I can write about how awful the world's treating me before even I get bored of writing them.
I feel like they'd want us to write something out of the box since we're given a free for all. So for the first time, I'm gonna write something that shows my personality
It was an interesting read the first couple of times I did it but there's only SOO many ways I can write about how awful the world's treating me before even I get bored of writing them.
I feel like they'd want us to write something out of the box since we're given a free for all. So for the first time, I'm gonna write something that shows my personality
I have plenty of them too
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That'll be good Feel free to send it to me when you're done. I want you to slay with a new peak this week
On a serious note, though. I made the edits you suggested to the chorus (both deleting the cringe line and added progression). My song is already better. Wow your impact.
Jackson sent back my song with my title as the subject and the title just repeated like 10 times down the pages
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Originally posted by Hugamari
On a serious note, though. I made the edits you suggested to the chorus (both deleting the cringe line and added progression). My song is already better. Wow your impact.
I like that you still haven't sent me your updated song but Guess since I'm in need to being a ~better critic~ I won't have to expect much
I have my eyes set on a certain somebody to feud with but it all depends on how this round goes
I'm not sending until I changed all (or most) of what you suggested. The bridge is what's killing me, but I really liked your idea and i'm determined to make it work.
Feel free to send it to me when you're done. I want you to slay with a new peak this week 
You, me and one other (I guess) would make a pretty awesome top 3 
Lemme get some inspiration:
Guess since I'm in need to being a ~better critic~ I won't have to expect much 
