[Tylerbv]

11. Tylerbv - 17

I commend you for telling us such a personal story this week. It was touching and I hope you're in a better place now. I do feel like this could have been stronger, especially in the first verse if you had been more lyrical. It just felt very blunt and prosey for me. You can still be straightforward and lyrical. It was borderline well written but overall, the emotion I got from this was phenomenal.

I am in a better place
Yas @ my emotion getting through. Carly Rae hew?

[CountryBritney]

Oh 8th.... Why always so late.

[Achilles.]

Every judge dragging "threw you to the dogs."






Jackson liking my song and then swiftie saying that it "serves Katy Perry."

[Moonchild]

Let me hope I make it through to next week.

[Cupid]

When Achilles gets praised with a "reap what you sow" line, the same line I got dragged for last round.



I see you Oral

[Temporal]

I didn't praise "reap what you sow"

[Jackson]

I keep writing things and then deleting them 2 minutes after posting cause I've triggered you all enough today.

[Cupid]

Originally posted by Jackson

I keep writing things and then deleting them 2 minutes after posting cause I've triggered you all enough today.

I can still see your posts, my feelings are hurt.
And it was Oral not Hor who didn't know what stone was.
But that ain't my fault I can't change my nationality jenny.

[8thPrince]

Originally posted by Achilles.

Jackson liking my song and then swiftie saying that it "serves Katy Perry."

Why are you acting like this is conflicting feedback?

[Jackson]

Originally posted by Vision

I can still see your posts, my feelings are hurt.
And it was Oral not Hor who didn't know what stone was.
But that ain't my fault I can't change my nationality jenny.

O ya forgot about that, but Hor didn't know what it was either

I didn't know what it was either actually but I googled so I didn't look uncultured

[Cupid]

pearched for 8ths surprise release

[Cupid]

Originally posted by Jackson

O ya forgot about that, but Hor didn't know what it was either

I didn't know what it was either actually but I googled so I didn't look uncultured

My next song is going to be about a Gettys Burger employee named Donald Trump licking a dunkirk donut.

[8thPrince]

I'm perched for when I'll start writing these reviews too, I'm having too much fun listening to Death in June

[Cupid]

Originally posted by 8thPrince

I'm perched for when I'll start writing these reviews too, I'm having too much fun listening to Death in June

It's July tho time to move on sis

[MattyTacos]

Originally posted by Jackson

I keep writing things and then deleting them 2 minutes after posting cause I've triggered you all enough today.

Aw, poor thing. Let Andrew comfort you.

[Dylobs]

Look I know if I ~complain~ I might piss a certain ~head-up-own-ass~ judge so I won't say anything to complain about Swiftie13's reviews.

It might also have to do with the fact that I really don't have much to complain about. It's true. My lyrics have not shown a hole () lot of emotion even though I tried to be a bit more open about my life. My lyrics do tend to be a bit thesaurus-y even though I tried to stop doing that this round in particular. I lowkey let myself down this round.

Originally posted by MattyTacos

Ok, so who's leaving PH with me this week? Dylobs? We'll go down together

LoL! Don't try and drag me down with you Matty

Originally posted by swiftie13

still accurate

I detect a bit of shade, I did.

[Achilles.]

Originally posted by 8thPrince

Why are you acting like this is conflicting feedback?

I didn't mean to imply that they were conflicting... Quite the opposite, in fact.

[Dylobs]

I'm glad you liked the dirty laundry line though since a certain Fatty Burritos seemed to think it was incredibly cliche I liked it too!

[Tylerbv]

i want a fatty burrito

[Hugamari]

Well hey y'all lol at least I'm not one of the people Jackson was talking about kii.

Are there any dubtrack rooms popping or are we in a civil war now