ATRL'S BEST VIDEO DIRECTOR
(Round 3)
Eliminations: musicb_/, Evan said that you have to leave because you are always submitting your answers late. sumthintoxic said that at least Evan has an original concept sumthintoxic82, no one voted you. Your safe. Evan, everybody laughed and giggled at your concept. People are also thinking that Lady GaGa is a Daughtry video is stupid as ****.
The eliminated contestant is:
It's YEW
EVAN
child, sorry. But your concepts are funny and stupid at the same time. If the critics saw your concepts, they will die of laughter. Your directing journey ends here. Bye.
*everybody comes to Evan and group hug*
*Evan crying*
*Evan leaves the stage* JM4ever: Stop acting like sissies you bitches and let's start round 3! 1. Jimmy
2. activebeast
3. adr1101
4. [Bask]
5. ashuduff
6. sumthintoxic82
7. eteru
8. Jake (HotNCold)
9. Strangergab
10. musicb_/
Round 3: This is the last video for the easy rounds. If you are the director of........Chris Brown and Keri Hilson's Superhuman, what will it looks like?
Send me your idea for this song!
Deadline: Dec. 9, 2009.
Please don't be ****ing late again x_x
One contestant will be eliminated.
The song starts out with Chris walking along an iceberg. It appears as if he's alone in the arctic. Then, Keri appears, staring at Chris. She sings her verse, while Chris attempting to walk over to her. After the chorus is over, she disappears. Chris opens his eyes, and he's now in the desert, with him singing his verse with Keri hugging him and holding him gently. He tries to kiss her, but disappears yet again. He wakes up again to find himself staring at a New York street. He spots Keri, whos starting to walk across the street while a fast car is coming towards her. This is similar to the actual video, where he saves her from the car. She looks at him, and seems shocked. He stares at her, then kisses her. The basic plot of the video is that you need to catch your love as fast as you can before you let it slip away, if I didnt make that clear.
JM4ever: Sorry for spilling it but lemme tell you guys, almost all of you have the same idea. Having super powers and supernatural scenes. I love it but I find it generic. 3/5
Mystery Judge 1: I give you a 3 just because it's similar to the actual video, I do like the different settings he goes in. I'm glad you chose New York as one of them, you get a thumbs up from me on that.
ashuduff
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The video starts with Chris, Keri in different cities around the world. Chris in New York, Keri in Paris. They are all sitting down on a bench in their respective cities.
Music starts.
We see Chris getting up and he starts walking, mouthing the words.
Keri gets up and starts walking, mouthing the words as well.
We cut into a flashback scene.
Keri and Chris are crying, hugging each other. Keri gets her luggage and walks out of the apartment, and we see Chris getting emotional. Keri takes one last look at the apartment and then gets into a taxi,and we see Chris watching her.
Keri checks in at the airport and we see her boarding the plane. Chris is singing to the camera against a white background, and we see a plane take off. (This is the part "It's not a bird, not a plane, it's my heart"). Keri and Chris sing separately from their respective cities until the song ends.
JM4ever: Wow! It is good and different! But its too short.
Mystery Judge 1: 3, okay concept. It's a bit too short though.
eteru
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The video starts with Chris Brown singing while walking in a quiet street at night after watching a mime show. Keri sings from inside a train which shows a few passengers, among them is a 25 year old girl, who rides the train everyday to visit her dad in jail. They both get off from the last station. Keri lives somewhere near the last train station and she's on her way home.
The mime is shown (a guy about 27 years old) removing his make-up and waiting for his salary from the boss. He is working so hard to save money to buy a ring, for he plans to propose to her girlfriend.
One night, Chris calls Keri (who is on a train again) and invites her to watch the mime show, that they would meet at around 7pm beside the central train station. Keri then decides to get off the train earlier than expected so she could meet with Chris.
On that same train, girl sits on the same spot where she usually sits. The girl suddenly receives a call from his boyfriend, which happens to be the mime. He said that he has to see her and they would meet in the park near the central train station. She agreed to cancel her visit to her dad tonight to meet with his boyfriend.
Keri and the girl both get off on the same station. Keri not going home yet, girl cancelling her visit to her dad.
Chris and Keri meet, and another scene shows the guy and the girlfriend meet as well. Both couples hugged at the same time and also at that same moment, the sky lit up.
The light was from the train they were riding earlier. It apparently got derailed and got off the tracks causing the explosion.
Keri was so relieved that she cried as was and thankful that Chris called and "saved" her life. Similarly, the other girl cried and felt like the mime "saved" her as well, and that the guys were the girls' "superhuman."
Chris and Keri then goes to the mime show.
The guy also invites her girlfriend to his show. On the backstage, the girl was the one who put the guy's make up and after that asked her if she could help him practice his acting for tonight's show, he asks the girl to "act" as his girlfriend in the story and creates a situation where the guy has to propose. What the girl didnt know that what is going to happen is real. He started rehearsing and gets to the proposal part. He kneels, and he stopped like he forgot his next step. After some seconds, while still on his knees, he erases his make up and reaches for the ring inside his pocket. he proposes to the girl. The girl says yes, cries and they hugged each other.
JM4ever: Eteru, you didn't fail this time again! Unique and different from the others. 5/5
Mystery Judge 1: 4 very good concept. very unique and different.
adr1101
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n this video chris brown is being a bad guy.. He is a thief and killer.. Then he is going to keri Hilson's house, and in that house, there only keri alone.. When chris break and enter the house then he start to steal things from the house, but keri look what he did, and try to scream and run, but chris is faster and catch her.. He cover her mouth and put her at on chair then tie her.. But before he ties her, she pick chris gun behind his shirt and shot his leg.. He collapse.. Keri shocked what her done before, and chris is feels a lot of pain.. Keri wants to pick up the telephone to dial 911, but when he scream in pain, she didn't call and immediately to chris and help him up, she pick up things to recover his blood.. Then she take care of him.. Looks like everyday they more closer each other.. Keri take care of chris so much, she give him food, she take care of his blood, and many more.. in one night, they sleep together and share a kiss.. They become a really beautiful couple.. Then in one day, she goes out from house and want to buy a meal form both of them, and she buy some kind of thing to chris.. She seems happy when she walks, then she see on tv in a shop, but she really surprised, because the news tell that police already found and killed a serial killer, and the photo is chris and the setting is her house.. She run as fas as she can, and after she came home, only some polices there, she going inside the house and didn't see chris there, but she looked a piece of paper there, when she read she cries a lot.. In the ending it shows the paper.. It says
"Keri, you changed my whole life, don't know what you're doing to me in your love, I"m feeling all superhuman you did that to me, a super human heart beats In me, nothing can stop here with you superhuman
Love u
Chris"
JM4ever: I said music video, not movie. The ending is fine though. 2.5/5 P.S, I think you have a potential for being a good director. But I think in your concepts, there is wrong or lacking. Just take some advices from other people who is good at brainstorming.
Mystery Judge 1: 2, Hmmm I don't know about this one.
activebeast
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The video starts with Chris visiting her girlfriend at her condominium. As Chris entered his GF's room, he saw her sleeping with another guy.
(Music starts) Chris walks out of his girlfriend's pad, crying. He goes straight to the elevator. (Keri is in the elevator, too). Chris tries to hold back his tears but he can't. Keri offers her hanky to Chris. Both parted ways after reaching the ground floor.
Next scene deals with several coincidences where Keri and Chris meet. Like, bumping to each other at the mall, watching movie unknowing that they sit beside each other, etc.
Then, they saw each each other again in the train. They were seated opposite each other. Chris grabbed his bag and handed Keri the hanky she lent him. Then, the talk started. They were exchanging stories, etc. The storyline progresses to their constant meetings, first date, sweet moments.
Chris then realizes that Keri is the one for him. Keri is the girl he wants to marry. So he set up a date with Keri at a cozy restaurant. Chris was walking his way to the restaurant when he saw two guys harassing a girl. Chris helped the girl. He fought with the guys but one of them has a knife. Chris was stabbed. The ambulance came. The paramedics were preparing Chris' transfer to the ambulance. Keri was also walking her way to the restaurant. She noticed the fuss going on. She went to it and saw Chris being transferred to the ambulance. Keri joined Chris in the ambulance.
Chris was fighting for life inside the ambulance but suddenly Chris seemed not responding. Keri hugged him and cried. The scene fades out to black and eventually fades in with Chris lying on the hospital bed with Keri hugging her. It turned out that a miracle happened. Chris was revived.
JM4ever: It's good but I think there is something wrong... 3/5
Mystery Judge 1: 4, very dramatic video concept. I like it
Strangergab
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The first scene begins at night all lit up, then Chris is in a empty alley, where there is only darkness, begins to sing and to one side of that alley is a beautiful hotel where in the last room is Keri, and starts singing, the will remember how happy he was with that someone special and happy moments that happened in another scene after Chris goes to the hotel and is located on the rooftop while Keri, this hotel goes down the elevator, and being within you drop the phone and she reminds her how she met that special someone your superhuman, Chris sings on the roof while viewing scenes of Keri reaching the hotel lobby, when leaving the hotel will see an explosion on the roof and runs to see that step, then Chris is still on the roof when you try to quit there job is based in the door to Keri, and both remember that they are both one and the other a kind, then keep track of the song, and kiss and ends with the scene that they see that disappears the explosion and fire that the remoteness of this dark city, and hearing him and the sound of an airplane on them.
JM4ever: Good concept. 3/5
Mystery Judge 1: 3 , you have an interesting concept. I like the setting.
JimMyxcoRe
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It starts with a cold rainy day, the clouds are dark and itīs lightening.
Chris is walking down the street wearing a raincoat and holding a black umbrella, he enters to a telephone booth, beside him thereīs another telephone booth and Keriīs inside talking. Chris never notice that Keri is next to him and starts to shine when the chorus starts, Keriīs watching him amazed and the phone drops from hands then rain stops.
Chris left the telephone booth and contines walking, Keri starts follow him, then Chris stops in front a slippery road, a car with a family inside is gonna crash with a trailer and when the chorus starts Chris open the arms and time stops, everyting turns in black and white and rewinds the time, everything goes back in slow motion except Chris and Keri, she is very amazed and covers her mouth with the hands, the floor is now dry and nothing happens. A little girl in the back of the car says goodbye and He smiles. The bridge starts and Chris finally notice that Keri is watching him but she is a little bit ashamed, then another scene starts with Chris and Keri singing in an alley and itīs lightening HAAARD! an amazing effect and theyīre together singing and dancing, then we came back to the scene with the umbrellas outside the "slippery road", Chris smiles and Keri close her eyes for a moment, he she opens her eyes Chris is not there and the sky is now totally clear. She smiles and go home.
JM4ever: I love it! Very good. 4/5
Mystery Judge 1: 4 I like the "back in time" concept. I always like those in videos.
[Bask
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It's gonna be a over 5mins video with a storyline which is very simple - Xmen wanna become human =))
The 1minute show their childhood (background music is the intro which is replay over and over until their childhood end) : Chris Brown have a super power which is crash everything he touch. When he was born, his mother died.At the age of 10, he break a container which is going to hit him and he realize who the hell he is, he runaway...Keri have a wonderful power which is rebirth everything she touch. She help he pets, her plants, etc and even her dead mother... but this wonderful power is also a curse when her pets decompose after 2 weeks and her mother become a moving skeleton [OMFG, this gonna be a scary movie =))] She scream when she see her pets, her mother ... and then she runaway, through the forest.
The main story with Chris and Keri voices start here :
They're walking on the street, see each others and in love at the 1st sight
The other scence show they are in each others room, sing thier part. Chris remember Keri's smile when see saw him, he touch a cup with his hand, it's crash. his face show how he afraid of his power. Keri singing when she taking bath, she smile, remember Chris's face, and then her skeleton cat (she rebirthed him) appear, she's haunted by her power, stop smile
The chorus is Chris and Keri are singin in a dark room and they're hinder by a giant glass. They see each others but they cant touch.
The 2nd verse show how they reduce their stresses : Chris running in a park when Keri jogging They see each others again, smile [LOL]
It's gonna be attack break : The Hunter which is an anti Xmen team of the goverment attack them, try to jail or even kill them. They attack our 2 characters, Chris and Keri fight back. It's took 1 minute for this scence
We back to chorus when Chris help Keri when she's slipped by a Hunter.They're singing and fighting at the same time. Hunters divide them and attack with two others superhuman
After Chris and Keri kill/knoched out their rivals, they walk to each others, touch their hands. When they touch each others hands without glove, a powerful explorer started like a bomb, the park was a battle field now become a empty place :-s They running away and the vidoe fade away ...
JM4ever: That's too much/ 3/5
Mystery Judge 1: 2, that's a bit too much. This is more like a movie than a music video.
sumthintoxic82
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So the video starts off in an Operation room, with the camera zooming over a half dressed Chris Brown on the operation table, with robot parts revealing on him. He stars singing on the table, just lookin up. Then Keri Hilson Hilson fixing him up. As the chorus begins, Chris finally moves and touches Keri, making all the lights flicker then go out in the room. As the 2nd verse starts, the doctors are testing out Chris' super abilities, all the while Keri looks at him with affection. When they turn off Chris, a group of men come crashing in and take Keri, as she screams for Chris, then zooms to Chris waking up and breaking out of his cell. As the bridge of the song starts, Chris is coming toward the men while then are shooting heim, but the bullets fly off him. He then fights the men,knocking them all down, but one of them pushes Keri of the building, he them jumps for keri, and the are singing the Final chorus while falling from the building. then Chris' begins to fly with his powers and flies away with Keri.
JM4ever: I think it's a good one. 3/5
Mystery Judge 1: 1, LMAO! robot Chris? That's a bit weird for a video concept.
music_b/, you have lot of time fighting the anti-Britney but you can't waste your 5 minutes sending your concept? I already messaged you but still you did not send your concept. yes, no one is eliminated but him. Goodbye. Round 4 starts tomorrow or Thursday. Maybe I'll update earlier since the Xmas break is coming. Oh && yeah, noticed that Mystery Judge #1 and me are the only one who judged? The other MJ said that he is busy. Oh and yeah, it's Matty. Thank you Matty for being a jusge in 1 round .
What did I tell you, bitches? I should not have been eliminated before someone who's not even trying every round. Evan's right again! music_b/ should've been eliminated last round instead of moi.
And BTW: It's called a cameo people, it wasn't a joke.
You always chose songs that I dont like 
HotNCold
Eteru, you didn't fail this time again! Unique and different from the others. 5/5
The ending is fine though. 2.5/5 P.S, I think you have a potential for being a good director. But I think in your concepts, there is wrong or lacking. Just take some advices from other people who is good at brainstorming.
I already messaged you but still you did not send your concept. yes, no one is eliminated but him. Goodbye. Round 4 starts tomorrow or Thursday. Maybe I'll update earlier since the Xmas break is coming. Oh && yeah, noticed that Mystery Judge #1 and me are the only one who judged? The other MJ said that he is busy. Oh and yeah, it's Matty. Thank you Matty for being a jusge in 1 round 
music_b/ should've been eliminated last round instead of moi. 