Well, it definitely could be a hit with this chorus and sound. The vocals are obviously brilliant and the G#5 at the end of the bridge was great.
Not sure I like it though. They clearly tried to be creative, but to me it just sounds like they pasted different songs into one. The verses sound like Jessie J - Price Tag, AKA the most generic and uninspired pop song from a big-voiced diva in history. She also vocally sounds like Jessie, which to me is an improvement on her pretty immature regular tone, but her style of enunciating in this is grating. Obviously the pre-chorus is almost the identical scale to Unthinkable (I'm Ready). Even the chorus gives me "don't nobody kiss it like you" teas from Good Kisser.