Yass I'm glad you liked it and caught the references! I didn't want it to be too simple since I felt like that would be a regression. You can tell which parts I wrote parts first since they're more simplistic. All in all, I feel like I did a good job
Write a Hit (Before You Quit)
Chasing after deadlines I have writer's block, my mind has stopped
Googling slanted rhymes and meter, I'm so far away from the top
I'm in dubtrack playing dubstep for the gays, time's nearly up
Pretending I don't have to read the reviews from ClarksonSlays
Like I give a fuck
When I get eliminated I will see you all in hell
I will rise like Nait Phoenix from the ashes of Pure Heroin
With my broken wings, I can't be shot down by someone else
I'm falling down the Hitlist underneath Hugamari
But if you're not a critic yourself, how can you critique?
Stay pressed bitch!
You gotta write a hit, write, write a hit
Before you try to quit, you gotta be swift
You try to sing your song, everything is wrong
You try to ride that flow, flowing in slow-mo
You gotta write a hit, write, write a hit
You gotta write a hit before you quit
Platinum hit!
Stay pressed bitch
Slayed round one, flopped round two
Got no room for me in round three
In round four I'm no more
I'm knock, knock, knocking on heaven's door
Met my demise past round five
Now it's round six, I can still win
Came back with a lethal bark
And a bite that leaves scratch marks
This is Platinum Hit
Quote:
Originally posted by Truffle.
This isn't funny.
I told you guys I was at 8 WP's.
I'm dead serious. |
Mess, that was your first mistake
I judge on talent alone
