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Discussion: ATRL Songwriter's Thread | Jacktrus gain dual #1
Member Since: 10/18/2010
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Originally posted by Yourfavefan
I wrote lyrics to make my own verse for crazy kids...
it's not the best, but I just wanted to be quick...
I think I would have been able to do better if I actually put effort to it..
I don't know if I want to post the lyrics.. it shades an artist, and I don't want a WP
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We're classy in this songwriter's thread. We wouldn't WP you if it was the thickest shade since the Nekci Menij show; in fact, we might actually pat you on the back for it...
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Member Since: 3/7/2011
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Originally posted by Nait Phoenix
We're classy in this songwriter's thread. We wouldn't WP you if it was the thickest shade since the Nekci Menij show; in fact, we might actually pat you on the back for it...
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It's nothing genius though... it was more about creating the verse vocally..
and you never know.. monsters can be sensitive and defensive.. which is why I am reluctant
https://soundcloud.com/yourfavefan/c...avefan-version
Quote:
Hello, wherever you are
Are you dancing on the dance floor or drinking by the bar?
Tonight we do it big, and shine like stars
And we don't give a **** 'cause that's just who we are
And we are, we are, we are, we are, we are
The crazy kids, them crazy, them crazy kids
And we are, we are, we are, we are, we are
The crazy kids, we are the
We are the crazy people
I see ya on ATRL, showing your fave love
Be Shading bitches, don’t be dumb, like remixed,
Suck that ****, licking anus,
That’s gaga’s penus
He’s not that famous
Ya’ll monsters keep it quiet
Keep it still like mothers hip
The king, he wanting praising
That love for him is staying
Kiss N Tell he hating
He stans for flops, I say who he
Wherever be in chorus
You are the king, ***** uss
N Tell, that song bore uss
We only want this choruuussss
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basically wanted to shade monsters.. and kiss n tell (the member and song) .. and then praise my favorite song wherever you are..
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Member Since: 10/18/2010
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Quote:
Originally posted by Yourfavefan
It's nothing genius though... it was more about creating the verse vocally..
and you never know.. monsters can be sensitive and defensive.. which is why I am reluctant
https://soundcloud.com/yourfavefan/c...avefan-version
basically wanted to shade monsters.. and kiss n tell (the member and song) .. and then praise my favorite song wherever you are..
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1. That was so good. I love it. Simple yes, but because it's simple it's perfect.
2. Your voice for that rap, I absolutely love!
3. YOU LOVE "WHEREVER YOU ARE" TOO!!!
I THOUGHT I WAS THE ONLY ONE!!!
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Member Since: 3/7/2011
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Quote:
Originally posted by Nait Phoenix
1. That was so good. I love it. Simple yes, but because it's simple it's perfect.
2. Your voice for that rap, I absolutely love!
3. YOU LOVE "WHEREVER YOU ARE" TOO!!!
I THOUGHT I WAS THE ONLY ONE!!!
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Thanks sis.. you are too kind
and lol.. I didn't expect people to like it vocally.. but I haven't gotten bashed for my voice yet shockingly
and no you are not.. wherever you are is like the best song EVAH!
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Member Since: 5/6/2011
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Genetic Fail - Boss
Chorus:
I want to die on a cross
Send this message across
Just like my boss
Just like my boss
I will be Satan's loss
Nail my hands to a cross
Just like my boss
Just like my boss
I have only written the chorus. And no it's not a Gospel song. It's gonna mock devoted Christians. You'll see when I write the verses.
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Quote:
Originally posted by genetic fail
Genetic Fail - Boss
Chorus:
I want to die on a cross
Send this message across
Just like my boss
Just like my boss
I will be Satan's loss
Nail my hands to a cross
Just like my boss
Just like my boss
I have only written the chorus. And no it's not a Gospel song. It's gonna mock devoted Christians. You'll see when I write the verses.
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Wow, that's really... something... I'm kinda afraid to see the verses (but mostly intrigued!)
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Member Since: 9/12/2012
Posts: 26,389
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What type of DETERMINATION? This thread just won't die.
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ATRL Contributor
Member Since: 8/31/2012
Posts: 12,510
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Quote:
Originally posted by Hugamari
What type of DETERMINATION? This thread just won't die.
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Member Since: 10/18/2010
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Quote:
Originally posted by Hugamari
What type of DETERMINATION? This thread just won't die.
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I won't let it.
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Member Since: 9/12/2012
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Well let me just contribute.
Haven
[Intro]
When the rain comes down
And thunder comes roarin’ in
It will be alright
There’s a haven to confide
[V1]
Like the gentle breeze flowing through my hair
I feel so free whenever you are there
I could get lost for hours in your eyes
It’s the sense of magic - blue just like the skies
It’s such a blessing to know you are mine
It’s hard to find a love so divine
When the days get bleak, you’ll be right at my side
If I’m feelin’ weak, I’ll have my wave to ride
[H]
It may be cold in the storm
But I’ve never felt so warm
Through the rain and the hail
Together we’ll prevail
It may be dark in the night
But I have seen the light
I won’t be scared of the dark
When I’m inside your arms
[C]
When the rain comes down
And thunder comes roarin’ in
All the walls come down
And the tears come pourin’ in
It will be alright
There’s a haven to confide
Bring it all to the light
‘Cause you can’t keep it inside
[V2]
It’s such a rarity to see through the fog
To have clarity and reach through the bog
And still be standing, that’s how I know we’re strong
For all who doubt us, we can prove them wrong
It’s so amazing; it’s like a fantasy
I can tell it’s real when you look at me
When the days get bleak, you’ll be right at my side
If I’m feelin’ weak, I’ll have my wave to ride
[H]
It may be cold in the storm
But I’ve never felt so warm
Through the rain and the hail
Together we’ll prevail
It may be dark in the night
But I have seen the light
I won’t be scared of the dark
When I’m inside your arms
[C]
When the rain comes down
And thunder comes roarin’ in
All the walls come down
And the tears come pourin’ in
It will be alright
There’s a haven to confide
Bring it all to the light
‘Cause you can’t keep it inside
[B]
Now you got to me - never let me go
Because I need you to know
When rain comes down, and thunder comes roarin’ in
I will still be yours; you’ll be mine til the end
[C]
When the rain comes down
And thunder comes roarin’ in
All the walls come down
And the tears come pourin’ in
It will be alright
There’s a haven to confide
Bring it all to the light
‘Cause you can’t keep it inside
When the rain comes down
And thunder comes roarin’ in
It will be alright
There’s a haven to confide
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ATRL Contributor
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Jigglypuff ha title track slaying
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Quote:
Originally posted by Hugamari
Well let me just contribute.
Haven
[Intro]
When the rain comes down
And thunder comes roarin’ in
It will be alright
There’s a haven to confide
[V1]
Like the gentle breeze flowing through my hair
I feel so free whenever you are there
I could get lost for hours in your eyes
It’s the sense of magic - blue just like the skies
It’s such a blessing to know you are mine
It’s hard to find a love so divine
When the days get bleak, you’ll be right at my side
If I’m feelin’ weak, I’ll have my wave to ride
[H]
It may be cold in the storm
But I’ve never felt so warm
Through the rain and the hail
Together we’ll prevail
It may be dark in the night
But I have seen the light
I won’t be scared of the dark
When I’m inside your arms
[C]
When the rain comes down
And thunder comes roarin’ in
All the walls come down
And the tears come pourin’ in
It will be alright
There’s a haven to confide
Bring it all to the light
‘Cause you can’t keep it inside
[V2]
It’s such a rarity to see through the fog
To have clarity and reach through the bog
And still be standing, that’s how I know we’re strong
For all who doubt us, we can prove them wrong
It’s so amazing; it’s like a fantasy
I can tell it’s real when you look at me
When the days get bleak, you’ll be right at my side
If I’m feelin’ weak, I’ll have my wave to ride
[H]
It may be cold in the storm
But I’ve never felt so warm
Through the rain and the hail
Together we’ll prevail
It may be dark in the night
But I have seen the light
I won’t be scared of the dark
When I’m inside your arms
[C]
When the rain comes down
And thunder comes roarin’ in
All the walls come down
And the tears come pourin’ in
It will be alright
There’s a haven to confide
Bring it all to the light
‘Cause you can’t keep it inside
[B]
Now you got to me - never let me go
Because I need you to know
When rain comes down, and thunder comes roarin’ in
I will still be yours; you’ll be mine til the end
[C]
When the rain comes down
And thunder comes roarin’ in
All the walls come down
And the tears come pourin’ in
It will be alright
There’s a haven to confide
Bring it all to the light
‘Cause you can’t keep it inside
When the rain comes down
And thunder comes roarin’ in
It will be alright
There’s a haven to confide
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Ooh, me likey! It's such a chivalrous love song! You and me are kind of in that same bane...
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Member Since: 9/15/2012
Posts: 22,487
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Quote:
Originally posted by genetic fail
Genetic Fail - Boss
Chorus:
I want to die on a cross
Send this message across
Just like my boss
Just like my boss
I will be Satan's loss
Nail my hands to a cross
Just like my boss
Just like my boss
I have only written the chorus. And no it's not a Gospel song. It's gonna mock devoted Christians. You'll see when I write the verses.
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Member Since: 5/6/2011
Posts: 26,891
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Originally written for Create A Label
Playhouse - Paris Hilton
Ooh ahh lalala
Ooh ahh lalala
I like your face in magazines
But I like it better down my crotch
I like the way you work it down the runway but
I like it better when you work it down my butterscotch
Spoken Pre-Chorus:
Strike a pose
Lose those clothes
That's the way high fashion sex goes
Chorus:
Get inside my playhouse
You can lose those clothes now
Make me wanna say 'Wow'
Ooh ah lalala
Get inside my playhouse
I really wanna get down
Make me wanna say 'Ouch'
Ooh ah lalala
I like your designer jeans
But I like it better on the floor
I like how these leather whips make your skin so sore
But I like it better when you ask for more
Spoken Pre-Chorus
Chorus
Spoken Bridge:
Sex
Is like a photoshoot
You do your best 'cause the cameras are rolling
Work it 'cause the lights are flashing
Chorus x2
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Member Since: 3/25/2012
Posts: 5,390
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New song: Ruins of Us
Just imagine a rockier & edgier version of DNA by Little Mix.
Ruins of Us
Never thought it would be this catastrophic
This explosion was almost apocalyptic
Let it all fall down and crumble
Our hearts are filled with gravel and rubble
Towers of our past
Burning down to ash
Covering the land
Kings and queens overthrown
The tragedies I’ve known
I should have seen it coming
When you see stars collide
And kill for the thrill of the ride
But this didn’t go as planned
We fell in love, couldn’t help it
When the planets align
And all the demons rise
Your solution was to break my heart
But all we ended up with were the ruins of us
Ancient Greece wasn’t as big as us
The destruction left our world at dust
So starry eyed
Don’t ask me why
I just know that this the end of you and I
Thrones on fire
Burning sapphire
What’s royalty when you’re dead?
When you see stars collide
And kill for the thrill of the ride
But this didn’t go as you planned
We fell in love, couldn’t help it
When the planets align
And all the demons rise
Your solution was to break my heart
But all we ended up with were the ruins of us
The ruins of us
(Guitar solo)
Dark as the night
Bright as the sun
Double edged sword
Struck me tonight
Caught my breath
With the kiss of death
Pressure is risin’
Breakings the diamonds
The ruins of us
It was such a rush
We turned up so weak
After we were so tough
Never thought it would be this catastrophic
This explosion was almost apocalyptic
When you see stars collide
And kill for the thrill of the ride
But this didn’t go as you planned
We fell in love, couldn’t help it
When the planets align
And the demons rise
Your solution was to break a heart
But all we ended up with were the ruins of us
Ruins of us
Yeah!
With the ruins
When you see stars collide
And kill for the thrill of the ride
When the planets align
With the ruins of us
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Member Since: 3/25/2012
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When does ATRL's Platinum Hit start again??
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Posts: 14,053
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What was the reason for committing treason,
Hey, it ain't my fault you basic b*tches out of season,
Get rid of ya hoes through excretion,
Make you eat my kids through my semen,
Can't handle my bars because you'll barf, sickening,
Put you in the elderly house, ain't visiting,
You are so f*cking stiffening, my c*ck's soft, stop your bickering
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Member Since: 10/18/2010
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Quote:
Originally posted by JadGhamloush96
When does ATRL's Platinum Hit start again??
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Actually, it's supposedly still going on... I think...
I'm not sure, just stopped at top three...
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Member Since: 9/1/2012
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Talking bout PlatHit, I can't wait to participate in the 3rd season
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Lately I've been so uninspired
I start something but don't seem to be able to finish it
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