No, it lacks a hook for me. I listened to all I need to. The pre-chorus nor opening lines of the chorus does anything for me in the way that CMM and other catchy songs do.
It's like everything you say is a sweet revelation
All I wanna do is get into your head
Yeah we could stay alone, you and me, and this temptation
Sipping on your lips, hanging on by thread, baby
Reading this without music... what kind of flawless poetry