Any of the ATRL songwriters interested in writing for an EDM track?
I'm currently producing it, and i need some catchy lyrics.
I have a girl who sings and dances and she's going to record it and we'll shoot a music video for it.
I'd love to
here are some EDM Tracks I wrote n Sang
when I first wrote the song it was ''I can see you dancin over there''
but when I showed an unfinished snippet to one of my friends she understood ''I can see you dancin on my Di**'' so I changed it into that
Anyway here's a song I wrote called Concrete Jungles. Just think of Get Lucky y Daft Punk mixed with Only Wanna Dance With You by Ke$ha
Dark alleys, dogs howling
Criminals hiding in the shade
Wide windows, tall buildings
Immortal cities are always awake
Electrocuted jungle vines
Guess Tarzan won’t be here tonight
Lights flashin’ 24/7
And to the music, we are jammin’
Tonight, it’s all about the concrete jungles
Beirut to Tokyo, London to LA
Tonight, it’s all about the concrete jungles
We wanna have some fun, what do you say?
Let’s get lost in the streets of Paris
Sorry Madrid, Barcelona’s waitin’
Meet a random girl named Janis
Run wild, fears are fadin’
Let’s get lost in the streets of Paris
Sorry Madrid, Barcelona’s waitin’
Meet a random girl named Janis
Run wild, fears are fadin’
Music pumping, parties going
Sorry I just can’t handle it
Cars roaring, Drag racing
Baby, I know I’m the fastest
Here’s to all the animals
Living in the jungles
Working 9 to 5
You’re in for a ride
Tonight, it’s all about the concrete jungles
Beirut to Tokyo, London to LA
Tonight, it’s all about the concrete jungles
We wanna have some fun, what do you say?
Let’s get lost in the streets of Paris
Sorry Madrid, Barcelona’s waitin’
Meet a random girl named Janis
Run wild, fears are fadin’
Let’s get lost in the streets of Paris
Sorry Madrid, Barcelona’s waitin’
Meet a random girl named Janis
Run wild, fears are fadin’
I found a way back home
A cozy apartment on the 5th floor
It may not be much
But it’s everything to me
In this concrete jungle
Tonight, it’s all about the concrete jungles
Beirut to Tokyo, London to LA
Tonight, it’s all about the concrete jungles
We wanna have some fun, what do you say?
Let’s get lost in the streets of Paris
Sorry Madrid, Barcelona’s waitin’
Meet a random girl named Janis
Run wild, fears are fadin’
Let’s get lost in the streets of Paris
Sorry Madrid, Barcelona’s waitin’
Meet a random girl named Janis
Run wild, fears are fadin’
I'm trying out a new song. It's a little more raw, a little less thought through... "Don't Ask Me to Stay"
First Verse:
I feel we’re going through the paces
The same old songs, the same old places
It seems like nothing ever changes
Tell me that I wrong again
Why can’t a fire just ignite?
A different spark for every night
Even when we start to fight
It feels like no one’s gonna win
Pre-Chorus:
Because love doesn’t even breathe anymore
Doesn’t even seem like a chore
What to do about it
I feel like we’re losing control and abusing this way
Make me feel like this is the time
Make me feel like it’s what is right
And if you cannot
I’ll call up a taxi and please don’t you ask me to stay
So, I was bored in school, so I decided to write my own version of the title track to Rihanna's "Talk That Talk". It does not have the same concept as the original, nor the same sound. I just liked the title and wanted to use it in the song.
Talk That Talk
[V1]
There used to be a time when everyone would doubt me
Always ran they mouth, didn’t know a thing about me
They said I wouldn’t make it
Said I was mistaken
[H]
But now, here I am
In command
And I stand
On my own feet
I got my haters
Imitators
And these people
Acting like they know me
They can keep hatin’
Keep imitatin’
They can keep up the act
Cause while they do that
[C]
I’ma talk that talk cause I’m up at the top now
Walk that walk I ain’t ever gonna stop now
When you fly as I, you ain’t ever gonna come down
I’ma rock it up, lemme give you all the run down
Talk that talk
Walk that walk
I am never gonna come down
Lemme give you all the run down
[V2]
There used to be a time when I only had a dream
All I wanted in this world was to be able to sing
And I’d never give up tryin’
‘til I got this dream of mine
[H]
But now, here I am
In command
And I stand
On my own feet
I got my haters
Imitators
And these people
Acting like they know me
They can keep hatin’
Keep imitatin’
They can keep up the act
Cause while they do that
[C]
I’ma talk that talk cause I’m up at the top now
Walk that walk I ain’t ever gonna stop now
When you fly as I, you ain’t ever gonna come down
I’ma rock it up, lemme give you all the run down
Talk that talk
Walk that walk
I am never gonna come down
Lemme give you all the run down
[B]
And for everyone who wants to doubt me now,
How’s it feel down on the ground
While I’m up in the clouds?
You can keep talkin’
But ‘til you get to walkin’
I ain’t ever stoppin’
I’ma, I’ma keep on rockin’
[C]
I’ma talk that talk cause I’m up at the top now
Walk that walk I ain’t ever gonna stop now
When you fly as I, you ain’t ever gonna come down
I’ma rock it up, lemme give you all the run down
Talk that talk
Walk that walk
I am never gonna come down
Lemme give you all the run down
I’ma talk that talk cause I’m up at the top now
Walk that walk I ain’t ever gonna stop now
When you fly as I, you ain’t ever gonna come down
I’ma rock it up, lemme give you all the run down
Talk that talk
Walk that walk
I am never gonna come down
Lemme give you all the run down
Anyway here's a song I wrote called Concrete Jungles. Just think of Get Lucky y Daft Punk mixed with Only Wanna Dance With You by Ke$ha
Dark alleys, dogs howling
Criminals hiding in the shade
Wide windows, tall buildings
Immortal cities are always awake
Electrocuted jungle vines
Guess Tarzan won’t be here tonight
Lights flashin’ 24/7
And to the music, we are jammin’
Tonight, it’s all about the concrete jungles
Beirut to Tokyo, London to LA
Tonight, it’s all about the concrete jungles
We wanna have some fun, what do you say?
Let’s get lost in the streets of Paris
Sorry Madrid, Barcelona’s waitin’
Meet a random girl named Janis
Run wild, fears are fadin’
Let’s get lost in the streets of Paris
Sorry Madrid, Barcelona’s waitin’
Meet a random girl named Janis
Run wild, fears are fadin’
Music pumping, parties going
Sorry I just can’t handle it
Cars roaring, Drag racing
Baby, I know I’m the fastest
Here’s to all the animals
Living in the jungles
Working 9 to 5
You’re in for a ride
Tonight, it’s all about the concrete jungles
Beirut to Tokyo, London to LA
Tonight, it’s all about the concrete jungles
We wanna have some fun, what do you say?
Let’s get lost in the streets of Paris
Sorry Madrid, Barcelona’s waitin’
Meet a random girl named Janis
Run wild, fears are fadin’
Let’s get lost in the streets of Paris
Sorry Madrid, Barcelona’s waitin’
Meet a random girl named Janis
Run wild, fears are fadin’
I found a way back home
A cozy apartment on the 5th floor
It may not be much
But it’s everything to me
In this concrete jungle
Tonight, it’s all about the concrete jungles
Beirut to Tokyo, London to LA
Tonight, it’s all about the concrete jungles
We wanna have some fun, what do you say?
Let’s get lost in the streets of Paris
Sorry Madrid, Barcelona’s waitin’
Meet a random girl named Janis
Run wild, fears are fadin’
Let’s get lost in the streets of Paris
Sorry Madrid, Barcelona’s waitin’
Meet a random girl named Janis
Run wild, fears are fadin’
Thank you for everyone who like my song Concrete Jungles. It really makes me happy
This is another song called Panic Room. It's sorta a sad piano ballad about the sudden shock of rejection.
Panic Room
Pictures of myself plastered all around the world
Lost my sanity and I lost the girl
Fighting of a breath, closing in on my chest
All these secrets are weighing on my back
Can’t help but look at the mirror
Seeing all my ugly holes and the bruise
If I was someone else and I met myself
I would probably laugh too
I wanna cry, I wanna hide
Away from people’s eyes
So they don’t see me when I’m weak
I wanna cry, I wanna hide
Away from people’s eyes
I wish I could just disappear
If only I had my own panic room
No one would see me when I’m gloom
Lock myself up and forget the pain
I fell down because I was so afraid
If trouble had a name, it would be yours
If life is just a game, I would’ve lost on the first floor
And I would’ve used up all my lives
Trying to save something that wasn’t even mine
Oh, if I was someone else and I met myself
I would probably laugh too
I wanna cry, I wanna hide
Away from people’s eyes
So they don’t see me when I’m weak
I wanna cry, I wanna hide
Away from people’s eyes
I wish I could just disappear
If only I had my own panic room
No one would see me when I’m gloom
Lock myself up and forget the pain
Send them far away on a crashing plane
I wish time would stand still for a while
I would stand and watch as everything dies
Because all good things come to an end
You might say forever
But that just might turn into a never
Because minds change like clothes
I wanna cry, I wanna hide
Away from people’s eyes
So they don’t see me when I’m weak
I wanna cry, I wanna hide
Away from people’s eyes
I wish I could just disappear
I wanna cry, I wanna hide
Away from people’s eyes
So they don’t see me when I’m weak
I wanna cry, I wanna hide
Away from people’s eyes
I wish I could just disappear
If only I had my own panic room
No one would see me when I’m gloom
Lock myself up and forget the pain
Send them far away on a crashing plane
ihank*everyone who like my song Concrete Jungles. It really makes me happy
This is another song called Panic Room. It's sorta a sad piano ballad about the sudden shock of rejection.
Panic Room
Pictures of myself plastered all around the world
Lost my sanity and I lost the girl
Fighting of a breath, closing in on my chest
All these secrets are weighing on my back
Can’t help but look at the mirror
Seeing all my ugly holes and the bruise
If I was someone else and I met myself
I would probably laugh too
I wanna cry, I wanna hide
Away from people’s eyes
So they don’t see me when I’m weak
I wanna cry, I wanna hide
Away from people’s eyes
I wish I could just disappear
If only I had my own panic room
No one would see me when I’m gloom
Lock myself up and forget the pain
I fell down because I was so afraid
If trouble had a name, it would be yours
If life is just a game, I would’ve lost on the first floor
And I would’ve used up all my lives
Trying to save something that wasn’t even mine
Oh, if I was someone else and I met myself
I would probably laugh too
I wanna cry, I wanna hide
Away from people’s eyes
So they don’t see me when I’m weak
I wanna cry, I wanna hide
Away from people’s eyes
I wish I could just disappear
If only I had my own panic room
No one would see me when I’m gloom
Lock myself up and forget the pain
Send them far away on a crashing plane
I wish time would stand still for a while
I would stand and watch as everything dies
Because all good things come to an end
You might say forever
But that just might turn into a never
Because minds change like clothes
I wanna cry, I wanna hide
Away from people’s eyes
So they don’t see me when I’m weak
I wanna cry, I wanna hide
Away from people’s eyes
I wish I could just disappear
I wanna cry, I wanna hide
Away from people’s eyes
So they don’t see me when I’m weak
I wanna cry, I wanna hide
Away from people’s eyes
I wish I could just disappear
If only I had my own panic room
No one would see me when I’m gloom
Lock myself up and forget the pain
Send them far away on a crashing plane
I really like this one
...I never get any reviews tho
I felt like my songs are too long, so I have shortened them recently. I may just go back to making them longer, though.
Im In
[V1]
There’s a celebration on the golden beach (I’m in)
There’s people all around up and down the streets (I’m in)
Everyday’s a party when you rock with me (I’m in)
Why don’t you take me for a spin
[H]
With the way that I’m feel (in!)
Oh, you got my head spin (in!)
Reel (in!)
I don’t know how I’m deal (in!)
But I’d do anything - I’m in
[C]
If you wanna go for a ride
Or keep the party inside (I’m in)
If you wanna go to the park
And have some fun after dark (I’m in)
Anything you wanna do, I’m in
Just keep me close to you, and you know I’m in
[V2]
I know you got the feelin’, same as I (I’m in)
I can make you levitate - I’ll make you fly (I’m in)
Every word’s the truth, I would never lie (I’m in)
Why don’t you take me on a ride
[H]
With the way that I’m feel (in!)
Oh, you got my head spin (in!)
Reel (in!)
I don’t know how I’m deal (in!)
But I’d do anything - I’m in
[C]
If you wanna go for a ride
Or keep the party inside (I’m in)
If you wanna go to the park
And have some fun after dark (I’m in)
Anything you wanna do, I’m in
Just keep me close to you, and you know I’m in
[B]
I feel the rush of your touch all over my skin
If you wanna take it in, you know I’m in
I can’t conceal it, I feel it, I’m in to win
I wanna take all of you in...
I’m in
[C]
If you wanna go for a ride
Or keep the party inside (I’m in)
If you wanna go to the park
And have some fun after dark (I’m in)
Anything you wanna do, I’m in
Just keep me close to you, and you know I’m in
If you wanna go for a ride
Or keep the party inside (I’m in)
If you wanna go to the park
And have some fun after dark (I’m in)
Anything you wanna do, I’m in
Just keep me close to you, and you know I’m in
Fun fact: This is the second song I have wrote that the title was based on a screen name I saw online. The first one being the first real song I ever wrote.
I enjoyed your music, I just literally had no words after seeing the title but I did enjoy the song
I do agree though that more discussion of each other's music should happen, it is the purpose of the thread after all!
Thx always happy to hear that my songs enjoyed smone
I just wrote this one called
Way Too Soon
[V1]
I knew that , we weren't for Eva
I knew that , You wouldn't belong
I knew that , This won't get better
I knew that , this won't last long
[Pre-hook]
But you told me
You wouldn't leave me
This love gone bad
Let's not pretend
[Hook]
I knew you would leave but
This was way too soon
I knew you'd be gone but
This was way too soon
I have seen our end but
This was way Oh Waaay Too Soon
[V2]
I knew that , Love should feel Betta
I knew that , Roses have thorns
I knew that , Heartbreaks are bitter
I knew that , I would sing this song
[Pre-hook]
But you told me
You wouldn't leave me
This love gone bad
Let's not pretend
[Hook]
I knew you would leave but
This was way too soon
I knew you'd be gone but
This was way too soon
I have seen our end but
This was way Oh Waaay Too Soon
[Bridge]
Way too soon...
Way too soon..
Oh
Way too soon
Love shouldn't hurt
Well that's a lie
Real love hurts
And I've seen why
A shewolfs cry
Is always dry
Don't ask me whyy
[Pre-hook]
But you told me
You wouldn't leave me
This love gone bad
Let's not pretend
[Hook]
I knew you would leave but
This was way too soon
I knew you'd be gone but
This was way too soon
I have seen our end but
This was way Oh Waaay Too Soon