Lately
The humming words you feed to me
They linger in the air we breathe
I faint as hard as your warm stare
Knowing you’re there, it’s comforting
Save me
From the aliens who don’t speak
Our language that comes naturally
When we cry we drown together
Closer than ever, feel the breeze
Even if we’re islands apart
We still run towards each other’s arms
Even when we’re scattered like stars
We’ll find each other against all odds
You awake my spirit, there are no limits
We could jump over the moon
Against all odds I realise my eyes are dry
With love that could fill a room
I see the colours of what we used to fight
There aren’t any shades of blue
Against all odds we continue to believe
In everything we’ve been through
I'm about to submit.
One of the proudest songs I've ever written.
Honestly. I like it. It sounds like a moving and very emotional ballad in my head.
But let me give you some constructive criticism. I think you should read your feedback again and make some alterations. Especially Truth Teller's. Yet again you're using too many fancy phrases & unimaginable scenery.
Honestly. I like it. It sounds like a moving and very emotional ballad in my head.
But let me give you some constructive criticism. I think you should read your feedback again and make some alterations. Especially Truth Teller's. Yet again you're using too many fancy phrases & unimaginable scenery.
Would you like to point out these "fancy phrases" and "unimaginable scenery"?
Against All Odds
Alright, I'm off, bye!