[Jaxswim]

Clarkson, I want you to know that as I'm re-reading your entry, it makes a lot more sense after knowing what it's about, but it wasn't clear on the first read through until... that line. I hate that line though you should change it.

[Aurora]

Originally posted by Jaxswim

The emotions are kinda specific or obscure. If it was like, anger, sadness, happiness then it'd be easier I think. Like... "guilt" can be applied to different situations but it's a very specific emotion so you have to find the right words to channel it in a different way than other people do. Idk, that's my take.

That was intentional. I didn't just want to have basic things (happy, sad, scared, love etc.) because you're all capable of more than that.

[Jaxswim]

Originally posted by Sam 

That was intentional. I didn't just want to have basic things (happy, sad, scared, love etc.) because you're all capable of more than that.

Yeah I get that! I just think that also happens to be why the challenge is hard

Also I lowkey want to submit my song without making the changes suggested to me, just see how I can do on my own with my own words, but like... I feel like I'm gonna get eliminated hard.

[Element]

WTF is an A

[URBAN]

Sent.

[Temporal]

Originally posted by Jaxswim

Clarkson, I want you to know that as I'm re-reading your entry, it makes a lot more sense after knowing what it's about, but it wasn't clear on the first read through until... that line. I hate that line though you should change it.

I know, that's my sorry/ferrari line It's going.

[Aurora]

Originally posted by Element

WTF is an A

Mess.

Originally posted by URBAN

Sent.

Got it!

[Temporal]

I'm still cringing at some of the mistakes in my first draft, like "past" instead of "passed" and mispelling "bleak"

[URBAN]

Originally posted by Sam 

Got it!

Yay! Hope the audio works, I know it acts up sometimes.

How many people submitted so far? During the previous round I was one of the last few to submit my entry. Wanted to make sure I sent it in earlier this time.

[Aurora]

Originally posted by URBAN

Yay! Hope the audio works, I know it acts up sometimes.

How many people submitted so far? During the previous round I was one of the last few to submit my entry. Wanted to make sure I sent it in earlier this time.

Like 3.

[URBAN]

Originally posted by Sam 

Like 3.

They better get it together, they only have 23 hours left. Lol

[Aurora]

Updated the title.

[Temporal]

Originally posted by Sam 

Updated the title.

Your first flop round is coming! I think Ph7s first flop round was round 7, the story telling challenge.

[swiftie13]

I'm not happy fatties I have nothing

[Jaxswim]

Time is running out and I think my song is going to get me eliminated for real. It's the first song I wrote from my own personal experience... Was it the wrong time to start that?

[Aurora]

When you find out an artist you like released an EP a month ago...

[Temporal]

This bridge better pull through

[Hugamari]

I still don't like my song I submitted for the sins challenge last season Like I would NOT have gave it a good score if I was a judge.

[Aurora]

Originally posted by ClarksonSlays

Your first flop round is coming! I think Ph7s first flop round was round 7, the story telling challenge.

The round EuphorianSea won?

But we don't even know if y'all have flopped yet.

[Aurora]

when you're so happy you could cry because you've found the EP of the year