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Tournament: ATRL is Burning: AND THE WINNER IS....
Member Since: 4/22/2012
Posts: 33,490
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I love the idea, this is gonna be really cool to see!
And there's still gonna be judges comments from the previous round, right? 'Cause I'd really like to have some feedback on how to improve 
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Member Since: 4/30/2012
Posts: 16,573
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Oh wow, this is such a neat idea for a challenge. And yassss @ me getting December!
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Member Since: 4/23/2012
Posts: 9,618
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F E E D B A C K
B O Y O N B O Y . W O N D E R
PRAYER
Again, your entry was great. My only complaint was the cocktail look, it look a bit scattered and the dress wasn't my favorite.
YSL
Ignore prayer, your looks were heavenly! I'm excited to see what you'll do next!
A P O L L O
PRAYER
I loved your cocktail, it was one of my favorites that was submitted! I can totally see the dress on Nicki. Your entry overall was great.
YSL
My #1, I thought you did an excellent job and I could totally see Nicki wearing the looks! You understand what we want and I can see you getting very far in this game!
M E D O S U X X
PRAYER
Your presentation was amazing. You can really see the effort, which I greatly appreciate. Your looks were great, simple but effective. Nice entry. Only thing I would tell you is to add a few more details in the board, like accents, earrings, etc.
YSL
Obsessed with your presentation, it was clean and pristine and you knew exactly how to embody the person wearing the clothes. You're one to look out for!
B O R N T O D I E
PRAYER
It was interesting to see you incorporate Tegan's style so well into your entry. Your entry was great, but was lacking a a little more sparkle or shine. Next time make it a bit more surprising, but still great nonetheless.
YSL
I thought your looks were charming and you were true to Tegan's style. I just want some more wow factor, maybe some edginess like the kind she serves in Feel It In My Bones.
R A E S E A N L O H A N
PRAYER
Your entry was also great. I loved both looks, although I liked the cocktail a bit more. I don't have any complaints, except maybe tone up the elegance a bit more.
YSL
OBSESSED with your tea party look, it's so day time and fun that I would love to see it worn out. My only issue was the casualness of the cocktail attire. Loved your boards and how you put everything together so I'm dying to see what you have for us next!
M I L E S . C A U F I E L D
PRAYER
Your entry was stunning! I loved your tea party look, it was nearly what I imagine for myself and what very well put together. The cocktail look could have been touched up a bit more and had better shoes and earrings, but still a nice entry.
YSL
Your looks were simple yet effective! My only issue was the bag you chose for your cocktail look. Other than that, nice work!
A D D I C T E D
PRAYER
I adored your two looks, they were amazing. But, you didn't put them together. Next time, make sure to collect pieces from different sources to create your own look.
YSL
I absolutely loved your looks but as you may already know, it didn't meet the challenge requirements which were to construct your own looks! Had you put these together yourself, you would have been my number 1. You have a good eye though so I'm excited to see what you have in store for us!
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PRAYER
You compiled a lot of different aspects to your look, which I appreciate. But overall I feel like the looks fell flat, but still had highlights like the cocktail clutch and tea party bag.
YSL
You understand how to put a together just fine but I just found your dresses to be a bit frumpy. Not to take a dig at Kelly but I know her style is a bit on the reserved frumpy side so I can respect what you were going for but I think you should use this opportunity to dress her to make her look stunning and fashionable.
M A R O O N E R 5
PRAYER
I loved your tea party dress, but the cocktail dress was definitely not fit for the event. The whole cocktail look was way overshadowed by your great tea party look. Next time, I would just make sure both looks work together and work for the event.
YSL
Your tea party look was stunning but it was your cocktail attire that ruined it for me. The dress was kind of like a cheap prom dress that someone like housewife of New Jersey would wear. Going by your first look, I know you have it in you to do better so just try to think it out more carefully next time.
I H Y P E M U S I C
PRAYER
Your tea party look was absolutely perfection. I adored it. However, your cocktail look was completely too casual for the event. Although I love it as a singular look, it doesn't work for the cocktail event. But your boards were very nice and among the best, presentation wise and style wise for the tea party.
YSL
LOVED your tea party look but your cocktail attire was WAY too casual, I don't even think you'd be allowed to enter a cocktail party with that outfit. You do have a great eye for fashion though and you know how to put together a look so just pay close attention to what you're being asked for.
H A U S O F C A R L O S
PRAYER
Your entry was at the bottom, but you did alright. Next time, try to elaborate on your looks more and make a more complete entry.
YSL
I actually thought your tea party look was great but I was put off by your cocktail attire. I felt it was elderly and something an overweight woman would wear as opposed to a beautiful model. You have the right idea so I expect you to rise up in the ranks for the next challenge!
R I H H Y O N C E
PRAYER
Your entry was by far my favorite, so I don't have many criticisms. The only thing I might suggest is that your tea party look was a little scattered but it was still great.
YSL
Great looks, you understand fashion and know how to put things together very well. My only concern was that cocktail look was a bit casual, but other than that, great work!
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Member Since: 4/23/2012
Posts: 9,618
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Should have posted the feedback first, but whatever. 
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Member Since: 5/28/2012
Posts: 7,065
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I'm happy since I've got my birth month.
And thank you for the feedback. It will defiantly be applied for the next challenge.
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ATRL Moderator
Member Since: 10/17/2011
Posts: 20,487
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Oh wait. I've only just realized we have to pick individual pieces of clothing/accessories to create a look?
No wonder I sucked the first round, I thought we just had to pick an image of an already constructed look
I have some idea's for July though so I'll give it my best shot!
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Member Since: 12/27/2011
Posts: 4,769
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Originally posted by Addicted
Oh wait. I've only just realized we have to pick individual pieces of clothing/accessories to create a look?
No wonder I sucked the first round, I thought we just had to pick an image of an already constructed look
I have some idea's for July though so I'll give it my best shot!
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Your looks were impeccable, such a great eye  I can't wait to see your July look.
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Banned
Member Since: 9/1/2012
Posts: 10,317
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I don't really get what should we do. Sent a look that will be in a photoshoot or...?
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Member Since: 12/27/2011
Posts: 4,769
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Originally posted by Marooner5
I don't really get what should we do. Sent a look that will be in a photoshoot or...?
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Collect articles of clothing; dresses, tops, pants, accessories etc to combine in a collage or just send in a list of links to create one complete look.
EDIT: mess, i thought you meant for the whole game. Yeah, say you were the picture in a calendar for your specific month.
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Member Since: 12/21/2010
Posts: 51,088
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Originally posted by YSL
Ignore prayer, your looks were heavenly!
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ATRL Senior Member
Member Since: 3/22/2012
Posts: 53,769
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Wow, I can't believe I did that well! Thank you for the feedback!
February will be an interesting challenge, there are a lot of directions I could take this.
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Member Since: 4/23/2012
Posts: 9,618
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I'm looking forward to this challenge the most. 
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Member Since: 4/22/2012
Posts: 33,490
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Should we send pictures for the setting of the shoot or is it okay if we just describe it in detail?
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Member Since: 4/23/2012
Posts: 9,618
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Originally posted by borntodie
Should we send pictures for the setting of the shoot or is it okay if we just describe it in detail?
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That's entirely up to you! You're welcome to do whatever works best for you!
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Member Since: 4/22/2012
Posts: 33,490
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Originally posted by YSL
That's entirely up to you! You're welcome to do whatever works best for you!
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Awesome! I haven't been able to find a good pic so far so I just described it, but I'm gonna try again later and maybe I can find something.
I am so excited for you to see my entry, I put a lot of effort into the graphic presentation because I made it myself this time and just tried to step it up overall 
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Member Since: 5/28/2012
Posts: 7,065
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Is it ok if we do one of those collage things and just use the background of the collage as the set?
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Member Since: 12/27/2011
Posts: 4,769
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Originally posted by Miles Caufield
Is it ok if we do one of those collage things and just use the background of the collage as the set?
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Yep, whatever you want!
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ATRL Moderator
Member Since: 10/17/2011
Posts: 20,487
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So I just submitted
Worked pretty hard to make it all cohesive on this one so hopefully I do better than last time!
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Member Since: 4/30/2012
Posts: 16,573
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Just sent my submission! I really like it, but I'm also kind of nervous. December sounds like an easy month, but it's actually quite difficult to pick one thing when there's so much you could do... 
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Member Since: 12/27/2011
Posts: 4,769
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Bump

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