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Tournament: ATRL Charm School: Graduation Ceremony - WINNER REVEALED!
Member Since: 11/23/2011
Posts: 46,048
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Originally posted by boyonce
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Originally posted by Vato
What kinda example are we trying to set? Drinking on a tuesday night = not classy
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ffff;
I never labeled myself as classy. But every judging panel/group needs the mess. I'm the Karen Walker of Charm School.
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Member Since: 11/23/2011
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Sent in my comments.
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Banned
Member Since: 3/22/2012
Posts: 26,321
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Originally posted by DripDrip
Lil Misty remains being the Megan of the competition
And Boyonce giving off bad ass Sharon teas, flawless
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Only LORD Misty, and I sent them in the mail
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Member Since: 11/27/2008
Posts: 78,826
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Are we getting results tonight?
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Member Since: 1/2/2012
Posts: 22,450
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Originally posted by MusicLoverDude
Are we getting results tonight?
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Most likely.
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Member Since: 9/15/2011
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Originally posted by Honey
Most likely.
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Member Since: 7/15/2012
Posts: 13,331
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Hopefully Miss Boyonce realizes who's here to better themselves and who's here just for fun.
Also don't think I forgot about Miss Jolie's Lips quitting.
If you need someone to fill a seat, you know who to call.
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Member Since: 8/25/2012
Posts: 4,449
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Originally posted by TheSeenScene
Hopefully Miss Boyonce realizes who's here to better themselves and who's here just for fun.
Also don't think I forgot about Miss Jolie's Lips quitting.
If you need someone to fill a seat, you know who to call.
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Exaclty. Y'all know where to find me
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Member Since: 7/15/2012
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Originally posted by SyntaxError
Exaclty. Y'all know where to find me
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Girl, ain't no one getting anywhere near your dumpster.
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Member Since: 4/21/2011
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Results will be up tonight. Gimme two hours.
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Member Since: 11/27/2008
Posts: 78,826
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An hour before X Factor! Smart move hun!
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Member Since: 1/11/2012
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X-Factor starts at 11?
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Member Since: 4/21/2011
Posts: 10,659
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Here we go, y'all.
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Member Since: 1/11/2012
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Right on time!
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Member Since: 3/27/2012
Posts: 27,951
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Originally posted by TheSeenScene
Hopefully Miss Boyonce realizes who's here to better themselves and who's here just for fun.
Also don't think I forgot about Miss Jolie's Lips quitting.
If you need someone to fill a seat, you know who to call.
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Thank you, they should call the one that made this smashing Gif, and invite her to Charm School. I forgot the name but it rhymes with, TripTrip.
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Member Since: 11/27/2008
Posts: 78,826
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Originally posted by ethan
X-Factor starts at 11?
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Ethan, you're forgetting I live in California. It's 7 PM over here, and the X factor starts in an hour!
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Member Since: 1/11/2012
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Originally posted by MusicLoverDude
Ethan, you're forgetting I live in California. It's 7 PM over here, and the X factor starts in an hour!
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I didn't forget, I just never knew that My bad!
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Banned
Member Since: 3/22/2012
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I'm ready to face the judges and plead.
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Member Since: 4/21/2011
Posts: 10,659
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Here are the judges comments on all of your entries from Lesson 2: Apology. Read them through, and take notes. The rankings will be up shortly.
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Hugamari
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Originally posted by boyonce
While I appreciate the comedy and creativity within your blog post, the fact that you commented "and LMAO at people thinking I am serious. I only had to apologize for a game I am playing" kind of defeats the entire purpose of this challenge. A lot of the others took the time to be thoughtful and offer a genuine apology, while you faked it. We're certainly not going to hand the title to someone who just "pretended" to be nice.
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Originally posted by Ammer
Shading in this competition is not something we’re discouraging, but in your entry it was completely overused. This competition should be about wanting to genuinely change, and you completely made fun of that aspect. I’m not sure what went through your mind when you indicated you were ONLY doing this for Charm School. I’m actually really disappointed in your entry because I expected much more out of you, given your Top Member entries. If you don’t want to take this competition seriously, then you are free to leave. No one is forcing you or anyone else for that matter to be here.
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Originally posted by Vato
What kinda trolling disguised as apology? No sir.
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Originally posted by EdgeOfAddiction
I went through phases with your entry. At first, I hated your entry. It was basic and dull. Then I started reading the comments and remembered that you actually stan for Ke$ha. With that said, I liked that you were trying to be creative with a facetious self/fav depricating apology. Then I settled on being indifferent to your apology because even though you did complete the round, you failed to grasp what the challenge wanted you to learn. You have remained stagnant.
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Ainsworth
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Originally posted by boyonce
I was very impressed with how genuine this seemed. Either you really thought about it, or you're a great faker and I've fallen for it hook, line, and sinker. Also, I found the serious tone you took especially poignant after your hilarious yet messy Enrolment blurb. Nice work.
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Originally posted by Ammer
Your entry was not bad, but I do have to question whether or not you’re actually being genuine. I’m not sure if you are, but I was pleasantly surprised by it as I was expecting more of a Misty-esque blog apology from you. Not bad overall.
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Originally posted by Vato
Well done
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Originally posted by EdgeOfAddiction
One or two of the lines are a biT contrived, in my opinion. I wish you personalized the apology more with some more allusions to just how great your relationship with Sloth was, like you did with your final sentence. This could have been used by anyone to any Monster and still would have worked. However, it was a straight forward apology and I'm glad you and Sloth are back on the right track.
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Marnie
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Originally posted by boyonce
All in all, a nice apology and I can tell you put a lot of thought into it. I will say, however, that I think it would have benefited greatly from some editing/spell check. You were saying some great stuff but I found that the spelling and grammar errors got in the way and sometimes made it hard to understand. Just a note for next time!
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Originally posted by Ammer
I really liked your entry; you talked about what you’ve been through and where you were at that time of your transgressions, and you seemed to have a lot of insight into where you are now. The only issue I have with your entry is your grammar. Review your blogs before you post, because it seemed a bit sloppy to me. Other than that, solid entry.
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Originally posted by Vato
You need to let go of the ForrestFuller drama, you keep bringing it up EVERY single chance you get.
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Originally posted by EdgeOfAddiction
This is actually a genuine apology because I've noticed your change in personality across the forum. You've mellowed out to being your cute self (even though I miss the bad bitch in you). The growth is tremendous yet, the approach is uncreative. Try to stick out before you get lost in the shuffle. Nevertheless, the good outweighs the bad here by a large margin. Good job.
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MusicLoverDude
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Originally posted by boyonce
I have to say, I had high hopes for you with this challenge, and sadly I was disappointed. Given that you've been a part of some of the biggest drama I've seen on ATRL I thought for sure you'd think of something to apologize for. But not putting someone on a list for who you wanted to win Survivor? That's it??? It feels like a bit of a cop out, and I think with a little more thought and effort you could have come up with an apology that was more worthwhile and meaningful. I'm a firm believer that all arguments are two sided, and I think you could have examined your role in them a bit more.
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Originally posted by Ammer
Here’s what I think, I think you clearly sidestepped what you wanted to actually apologize for and chose a very small [non] issue to submit for the challenge. I think you are well aware that your apology for not selecting someone to win Survivor missed the entire point of the challenge. A little reflection on your behaviour around the forum would have been appreciated because as it stands, it seems as if you chose the least offensive thing to apologize for. I was expecting more out of you.
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Originally posted by Vato
An apology for a Game? Really?
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Originally posted by EdgeOfAddiction
The **** sort of apology is this? Getting snubbed is a theme in your life based on this apology and on the surprise Musical Chairs elimination in ANTM, so I guess an apology for this sort of thing makes sense? But then again, you didn't even seem that invested nor convinced by your own words:
But again, as generic and useless as this apology is, you did fulfill the requirements. Try bringing some depth and a whole bucket full of creativity in your future entries.
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Evil-Laugh
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Originally posted by boyonce
Now this is how an apology is done! The fact that you went above and beyond to create an image for the person you were apologizing to was a fantastic touch, and made you come across that much more apologetic and kind. I feel like you not only sent sorry, you went out of your way to make it up to them. You showed a lot of insight and care.
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Originally posted by Ammer
I loved this entry. I felt you were genuinely sorry for what happened between you and your friend, and it seemed like you really wanted to make it up to them. The photo was a great addition, and your entry was the epitome of what this challenge was all about.
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Originally posted by Vato
Nice touch with the image you included.
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Originally posted by EdgeOfAddiction
This felt like a genuine and cute apology and I actually enjoyed it. While it verged on being generic, you saved it by including multiple references to your past escapades with Akira. I also saw some personality so don't be shy on letting that shine through in your entries. And upon looking at your wall-to-wall with him, I'd say this apology did what it was supposed to do.
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Ethan
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Originally posted by boyonce
A well worded apology. You come across very well in this entry and your tone is respectful and classy. Nice work.
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Originally posted by Ammer
Your entry was good, but I felt you may have been exaggerating how you felt about your comments a tad bit. I do like how you chose a fellow Charm School competitor to apologize to as it does indicate to me that you’re willing to change starting with the players in this game. Good overall.
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Originally posted by Vato
Seems like a trivial thing to apologize for, but well done
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Originally posted by EdgeOfAddiction
Quick recap, effective apology. It was to the point and I weirdly liked how simple it was. I liked the fact that you had the courage to apologize to someone who was competing against you. Good start to the tournament. Hope to see the more creative side of you in the upcoming challenges.
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Pika
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Originally posted by boyonce
I like the fact that you not only apologize to MLD for anything you've ever said to him, but also on behalf of everyone else who has picked on him. I thought that was a nice perspective to take, and really makes you seem kind-hearted.
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Originally posted by Ammer
Really liked your entry, and just like ethan’s, I did appreciate you apologizing to a fellow Charm School competitor. After all, change starts at home right? I believed you were genuine in your PM, and really liked how you provided some advice at the end in order to alleviate any negative feelings MLD may feel in the future in response to other posters. Good job!
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Originally posted by Vato
Amazing way to prove you have what it takes to be the bigger man (woman?)
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Originally posted by EdgeOfAddiction
Like I said with ethan, it takes courage to apologize to someone you're competing against, especially if that someone is MLD. Now you're setting the stage for a fierce competition without the animosity. However, I did not like the wording of your last sentence. I didn't think it was necessary to cheer MLD up by putting down his aggressors with a hypothetical reason. In fact, that last sentence was not needed.
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Monkey
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Originally posted by boyonce
YES! When everyone was complaining about how hard this challenge was, I so badly wanted to mention the "apologize to yourself" option, but I decided not to so I could see if anyone came up with it themselves. I'm glad you thought outside the box here, and I applaud your creativity. An apology to oneself is a fantastic way to interpret this challenge.
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Originally posted by Ammer
I definitely remember you from our cycle! I really think you were the most creative with this challenge (as I recall, you were pretty creative in our cycle as well!). I liked how you apologized to yourself, and found the entry to be an interesting read. Great job!
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Originally posted by Vato
What kinda narcissistic apology? Extra points because it made me laugh but child...
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Originally posted by EdgeOfAddiction
Ugh. This had SO MUCH POTENTIAL. POTENTIAL! POTENTIAL!!! But potential is nothing if you can't harness it. The creativity of this entry far surpasses the others but...you failed to capture the foundation of an apology. I understood what you were trying to do but overall, it didn't make much sense. If you didn't have "I am apologizing to myself" written, I wouldn't have even known who you were apologizing to and would have thought you were trying to apologize to the Deans. Try to focus on the main objective before adding in your creative input. Creativity can only get you so far without a solid backbone to each of your entries.
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AllThatF***ery
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Originally posted by boyonce
Good. I appreciate that you and borntodie had a bit of a back and forth convo here, rather than just a one time "here's an apology, ok now we'll never talk again" kind of deal. I did find the format you sent it in rather hard to follow though. Next time you submit just think about your presentation a bit more.
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Originally posted by Ammer
My favourite entry by far. I loved how you included the user’s responses, because it makes us feel like your apology wasn’t falling on deaf ears, and was actually genuine. It’s clear there was something to apologize for on your part, but was more impressive is that the other person also apologized for their behaviour. I thought this entry was a perfect example of how open communication can really make or break a friendship. Wonderful job overall.
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Originally posted by Vato
It was great to witness the birth of a possible friendship. Very well done
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Originally posted by EdgeOfAddiction
Candidly speaking, I detested you after your initial enrollment submission. That self righteous attitude you gave off was quite unappealing. However, you changed my mind with this entry. Probably one of the few genuine apologies that I've read so far. And because of this challenge, your issues with borntodie seem like it's water under the bridge and you made a new friend because of your sincere apology. One detail is that the layout was kind of confusing. The time line of the conversation seemed off cuz of the layout. Otherwise, good job.
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Honey
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Originally posted by boyonce
Ok, you made me laugh. That's about all I have to say about this entry, though. I think you kind of missed the mark.
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Originally posted by Ammer
This competition is about wanting to genuinely reform yourself. Your entry clearly ignored that fact, and made the challenge into a joke. Not impressed.
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Originally posted by Vato
What kinda trolling disguised as apology? Entertaining, but no sir.
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Originally posted by EdgeOfAddiction
1. I recognize just how difficult it is to apologize to Duca based on your history, so props on that.
2. This would have been fantastic if this actually was an apology.
You took this as a chance to not be apologetic but to very badly attempt at a Britney drag. Just cuz you use the word "apologize" doesn't mean it was an apology. While this was a somewhat creative approach, there was no sincere apology to be seen anywhere. I like you but...LaurenConradstaring.gif
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iHypeMusic
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Originally posted by boyonce
A middle of the road entry for me. That's all. Maybe could have benefited from being a tad more serious.
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Originally posted by Ammer
Your entry was just OK. I didn’t really feel a sense of genuineness from your “apology”. I really have no other thoughts on it because for me, the entry was just there.
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Originally posted by Vato
Seems very fake but it made me laugh
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Originally posted by EdgeOfAddiction
BLaCKPoWeR is not Beyonce. And this was more of an observation/critique than an apology. No.
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Lil Misty
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Originally posted by boyonce
I have a hard time saying anything about this entry as it comes off as a complete joke. It's cool if that's the approach you want to take in this competition, I'm all for being oneself, just know that it isn't my favourite.
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Originally posted by Ammer
I figured we’d get an entry like this from you. It wasn’t anything spectacular and clearly took 30 seconds to whip together. Unfortunately, this was one of the worst entries of the bunch. If you stay, I’d appreciate maybe taking the game a bit more seriously.
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Originally posted by Vato
Not only you sent the wrong link, but your apology seems soo fake and half-assed it's painful to read.
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Originally posted by EdgeOfAddiction
I don't get it. There was absolutely no weight behind your words. Even more hallow then a Nigerian baby's tummy.
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Banned
Member Since: 3/22/2012
Posts: 26,321
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Edge is racist, let me complain to HQ
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