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 Deaths 9, 10 and 11 (The Last Three)
I know, I've used far too many explosions in this story, but this one was the first death I wrote. Well, these three I all wrote at once. The explosion is with reason.
9. Sam
Two days after the death of Doc, Sam and Robbie were at Robbie's house. True Skarlet said he was on his way back over... A perfect opportunity for death.
Blah blah blah, an explosion occurred involving spilled oil and a spark caused by a faulty wire to a lamp. Robbie had his back to the windows facing the street in the apartment that he and Sam shared, his hand on Sam's shoulder as Sam cried. The explosion occurred, sending debris to impale Sam through the back just as Sam stood up.
10. True Skarlet
True Skarlet just arrived, but hesitated to enter when he heard the explosion. He looked around in the night, caught a glimpse of William Bludworth across the street, and was crushed by more debris that fell from the building when the explosion occurred, more or less literally blowing the roof off of the apartment building.
11. Robbie
Robbie was trapped in the apartment now, and called 911. He stood near the windows, with it being a 3-story drop, wanting to jump out but too scared. The ambulance and police were on their way. Halfway there, the headlights on the ambulance broke, without any of the paramedics knowing. Robbie stayed with his back pressed against the window when the fire came closer to him. Suddenly, the window gave out, letting Robbie fall back just as a second explosion occurred. Thankful for the unlucky yet fortunate event of the window breaking, Robbie started to crawl across the street, panicking. He saw William there, leaning against the building, as creepy as ever. Robbie said "Help me" weakly once, before then screaming "HELP ME!!" a la Olivia Castle just as the ambulance arrived........ running right over Robbie, not seeing him due to the broken headlights, killing him instantly.
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(William's exit/exit to credits of the film)
William shook his head, making a "tsk tsk" sound twice as the ambulance stopped.
"What a waste," he muttered, then closed his coat and walked in the direction from which the ambulances seemed to have come from, possibly returning to the funeral parlor to deal with the next few bodies to come...
And so, that's all the deaths. I'll update with actual scenes & stuff in my blog post... eventually. 
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