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Chapter 7: Comments (Allstars)
Chapter 7: Comments (Allstars)
VAUX
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Originally posted by Superiore
I love how your entry captured the feeling of this season of Les ATRLers with the tale theme, Disney characters, the chapter division and "dem" titles while you also made sure to make it very YOU with the camel insertion and the messy Chris Brown accident linked with her smashes. The only slight letdown is that this graphics have little to do with the text they represent but they're amazing. The epilogue let me confused but let it all out. It's gonna be fine!
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Originally posted by Kworb
Gorgeous, original style with some humor thrown in.
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Originally posted by Katie
nope. Not even a bit.
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Originally posted by Kitt
This is way too cute. Not understanding why Drip didn't think to do a fairy tale theme combined with his hate for Rih. His loss. The second part, after the camel, is so hard to read with that side border, though. Your dumb ass for including that epilogue with three mods on the panel. Wyd. All in all though, I'm in love with the execution of the concept althewhile maintaining your sense of humor throughout it.
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MICH
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Originally posted by Superiore
This looks nice set as a blog article and I liked the idea of adding a caption and subheading. You made it really well-organized and the headers/banners were a good idea to divide the sections and give a breath of fresh air to the text. It doesn't stand next to the best entries of this round but it's not even bad at all. Maybe just too simple but sometimes less can be more.
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Originally posted by Kworb
Not feeling this, the faded out images, the blue words. It all looks hideous.
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Originally posted by Katie
this is kind of a let down from you. I put your name in the Family Feud thread as having really nicely formatted posts. This is not just because your name was the first one I thought of. Okay, maybe it was. I guess it must have been. This was a disappointment. Oh well. The content was nice and that's what matters, right? It was cute, but a little short.
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Originally posted by Kitt
Simple, organized, standard, kind of an editorial format. Give me 10s in QOTF and I'll give you 10s here. Wrap your entries in [table][td]'s if you don't want them italicized when Dom quotes them but you probably don't care. Links would've been cute.
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JORG
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Originally posted by Superiore
My favorite parts of your entry were the Rihanna header on top, the albums collage and the closing banner. Altogether this looks good to the eye with well-chosen colors and appropriate organization of the text parts made even better by the bolded highlights. Nothing too astounding but it works.
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Originally posted by Kworb
Looks nice and professional. Easy to read unlike most of the others.
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Originally posted by Katie
this is nice! It reads sort of like a mini article in a magazine. I just realized that you copied the same text. So I scanned a few more and saw the were all the same. So maybe the challenge was formatting after all? I still haven't read the challenge so I'm probably messing this up. Yours is super cute.
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Originally posted by Kitt
This was cute and compact. Very seamless. Great job again.
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RENA
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Originally posted by Superiore
The quality is a grainy mess and the whole thing looks cute but really amateur-ish and badly stuffed together, I'm sorry. I'm glad of the effort you made about this anyway, knowing this doesn't belong to your comfort zone AT ALL. Hopefully things will go better for you now that you're on the last round with immunity.
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Originally posted by Kworb
Looks like one of those old MySpace profiles.
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Originally posted by Katie
okay, by now I realize that it's all the same text. Ok, now I understand. Kind of. The graphics here are sort of low quality. Looks like you've saved it one too many times. The images are not the best for someone like Rihanna. Having the Grammy there is like, sort of a joke.
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Originally posted by Kitt
What is this space looking purple design? It seems so unrelated. And everything is blurry as hell. You're definitely going to haraam for this, immunity can't save your ass there.
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FAFA
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Originally posted by Superiore
You did amazing, Fafa. This is honestly the most fitting and well-done layout and formatting for the text, in my opinion. It's really captivating yet it has a neat, professional gist to it. I could see this belonging to a page of a music magazine. Bravo!
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Originally posted by Kworb
Effective use of greyscale and the animation is a nice touch.
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Originally posted by Katie
this looks the most like Rihanna. It's got her sense of style to it. It looks like a Rihanna magazine, if they have those. The text all blends perfectly together. I'm not sure I would have changed anything.
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Originally posted by Kitt
This would've slayed in retina but you're not about that life so it's all blurry to Dom and I. You need to upgrade to a Mac cause the dusty Windows smell is all over you.
Anyway, it's beautiful. I see no flaws. (besides the only setback I mentioned)
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Stay tuned to see the comments for the virgins.
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