[Tymps.]

Originally posted by Tymps.

hre iz mi entrie i hop u lik it


"Birthday"

I heard you're feeling nothing's going right
Why don't you let me stop by?
The clock is ticking, running out of time
So we should party all night

So cover your eyes,
I have a surprise
I hope you got a healthy appetite
If you wanna dance,
If you want it all
You know that I'm the girl that you should call

Boy, when you're with me
I'll give you a taste
Make it like your birthday everyday
I know you like it sweet
So you can have your cake
Give you something good to celebrate

So make a wish
I'll make it like your birthday everyday
I'll be your gift
Give you something good to celebrate

Pop your confetti
Pop your Pérignon
So hot and heavy
'Til dawn
I got you spinning
Like a disco ball
All night they're playing
Your song

We're living the life
We're doing it right
You're never gonna be unsatisfied
If you wanna dance
If you want it all
You know that I'm the girl that you should call

Boy, when you're with me
I'll give you a taste
Make it like your birthday everyday
I know you like it sweet
So you can have your cake
Give you something good to celebrate

So make a wish
I'll make it like your birthday everyday
I'll be your gift
Give you something good to celebrate

Happy birthday

So let me get you in your birthday suit
It's time to bring out the big balloons
So let me get you in your birthday suit
It's time to bring out the big, big, big, big, big, big balloons

Boy, when you're with me
I'll give you a taste
Make it like your birthday everyday
I know you like it sweet
So you can have your cake
Give you something good to celebrate

Boy, when you're with me
I'll give you a taste
Make it like your birthday everyday
I know you like it sweet
So you can have your cake
Give you something good to celebrate

So make a wish
I'll make it like your birthday everyday
I'll be your gift
Give you something good to celebrate

Happy birthday NAIT PHOENIX

6. Well you weren't supposed to rewrite Katy's song...

I feel like this is mine

[Hugamari]

Originally posted by Tymps.

I feel like this is mine

Nope, I'm going to harass you on your wall now.

[feelslikeadream]

Originally posted by Hugamari

Okay, if a certain one of you ****s still don't know which one you are, I will harass you on your wall until your inevitable elimination.

HUGAMARI HINTS~

1. That twist @ the end!
2. Deserves a creepy instrumental
3. Underwhelming, but solid.
4. This whole song sounds sarcastic.
5. Some of these lines are hilarious, other have some depth to them.
6. Well you weren't supposed to rewrite Katy's song...
7. Don't. Ever again. Just don't.

EDIT: Sorry I didn't space my judgments all that well, Nait. I do my rates in MS Word, and everything looks fine in it. >.<

HMMMM. I think I could be all of them except 4. And I tried to avoid rewriting Birthday, so hopefully I'm not 6

I'm surprised 7 people submitted--I thought only a few would! Exciting!

[UFO]

Originally posted by Hugamari

Okay, if a certain one of you ****s still don't know which one you are, I will harass you on your wall until your inevitable elimination.

HUGAMARI HINTS~

1. That twist @ the end!
2. Deserves a creepy instrumental
3. Underwhelming, but solid.
4. This whole song sounds sarcastic.
5. Some of these lines are hilarious, other have some depth to them.
6. Well you weren't supposed to rewrite Katy's song...
7. Don't. Ever again. Just don't.

EDIT: Sorry I didn't space my judgments all that well, Nait. I do my rates in MS Word, and everything looks fine in it. >.<

Found mine

[Jackson]

Originally posted by Hugamari

Okay, if a certain one of you ****s still don't know which one you are, I will harass you on your wall until your inevitable elimination.

HUGAMARI HINTS~

1. That twist @ the end!
2. Deserves a creepy instrumental
3. Underwhelming, but solid.
4. This whole song sounds sarcastic.
5. Some of these lines are hilarious, other have some depth to them.
6. Well you weren't supposed to rewrite Katy's song...
7. Don't. Ever again. Just don't.

EDIT: Sorry I didn't space my judgments all that well, Nait. I do my rates in MS Word, and everything looks fine in it. >.<

I could be 2, 3, 4, or 7 I think. Possibly 5

[UFO]

Cannot wait

[Hugamari]

Originally posted by feelslikeadream

HMMMM. I think I could be all of them except 4. And I tried to avoid rewriting Birthday, so hopefully I'm not 6

I'm surprised 7 people submitted--I thought only a few would! Exciting!

Check your wall ****.

[Hugamari]

It's so taxing harassing Fefe, but I have to do it.

[UFO]

That means I got my hint correct, yay

[Hugamari]

Originally posted by EuphorianSea

That means I got my hint correct, yay

No, you didn't. I wasn't going to harass you, though.

[UFO]

Originally posted by Hugamari

No, you didn't. I wasn't going to harass you, though.

WAIT so that wasn't my hint then?? Damn, the others sound too

I'm guessing either 1, 3, 4, or maybe even 6

[EatmeZayn]

I think I could be 2 3 or 7

[Prometheus.]

2. Deserves a creepy instrumental
3. Underwhelming, but solid.

me

[Nait Phoenix]

Nait's Hints:
1. Explain your song in one sentence.
2. Are your birthdays that horrible? I feel sorry for you…
3. You seem happy for the wrong(?) reasons.
4. It went three directions and I was unsure at most times.
5. Okay, I can't lie. I was blushing the entire time reading this.
6. It's one of the funniest things I've ever read.
7. I have to say, it's not your run-of-the-mill birthday song.

BTW, not one person did a song like the examples (which begs me to ask why I even put them up in the first place…). I was really hoping I'd get an easy to analyze birthday song, but they were all so deep or so depressing or so sexual that I was actually praying for a run-of-the-mill birthday song. All amazing work, tho…

[feelslikeadream]

I can only be 6 or 7 for Nait Come on Jack!, redeem my score

[EatmeZayn]

I'm unsure about Nait's hints

[Nait Phoenix]

Originally posted by EatmeZayn

I'm unsure about Nait's hints

The one time I'm actually not cryptic and no one can guess…

[feelslikeadream]

Originally posted by EatmeZayn

I'm unsure about Nait's hints

I realized the numbers could be order received instead of rankings, in which case I think I'd be 6 and you'd be 7? That could be wishful thinking

[UFO]

Originally posted by Nait Phoenix

Nait's Hints:
1. Explain your song in one sentence.
2. Are your birthdays that horrible? I feel sorry for you…
3. You seem happy for the wrong(?) reasons.
4. It went three directions and I was unsure at most times.
5. Okay, I can't lie. I was blushing the entire time reading this.
6. It's one of the funniest things I've ever read.
7. I have to say, it's not your run-of-the-mill birthday song.

BTW, not one person did a song like the examples (which begs me to ask why I even put them up in the first place…). I was really hoping I'd get an easy to analyze birthday song, but they were all so deep or so depressing or so sexual that I was actually praying for a run-of-the-mill birthday song. All amazing work, tho…

Right??

[Hugamari]

Will Nait and I ever agree on anything? Tune in next time for more Platinum Hit Z!!!!