My review for Temporal's Dark Side
Dark Side
(3)
The first verse made me scream because I wasn’t ready for this to be a sex song. The magic/disappear lyrics were kinda hilarious. I wasn’t ready for this sex bop. The pre-chorus, oh god, not the hardest. The chorus feels awkwardly different from the rest of the song, since how the first verse was so forward then the whole chorus had a mood shift and became a lot darker sounding. Woo, the second verse. It wasn’t as forward or shocking as the first, I prefer the first tbh. “I put my heart underneath my sleeve/So no one can see the weakest part of me” I genuinely liked this line. The best part of the bridge/song. Overall, I wasn’t expecting this song, especially from you and it was kinda a fun read but your weakest entry by far. This entry was a risk but I’m not sure if it paid off for you in the end.
Poor him with that 3.
