The verses are great, her vocals, the instrumental ugh. But that chorus entire beat change, from hauntingly beautiful to Kidz Bop and her vocals in the chorus actually make me cringe.. it's like S&M-nasal.
The awful chorus could have been saved by a bridge but there is no bridge..
So I, wait for you to call
And I try to act natural
have you been thinking 'bout her or about me
And while I wait I put on my perfume, yeah I want it all over you
I gotta mark my territory
I'll never tell, tell on myself but I hope she smells my perfume
I'll never tell, tell on myself but I hope she smells your perfume
I hide it well, hope you can't tell but I hope she smells my perfume
I hide it well, hope you can't tell but I hope she smells my perfume
Ok, so the vocals remain the same, the instrumental was the only thing improved in this final version.
Did you notice the laugh I was talking about was still there?
This is definitely better
Sounds like backtracking to me.
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Originally posted by touchofmyhand
The verses are great, her vocals, the instrumental ugh. But that chorus entire beat change, from hauntingly beautiful to Kidz Bop and her vocals in the chorus actually make me cringe.. it's like S&M-nasal.
The awful chorus could have been saved by a bridge but there is no bridge..
How many times are you going to make the same point?
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Originally posted by alfonso12
Some of you guys are overreacting.
Everytime, Out from under, Criminal, etc >>> Perfume.
I hope it's a grower tho.
The fact that you rate Out from blunder higher than Perfume means your opinion is null and void. Sorry. Not sorry.