[Truth Teller]

Originally posted by Speezy

Did I make it or not cause I need a page number or somethin

You didn't

[Speezy]

Originally posted by Truth Teller

You didn't

I'll be perched for the winner then

[minho]

I made the top ten

Have people been posting their songs? I'd love to read a few and maybe share mine

[posh]

Originally posted by lovesong

I made the top ten

Have people been posting their songs? I'd love to read a few and maybe share mine

Congrats. I've been dying to read your song!

[Hugamari]

Originally posted by lovesong

I made the top ten

Have people been posting their songs? I'd love to read a few and maybe share mine

I posted mine, but here it is again.

Kingdom

[Verse]
I’m up in your residence
Your voice is so resonant
It’s telling me “come and get it”
It’s telling me “come and get it”

Should be said without sayin’
If you want it then take it
It’s all in my body language
It’s all in your body language

And so we start an adventure
There’s a lot to explore
Curiosity’s nature
So what you waiting for?

It’s all in my body language
It’s all in your body language

[Chorus]
When I’m in your kingdom, I’ll play by your rules
I’ll worship you, King; and I’ll play the fool

When I’m in your territory
You’re readin’ me like a story
Go deep like an allegory
Go on if you’re waitin’ for me

When I’m in your kingdom, I’ll play by your rules
I’ll worship you, King; and I’ll play the fool

[minho]

Originally posted by posh

Congrats. I've been dying to read your song!

Thank you!!! I need to read yours too, the concept and title seem so intriguing.

I'll post mine in a bit. I'm reading a few of the other entries and many of them are really great. This is already so much fun.

[rl231]

Originally posted by Truth Teller

Yeah, your heart wasn't into it, I could feel it. I was still your highest scorer but it didn't help. You can do so much better

I'm listening to your recommendations now that I'm done with the announcements btw, I've already heard Erik's before

Yeah . I think the main issue was that the lyrics that I've already written that were way less superficial, I didn't want judged because I was worried about bad feedback. Also, it didn't help that I have finals and am leaving France to head back to the U.S. in a few days

[UFO]

Are post-choruses allowed?

[ForeverNow90]

Originally posted by macrocycle

Very sad news to arrive home to today.



Congratulations to my competition and thank you to the judges for this opportunity

Due to the circumstances I have decided not to release Star-Lord but here is a snippet -

I love the snippet

[inuborg]

Here is my song, which the more I read it, the less I like it lol

Title: Sing Of You

Verse 1
Just unclench the grasp on my aorta
And let the feelings slip out of my hands, like water
You said you see a light inside of myself
But you gave yours away to someone else
And you expect me to be tranquil, expect me to cope
When you say you still love me I know that you don’t

You teeter around the truth, as I ignore it
You've washed me ashore, and I don’t dare explore it
It’s a been many years, the candle’s wax nearly all melted
And its piled at my feet, I know, cause the burn I had felt it
Yet, I’ll still be your Iago hanging from your rope
And I know you can save me, but I know that you won’t.

Chorus
Your diction is so sweet
But your words paint me blue
Though I’m not yours to keep
The charade still holds through
And I know you won’t hum me to sleep
But I still sing of you

[Element]

510 pages

[UFO]

Originally posted by inuborg

Here is my song, which the more I read it, the less I like it lol

Title: Sing Of You

Verse 1
Just unclench the grasp on my aorta
And let the feelings slip out of my hands, like water
You said you see a light inside of myself
But you gave yours away to someone else
And you expect me to be tranquil, expect me to cope
When you say you still love me I know that you don’t

You teeter around the truth, as I ignore it
You've washed me ashore, and I don’t dare explore it
It’s a been many years, the candle’s wax nearly all melted
And its piled at my feet, I know, cause the burn I had felt it
Yet, I’ll still be your Iago hanging from your rope
And I know you can save me, but I know that you won’t.

Chorus
Your diction is so sweet
But your words paint me blue
Though I’m not yours to keep
The charade still holds through
And I know you won’t hum me to sleep
But I still sing of you

**** me, softly.

[MattyTacos]

Originally posted by inuborg

Here is my song, which the more I read it, the less I like it lol

Title: Sing Of You

Verse 1
Just unclench the grasp on my aorta
And let the feelings slip out of my hands, like water
You said you see a light inside of myself
But you gave yours away to someone else
And you expect me to be tranquil, expect me to cope
When you say you still love me I know that you don’t

You teeter around the truth, as I ignore it
You've washed me ashore, and I don’t dare explore it
It’s a been many years, the candle’s wax nearly all melted
And its piled at my feet, I know, cause the burn I had felt it
Yet, I’ll still be your Iago hanging from your rope
And I know you can save me, but I know that you won’t.

Chorus
Your diction is so sweet
But your words paint me blue
Though I’m not yours to keep
The charade still holds through
And I know you won’t hum me to sleep
But I still sing of you

[Lukey]

Originally posted by inuborg

Here is my song, which the more I read it, the less I like it lol

Title: Sing Of You

Verse 1
Just unclench the grasp on my aorta
And let the feelings slip out of my hands, like water
You said you see a light inside of myself
But you gave yours away to someone else
And you expect me to be tranquil, expect me to cope
When you say you still love me I know that you don’t

You teeter around the truth, as I ignore it
You've washed me ashore, and I don’t dare explore it
It’s a been many years, the candle’s wax nearly all melted
And its piled at my feet, I know, cause the burn I had felt it
Yet, I’ll still be your Iago hanging from your rope
And I know you can save me, but I know that you won’t.

Chorus
Your diction is so sweet
But your words paint me blue
Though I’m not yours to keep
The charade still holds through
And I know you won’t hum me to sleep
But I still sing of you

I like this a lot

I can actually see this being a song, compared to most of the songs I see written.

[Gladion]

VETERANTS OF PH.

Do judges hate diss songs, i really want to write one

[Hugamari]

Originally posted by HausofNiko

VETERANTS OF PH.

Do judges hate diss songs, i really want to write one

If it's a well-written one, sure. But you'd have to be very sure of your writing capabilities before trying it, as it's a bold move.

[Jezang Looz]

Originally posted by inuborg

Here is my song, which the more I read it, the less I like it lol

Title: Sing Of You

Verse 1
Just unclench the grasp on my aorta
And let the feelings slip out of my hands, like water
You said you see a light inside of myself
But you gave yours away to someone else
And you expect me to be tranquil, expect me to cope
When you say you still love me I know that you don’t

You teeter around the truth, as I ignore it
You've washed me ashore, and I don’t dare explore it
It’s a been many years, the candle’s wax nearly all melted
And its piled at my feet, I know, cause the burn I had felt it
Yet, I’ll still be your Iago hanging from your rope
And I know you can save me, but I know that you won’t.

Chorus
Your diction is so sweet
But your words paint me blue
Though I’m not yours to keep
The charade still holds through
And I know you won’t hum me to sleep
But I still sing of you

Loved this especially the chorus. Very strong entry

[Jezang Looz]

Originally posted by ■YoungCalifornia■

Please no sex songs!

Ballads and suicide songs only!

And Gangsta rap!

You forgot uptempos* too

[Gladion]

I don't like writing sad songs it makes me sad

[TheCheetahwings]

omg I just read the results. I'm glad I didn't have to see that live cause It was intense just reading through it. I'm shocked but happy I made top 20 Thank you so much to the judges