[UFO]

Yay

[PrinceMichaelFan]

[Rian.]

I sent it. I'm sorry guys. I hate being the last one to submit.

[Hugamari]

Originally posted by Nnmmo

I sent it. I'm sorry guys. I hate being the last one to submit.

Last to submit, first to be eliminated. Was nice knowing you sis.



Better than not submitting.

[Legend E]

You're not the last one, I'll probably be

[Hugamari]

Originally posted by e437

You're not the last one, I'll probably be

Fing would not approve

[PrinceMichaelFan]

im scared to be eliminated so I took a risk and had a shocking ending.... it will give you 'FLORIDA' teas.

[Legend E]

Originally posted by Hugamari

Fing would not approve

Hew cares

[Legend E]

I'll write something longer. off me if you want, but I have the inspiration rn nn

[VDK]

GREAT! That's what I'm talking about. Update coming soon.

[Speezy]

Originally posted by VDK

GREAT! That's what I'm talking about. Update coming soon.

[Ferst]

Sent mine.

It sucks tho.

[Hugamari]

BYE I actually thought they were posted now.

[VDK]

THE ENTRIES!

Originally posted by Girlicious

I use all of my vigour to push past the receptionist into the doors.
Rushing over to the fiancé's room to see if she's okay.
I push through everyone in the halls, brushing past them with agility.
Scanning all of the room names to see which one is which.
I finally have my eye set on the room.
Many doctors and nurses are chasing me to prevent me to enter.
I kick the door open with speed, to rush into the room.
I look to see her on the bed, and bring my lips to her forehead.
I stroke her hair and say everything is going to be okay.
She then turns to me and whispers in my ear "I just listened to Mary Jane Holland on peak volume"

Originally posted by Hugamari

Me: Yeah…take me there. I want to see this.
[Receptionist takes me to where the bae is]
Me: Oh my God, I came as soon as I heard! Are you alright?
Bae: What are you—
Me: [cuts Bae off to talk to ‘spouse’] May I talk to you outside? It’s important…
Bae: Wait, don’t g—
[Before bae can finish talking, ‘spouse’ and I have already left]
Spouse: I tried…I really did.
Me: Don’t worry, we’ll finish the job...next time.

Originally posted by Qatari Monster

I Would just act bitchy and go to him and tell him '' Hi honey, who are these, did they get our wedding invitation ''
and then let the drama start and her asking him some questions, then i will drive home in confident but i still have
tears in my eyes, i change my clothes and get ready to visit him the next day. I Wasn't surprised to see her the next day waiting for me, but mu Fiance finally said that he will marry me and confessed to her that she doesn't
give a **** about him, then she said do what you want with her because whatever we have between us
is over. After 2 weeks, at the wedding day, we were getting dressed for the big day and every detail is done
perfectly but that bitch still didn't stop and was in the wedding. We ignored her and walked to the Aisle and
finally got married . I Still didn't stop and went to her " Why the hell are you in my wedding", " So i can't see
my ex marriage". But the big wedding surprise was the most important thing to me. "We will live in Dubai and
we will have a 4 Floor Villa. The ex wife was devastated and we left her with her children alone forever


THE END

Originally posted by e437

I didn't know how to react. I ran. I have fought with the guards, I just wanted to know what has happened. I have entered. My bae was there with another man. I screamed "What is this? Why did you lie to me?". His spouse said "Who are you?". "Let him answer", I said. The bae said "I love you Mark (which was me), but my true love is John. He fought for me, he knows me." I left. I didn't know or care what his spouse did, but I couldn't resist anymore. And then I remembered, the receipt. I wanted to go back to ask him, but I couldn't. I went to the place where he is working. I had to know. I went home and I stole the card that let him enter. Surprisingly, all his clothes were here and then I realized that that couldn't be his spouse, those couldn't be his kids. All his stuff was in my house, that's impossible. I went at his work place. I instantly saw the things that were on the receipt. Why were they here? Why was the receipt at home, initially. I started to take them out of the bag. I saw that they all had a code on them. I was looking for a door, something. I was touching the walls. Suddenly, something has opened. It had a place for something to be put there and a code. I think that they haven't entered there yet. I took every item and put it in the place. The Tide was the one that was correct. I have entered the code and went in. There was a huge place full of gold and other rich things. My bae wanted to steal this. I went out of the room and went to look through the drawers from his office. It was a fake work place. I have called the police as quick as possible. They said they knew about this. That's why he has made the accident. Everything, the spouse, the kids and even me were just some undercovers for this thing. I went at the police station. They made me say everything I knew and I'll probably go to the court too. I have thanked god that it has finally ended. I hope that's the truth...

Originally posted by YUNGKALIMXEL

I'd burst into the room where bae is. There's a woman sat next to him and two kids about 10 years old stood at his side. These kids are quite old so that tells me this niqqa lied about his damn age. The woman asks me who I am and I say "who am I? The question is who are YOU?!" "I'm his wife. And these are his kids". "Did he knock you up with them?" I ask her. "Of course who else did?". "Listen bitch, me and him, we're ****ing, so you best leave because he loves me". She starts crying and she shouts "GET OUT!". Now bae wakes up from his coma. I see the state he's put his family in, and I do them a favour. I turn off the damn life machine and throw it out the mother****ing window. I tell his family not to tell anyone about this and act like they didn't see me. I escape through the window and do some parkour to get down on the streets.

Originally posted by Nnmmo

So here's what i'd do.
I wouldn't go in there because bae couldn't handle all that stress. I mean, she's in hospital, I don't wanna make a scene there. I wouldn't talk to her or go visit her until she's out of hospital. When she gets out I'll dump her ass and I'll make her feel the worst she's ever felt.

Originally posted by Jake.

I would demand to go into the room. Once I walk in, her family looks confused and asks who I am. I would then proceed to bring out Marina and the Diamonds, who would perform her smash hit Homewrecker. While the family is captivated by the megastar in front of them, I would also bring out Alicia Keys, a world renowned homewrecker, to debut her tragic new haircut whilst I set bae on fire. Alicia's piano would magically appear, and she would play a 13 minute version of her Top 11 single Girl On Fire. I would then thank the performers for taking time out of their busy schedules to come, and say goodbye to the family.

Originally posted by JessicaVanessa

I would say sure I want to meet him.
I would walk in looking SNATCHED and say "I heard my fiancé and his wife are in here"
I SLAP his bused face with The US Weekly and told him I didn't know you were into men and these two adopted children need to get on the first plane to Asia because I'm gonna leave your ass in a worst way than you feel after the you had two *****s in your ass.

I knew you was a freak when you wanted me to rim you, I am not that kinda lady nasty. Be real with me, this man with a wig is surely not a "spouse" and these kids look like the cross breed of Zebra and panda.

Originally posted by DevonRoars

*Rceptionist takes me to see bae*

I see bae through the glass window with a woman and 2 children

He looks at me

I get teary eyed

I wait in the lobby until the family leaves

As soon as they leave I walk inside his room

Me: What's going on? Is that your family!?

Bae doesn't answer

Me: I need to know. Why are you in the hospital

Bae: I have aids


TO BE CONTINUED if I'm not kicked out ._.

Originally posted by HausOfLuke

What I would do:

I would calmly knock on my bae's door and if his/her supposed "family" doesn't let me in then I'll just barge in and cause all sorts of drama. I'll demand to know everything about my bae's supposed spouse and children. If they treat me like **** I'll make sure I **** with their heads and make me seem like victim. I'll say that we have children of our own, that we have another one on the way and that we have been seeing each other for years. After I'm done ****ing with their minds. I'll leave and then wait until they all leave the room so that I can go back into the room and make it seem like bae had an "accident". I'll be done with that messy relationship and make sure that he/she never messes with anyone ever again

Originally posted by Toysoldier99

Firstly, I would bribe the nurse into letting me into the room. Before I go into the room, I would bribe 2 kids to pretend to be our children. Then I would walk in with the 2 "Fake Children" not noticing the real family, and start crying and asking if she's alright. Then when the husband asks who I am, I would reply "I'm her husband, and these are our 2 kids, who are you?" Then I would turn around to "Bae" and say "Suprise Bitch". Pull out the target recipt from my pocket and start reading out the items. "Interesting, 2 plastic bananas, 50 Shades of Grey- The Complete Collection, See through lingerie and A copy of ARTPOP"" You thought you could fool me and live a double life of pleasure and compassion, DIDN'T YOU!" Well it's time for payback. Then I would shut the door of the room and pull out a Tranquilizer that I borrowed from the receptionist. Enough Said.

Originally posted by Cristhian

TROUBLE

After i listened the words ''spouse and kids'', I had a feeling that the receptionist was lying, so I decided to go and see her, but I stayed behind the door looking through the glass, and just as I turned to see her, there was she, her ''brother and nephews'', I was in shocked, wondering, ¿why would she lied to the receptionist?.

I went to our house, and wait for her. I stayed there around two, and just when I was already falling asleep, i listened the car, i was ready to confront her. She opened the door, looked at me, and said ''I can expl...'', and just in that moment, ''BUMP'', there was a shoot!!!, I saw how she fell in the ground, everything happened really slowly, I ran to her crying, I couldn't believe it.

The years passed and I never knew the truth, I'm still with the... doubt.

Originally posted by Drama

My initial thought would be to TURN THE **** UP and sett it ALL THE WAY OFF at the hospital. I mean after all I just found out that my fiancée has a entire other family, but I'm smarter than that.

I would pretend to be just some old friend who heard the news and was worried, not fiancée. But in the back of my mind I'd be planning my revenge.

After he leaves the hospital and comes back to our house, I would pretend everything is ok, and that I love him and that regardless of what he did I don't want to lose him. After he takes me on the best vacation and shopping spree ever, I'd come home and call his job and tell him that he's been stealing money for years. Then I'd call his wife and tell her that the bae got aids from me. Lastly I'd send a nude pic of me saying "insert his name ate this ass every night" to everyone in his phone. Of course id have to steal all his credit cards and sign up for SeanCody.com and other gay **** sites. You must not know bout me, you must not know bout me.

Originally posted by EuphorianSea

I accept the receptionist's offer and, as she turns around, I drop-kick her to the floor and steal the ID card attached to her breast pocket. Storming off with fierce frustration, I finally arrive at my Bae's ward. Outside his room is a seemingly sickly-looking lady in her late thirties.. and three kids. Ignoring her bitch ass, I bust open Bae's room. The lady follows, with her three solemn kids. She asks me whether or not HER Bae will survive. Rage had been pent up inside me, and I tell her that death is imminent, while swiftly unplugging Bae's life support. Adultery is a sin, right? Lemme let Jesus dictate my Bae's eventual fate. It became apparent then that she was mentally disturbed. She walks over to Bae and, after kissing him on the forehead, pulls out a taser and (in front of her kids) electrocutes Bae beyond belief, probably to end his "torture" or in order to be with him in the afterli...

Overcome with distraught and torment, she jumps outta the window of Bae's room... WITH HER ELDEST DAUGHTER. Shrieking screams can be vividly heard, and the receptionist comes in be looking like a damn mess. The stank of guilt makes me feel faint. That's when the contractions started. Pregnant, already left with two kids that weren't mine, without Bae, and blood on my hands while still continuously destroying countless of lives (past, present, and future); including mine. The receptionist rushes to my emergency and well.. ever since that night, I'll never trust "men" again. Felicia (that receptionist) and I now live together in deep sorrow, with our three dear kids.

Originally posted by PrinceMichaelFan

Receptionist: Well, I’m sorry but the patient is currently in there with the spouse and kids but I can take you in if you want…

Me: I push the nurse on the floor because I wouldn't believe her and began screaming 'BAE' like a fool all around the hospital because I know damn well this bitch ain't cheating on me and didn't give me the 'D' until I find him with that hoe and these waste of sperm kids. I lose my **** and cut off his dick in front of his spouse and kids.

Originally posted by Speezy

Me: What Kids
*walks in and see BAE#1 and Sidechick and looks at the kids*
Me: First whos kids are those? *Sidechick looks around*
Me: How did both of yall have kids in the first place?
Bae: Sidechick had a penis and she is getting surgery to become a man
Bae: so you can become Sidedick when I need some of the good black licorice *doctor stares*
Me: and the food was for?
Sidechick: It was for you until I gave it to Laquafina and my other children who's name I forgot
Me: Well only way to settle this is......threesome
Nurse: *coughs* foresome

Originally posted by Anvarie

I hope mines not super lame compared to everyone else's

As the receptionist guided me down the hall my mind started racing in confusion of the situation. I entered the room and gasped as local fashion icon Rita Ora stood up and looked me down, the bae shot me terrified look. I briefly paused then slowly walked over to Rita, head now held high and an air determination swirling around me. Time seemed to stop as I leaned into her ear and whispered, with malicious intent, a very convincing lie about da bae. As I withdrew, a smirk crossed my face, I didn't even bother looking back knowing the reaction would best be enjoyed from a distance. As the doors closed behind me I counted to 3 in my head before quickly looking through the glass window in the door. I saw my ex-bae throw his hands up and shake his head fervently , I cackled lowly in the dimly lit hallway, a nurse walking by side eyed my voyeuristic behavior. As I turned back to the glass after shooting a weak smile and wave towards the nurse my jaw dropped at the site of Rita and my ex hugging. I was completely baffled as to how they made up so easily, then suddenly it dawned on me. Rita must have herpes too, I shook my head for not coming up with a better lie and walked away from the door in defeat as How We Do began playing over the speakers.

Originally posted by Venus Temple

I walk into my bae's hospital room, still shaking from the phone call. The receptionist told me she had another family, so I don't know what to believe. I walk in, and it's my mother and two Chinese 10 year olds, one morbidly obese, and one with a tail!

"mom, I didn't know you were a lesbian?? How could you do this to me? And when did you buy these Chinese fatsos? And BAE, how could you do me like this??" -Me

"Oh shut up! I never loved you! I was only sleeping with you for your money, and to get closer to your mom!" -Bae

"Sorry honey, but she likes my ***! And we found Bobby and JuuJuu on the side of the road" -Mom

I storm out of the room and go home and pack my bags, I'm leaving behind everyone and going to start a new life in Jamaica.

Originally posted by Ferst

Receptionist: Well, I’m sorry but the patient is currently in there with the spouse and kids but I can take you in if you want…
As soon as i heard those words i sprinted to my ex bae's room and when i saw him i yelled "You're such a liar" "hey, hey" he said "No, no no no, see this" i showed him my ring "you can keep it" and threw it at him.
I was driving in my old car i stole from my ex bae when i got suddenly thirsty and went to a 7-11, i bought an Arizona tea and saw an add for woman in the army the next thing i know is that i'm chopping my hair and joining the army. (Part of Me by Cupcake Legend Katy Perry starts playing ) I had so many memories of my bae when i was there but all i could think of were his lies. After almost a year training i come back and he's all happy with his "family". They didn't know that i was hiding in the closet of their room so when they least expected i came out and told him.


To Be Continued.

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GOOD LUCK

[UFO]

[PrinceMichaelFan]

[Rimo]

It will take time to read them all

[Ferst]

The essays.

[PrinceMichaelFan]

The essays mine is like a paragraph.


Sis, how do we vote again?

[UFO]

what kinda sickos y'all

WAIT.. yass @ only mine being in bold so it stands out more