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After the war, Carol is sitting at her old chair reminiscing her beautiful past. A copy of the newspaper,as of the day before the war started is still kept on the side table, folded to the page which her husband was reading. She never knew that a day will come that they will be parted. She can still hear the chainsaw that slit her husband while she helplessly hid in the laundry basket.
The past flashes back to her mind.As she lay her wet clothes on the clothesline. She hears the sharp sound of her dogs growling. She turns around and takes an apprehensive step forward. She remembers what Tony has been telling her when he was still alive' "Don't be afraid, I'm always by your side". Her courage grew as his words comforted her. Carol nods to herself and heads to the door. She opens it and there, in that moment, she realized that she had just committed a terrible mistake.
That mistake of letting Tony go. That was her biggest regret of her life. She sees the escort standing all poised at the door, His green eyes seductive as his hair threatens to cover his face. She yells I'm sorry, throws him the money, slams the door and slides down on the door hugging her knees. Desperately trying to get her self together as sobs threaten to overtake her. As bad as times were, she knew that wasn't the right thing to do. A thought of her son's smile crosses her face, so she decides to give him a visit.
The next day' it was exactly 8 am when she go out and drive to her son's hospital. She brings with her a picture of her husband. Her son was diagnosed with autistic and always having attacks. The only way to stop this is when she is telling her son, her love story. Thankfully her son was peacefully asleep so she she didn't have relive the dreadful tribulations she and her husband, Marc had to undergo in order to be together. She settled for just running her fingers through her sleeping son's hair in a comfortable manner as she sat at his bedside. She lost all chance of not reliving it when her son Patrick touches her hair and started screaming.
Patrick's eyes suddenly rolled into the back of his head and levitated upwards from the bed.His cries for help were miffed when his body started spinning in an inhumane speed. Carol eyed the plug that administered his medication. 'Is this the only option to take him out of his misery?', she thought. She dived for the plug and pulled it out, at that moment Carol knew that she had made a big mistake. Patrick's head instantly turned to her, roared "YOU BITCH!" in a deep voice and proceeded to projectile vomit on her.
Before she could even register what had just happened, her body started to itch. then a blinding pain hit her like her flesh was burning.
Chapter 2 : Waking up With Cold Realizations
She suddenly shifted back into reality. She was in a hospitable bed. Carol glanced at the doctor after telling her what she remembered as the Doctor nodded back with a comforting smile. "Well you've been in a coma for 4 month so you shouldn't move because of muscle atrophy. This doesn't sound like an accident. This was an assassination attempt. "
Carol looked deep into her doctor's eyes and whispered "I know who it was" and started crying uncontrollably. Seeing her cry, he gave her some pills. The doctor knew the intensity of what he had just heard, but he maintained a straight face. He realised this wasn't the right time to tell Carol that it was just her hormones acting crazy, and the assasins are after her baby-to-be. Carol was pregnant.
The Doctor eyed her medical charts, but his thoughts drifted elsewhere. Recently he had been receiving strange phone calls regarding his patient.
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After the war, Carol is sitting at her old chair reminiscing her beautiful past. A copy of the newspaper,as of the day before the war started is still kept on the side table, folded to the page which her husband was reading. She never knew that a day will come that they will be parted. She can still hear the chainsaw that slit her husband while she helplessly hid in the laundry basket.
The past flashes back to her mind.As she lay her wet clothes on the clothesline. She hears the sharp sound of her dogs growling. She turns around and takes an apprehensive step forward. She remembers what Tony has been telling her when he was still alive' "Don't be afraid, I'm always by your side". Her courage grew as his words comforted her. Carol nods to herself and heads to the door. She opens it and there, in that moment, she realized that she had just committed a terrible mistake.
That mistake of letting Tony go. That was her biggest regret of her life. She sees the escort standing all poised at the door, His green eyes seductive as his hair threatens to cover his face. She yells I'm sorry, throws him the money, slams the door and slides down on the door hugging her knees. Desperately trying to get her self together as sobs threaten to overtake her. As bad as times were, she knew that wasn't the right thing to do. A thought of her son's smile crosses her face, so she decides to give him a visit.
The next day' it was exactly 8 am when she go out and drive to her son's hospital. She brings with her a picture of her husband. Her son was diagnosed with autistic and always having attacks. The only way to stop this is when she is telling her son, her love story. Thankfully her son was peacefully asleep so she she didn't have relive the dreadful tribulations she and her husband, Marc had to undergo in order to be together. She settled for just running her fingers through her sleeping son's hair in a comfortable manner as she sat at his bedside. She lost all chance of not reliving it when her son Patrick touches her hair and started screaming.
Patrick's eyes suddenly rolled into the back of his head and levitated upwards from the bed.His cries for help were miffed when his body started spinning in an inhumane speed. Carol eyed the plug that administered his medication. 'Is this the only option to take him out of his misery?', she thought. She dived for the plug and pulled it out, at that moment Carol knew that she had made a big mistake. Patrick's head instantly turned to her, roared "YOU BITCH!" in a deep voice and proceeded to projectile vomit on her.
Before she could even register what had just happened, her body started to itch. then a blinding pain hit her like her flesh was burning.
Chapter 2 : Waking up With Cold Realizations
She suddenly shifted back into reality. She was in a hospitable bed. Carol glanced at the doctor after telling her what she remembered as the Doctor nodded back with a comforting smile. "Well you've been in a coma for 4 month so you shouldn't move because of muscle atrophy. This doesn't sound like an accident. This was an assassination attempt. "
Carol looked deep into her doctor's eyes and whispered "I know who it was" and started crying uncontrollably. Seeing her cry, he gave her some pills. The doctor knew the intensity of what he had just heard, but he maintained a straight face. He realised this wasn't the right time to tell Carol that it was just her hormones acting crazy, and the assasins are after her baby-to-be. Carol was pregnant.
The Doctor eyed her medical charts, but his thoughts drifted elsewhere. Recently he had been receiving strange phone calls regarding his patient. He tried to connect the patient, Chandler's life, to Carol's. but as far as he knew, they probably didn't even know of the other's existance.
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i really thought this would go farther than this!
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Member Since: 5/14/2011
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After the war, Carol is sitting at her old chair reminiscing her beautiful past. A copy of the newspaper,as of the day before the war started is still kept on the side table, folded to the page which her husband was reading. She never knew that a day will come that they will be parted. She can still hear the chainsaw that slit her husband while she helplessly hid in the laundry basket.
The past flashes back to her mind.As she lay her wet clothes on the clothesline. She hears the sharp sound of her dogs growling. She turns around and takes an apprehensive step forward. She remembers what Tony has been telling her when he was still alive' "Don't be afraid, I'm always by your side". Her courage grew as his words comforted her. Carol nods to herself and heads to the door. She opens it and there, in that moment, she realized that she had just committed a terrible mistake.
That mistake of letting Tony go. That was her biggest regret of her life. She sees the escort standing all poised at the door, His green eyes seductive as his hair threatens to cover his face. She yells I'm sorry, throws him the money, slams the door and slides down on the door hugging her knees. Desperately trying to get her self together as sobs threaten to overtake her. As bad as times were, she knew that wasn't the right thing to do. A thought of her son's smile crosses her face, so she decides to give him a visit.
The next day' it was exactly 8 am when she go out and drive to her son's hospital. She brings with her a picture of her husband. Her son was diagnosed with autistic and always having attacks. The only way to stop this is when she is telling her son, her love story. Thankfully her son was peacefully asleep so she she didn't have relive the dreadful tribulations she and her husband, Marc had to undergo in order to be together. She settled for just running her fingers through her sleeping son's hair in a comfortable manner as she sat at his bedside. She lost all chance of not reliving it when her son Patrick touches her hair and started screaming.
Patrick's eyes suddenly rolled into the back of his head and levitated upwards from the bed.His cries for help were miffed when his body started spinning in an inhumane speed. Carol eyed the plug that administered his medication. 'Is this the only option to take him out of his misery?', she thought. She dived for the plug and pulled it out, at that moment Carol knew that she had made a big mistake. Patrick's head instantly turned to her, roared "YOU BITCH!" in a deep voice and proceeded to projectile vomit on her.
Before she could even register what had just happened, her body started to itch. then a blinding pain hit her like her flesh was burning.
Chapter 2 : Waking up With Cold Realizations
She suddenly shifted back into reality. She was in a hospitable bed. Carol glanced at the doctor after telling her what she remembered as the Doctor nodded back with a comforting smile. "Well you've been in a coma for 4 month so you shouldn't move because of muscle atrophy. This doesn't sound like an accident. This was an assassination attempt. "
Carol looked deep into her doctor's eyes and whispered "I know who it was" and started crying uncontrollably. Seeing her cry, he gave her some pills. The doctor knew the intensity of what he had just heard, but he maintained a straight face. He realised this wasn't the right time to tell Carol that it was just her hormones acting crazy, and the assasins are after her baby-to-be. Carol was pregnant.
The Doctor eyed her medical charts, but his thoughts drifted elsewhere. Recently he had been receiving strange phone calls regarding his patient. He tried to connect the patient, Chandler's life, to Carol's. but as far as he knew, they probably didn't even know of the other's existance.
Then he saw it.
Both Carol and Chandler's injuries scarred in a pattern. The slash behind Carol's thigh was not straight , but in a jagged wave. The same with Chandler's bicep. They didn't seem to have had a previous connection together, but they definitely shared a killer between them. He'll have to ask them both, separately at first, when they wake up.
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Originally posted by theREALslimSHADY
i really thought this would go farther than this!
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My creative juices had to replenish.
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Originally posted by Auraeolux
After the war, Carol is sitting at her old chair reminiscing her beautiful past. A copy of the newspaper,as of the day before the war started is still kept on the side table, folded to the page which her husband was reading. She never knew that a day will come that they will be parted. She can still hear the chainsaw that slit her husband while she helplessly hid in the laundry basket.
The past flashes back to her mind.As she lay her wet clothes on the clothesline. She hears the sharp sound of her dogs growling. She turns around and takes an apprehensive step forward. She remembers what Tony has been telling her when he was still alive' "Don't be afraid, I'm always by your side". Her courage grew as his words comforted her. Carol nods to herself and heads to the door. She opens it and there, in that moment, she realized that she had just committed a terrible mistake.
That mistake of letting Tony go. That was her biggest regret of her life. She sees the escort standing all poised at the door, His green eyes seductive as his hair threatens to cover his face. She yells I'm sorry, throws him the money, slams the door and slides down on the door hugging her knees. Desperately trying to get her self together as sobs threaten to overtake her. As bad as times were, she knew that wasn't the right thing to do. A thought of her son's smile crosses her face, so she decides to give him a visit.
The next day' it was exactly 8 am when she go out and drive to her son's hospital. She brings with her a picture of her husband. Her son was diagnosed with autistic and always having attacks. The only way to stop this is when she is telling her son, her love story. Thankfully her son was peacefully asleep so she she didn't have relive the dreadful tribulations she and her husband, Marc had to undergo in order to be together. She settled for just running her fingers through her sleeping son's hair in a comfortable manner as she sat at his bedside. She lost all chance of not reliving it when her son Patrick touches her hair and started screaming.
Patrick's eyes suddenly rolled into the back of his head and levitated upwards from the bed.His cries for help were miffed when his body started spinning in an inhumane speed. Carol eyed the plug that administered his medication. 'Is this the only option to take him out of his misery?', she thought. She dived for the plug and pulled it out, at that moment Carol knew that she had made a big mistake. Patrick's head instantly turned to her, roared "YOU BITCH!" in a deep voice and proceeded to projectile vomit on her.
Before she could even register what had just happened, her body started to itch. then a blinding pain hit her like her flesh was burning.
Chapter 2 : Waking up With Cold Realizations
She suddenly shifted back into reality. She was in a hospitable bed. Carol glanced at the doctor after telling her what she remembered as the Doctor nodded back with a comforting smile. "Well you've been in a coma for 4 month so you shouldn't move because of muscle atrophy. This doesn't sound like an accident. This was an assassination attempt. "
Carol looked deep into her doctor's eyes and whispered "I know who it was" and started crying uncontrollably. Seeing her cry, he gave her some pills. The doctor knew the intensity of what he had just heard, but he maintained a straight face. He realised this wasn't the right time to tell Carol that it was just her hormones acting crazy, and the assasins are after her baby-to-be. Carol was pregnant.
The Doctor eyed her medical charts, but his thoughts drifted elsewhere. Recently he had been receiving strange phone calls regarding his patient. He tried to connect the patient, Chandler's life, to Carol's. but as far as he knew, they probably didn't even know of the other's existance.
Then he saw it.
Both Carol and Chandler's injuries scarred in a pattern. The slash behind Carol's thigh was not straight , but in a jagged wave. The same with Chandler's bicep. They didn't seem to have had a previous connection together, but they definitely shared a killer between them. He'll have to ask them both, separately at first, when they wake up.
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Carol stars to dream about a Dog that's singing Like A Virgin and then she gets killed by a thief. THE END.
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I thought this would discontinue, thanks to Auraeolux and theREALslimSHADY for making such a great read.. I thought Carol would just die thereafter she read her story. You guys are crazy!
Let's make a new story! What topic do you want?
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THIS IS OUR NEXT STORY ENTITLED:
"LIKE A VIRGIN"
This is the first lines:
Diana is about to find a job this morning. She resigned on her previous job which is a sales clerk because of low wage.
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Originally posted by TVilla
After the war, Carol sits in her chair reminiscing about the past. She closes her eyes and slowly move her hand to her crotch. She was interrupted by the sound of a breaking glass near the kitchen. She ignores it and returns her hand to her crotch.While she is holding her crotch, she begin to feel uneasy. Carol felt the sudden feeling of someone was watching her come over her. She slowly removes her hand from her quivering crotch and looks around. She sees her grandmother behind her holding a wet *****. She says, "Goddamn you're impatient. here, take it. i'm done!". Carol replies softly, "I don't know how to work it, can you show me?"
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Originally posted by TobeGrierson
THIS IS OUR NEXT STORY ENTITLED:
"LIKE A VIRGIN"
This is the first lines:
Diana is about to find a job this morning. She resigned on her previous job which is a sales clerk because of low wage.
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She went home and her father yelled at her, Diana ran upstairs do her room where she locked herself, crying she decided to become a stripper.
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Originally posted by SupremeGoddess
She went home and her father yelled at her, Diana ran upstairs do her room where she locked herself, crying she decided to become a stripper.
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She thinks through it because she is not comfortable in baring her skin but she wanted to have a job so bad with big wages so that she can support the medications of her mother who was diagnosed with acute tuberculosis.
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Diana is about to find a job this morning. She resigned on her previous job which is a sales clerk because of low wage.
She went home and her father yelled at her, Diana ran upstairs do her room where she locked herself, crying she decided to become a stripper.
Then she suddenly realized she was still a virgin.
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Member Since: 11/28/2011
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Diana is about to find a job this morning. She resigned on her previous job which is a sales clerk because of low wage.
She went home and her father yelled at her, Diana ran upstairs do her room where she locked herself, crying she decided to become a stripper.
Then she suddenly realized she was still a virgin. She decided to call her friend Melissa and ask her what to do about her being virgin.
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Originally posted by TobeGrierson
She thinks through it because she is not comfortable in baring her skin but she wanted to have a job so bad with big wages so that she can support the medications of her mother who was diagnosed with acute tuberculosis.
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Originally posted by Sexy Boy
Then she suddenly realized she was still a virgin.
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Diana was facing a horrible and complicated decision. She really needed money and couldn't stay unemployed.
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Originally posted by TobeGrierson
She decided to call her friend Melissa and ask her what to do about her being virgin.
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EDIT: Her friend Melissa (a.k.a the town biggest sl*t) told her that beeing a stripper is not a bad job and if you're good at it, you can make 100$ a day.
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Diana is about to find a job this morning. She resigned on her previous job which is a sales clerk because of low wage.She went home and her father yelled at her, Diana ran upstairs do her room where she locked herself, crying she decided to become a stripper.
Then she suddenly realized she was still a virgin.So she cut up her clothes and made they more risque, she prowled the streets at night looking for a man to sleep with.
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Originally posted by SupremeGoddess
Diana was facing a horrible and complicated decision. She really needed money and couldn't stay unemployed.
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But the problem is she's still a virgin and she wasn't sure whom to lose it.
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]Diana is about to find a job this morning. She resigned on her previous job which is a sales clerk because of low wage.
She went home and her father yelled at her, Diana ran upstairs do her room where she locked herself, crying she decided to become a stripper.
Then she suddenly realized she was still a virgin.
How was she going to do this? She never took any dance lessons. She wasn't even a real ****! She had to learn and learn fast. Useless Melissa with her high morals hung up on her. It hurt, but what else did she expect? She was going to need a stranger's help and she knew there was only one number to call.
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