Staryu - You know...I was going to come in here on my high horse complaining about being trolled in the first round, but...I was actually entertained by your entry! I don't know if there's any truth to the story you told, but I think facets of your personality DID show throw on this entry...which is definitely a way to approach a challenge about YOU. If you make it through to the next round, though - please don't make a habit of trolling. <3 There will be rounds to be funny on, believe me!
Navyofbadgals - Your reasoning for Unwritten and What Now are very similar...you could swap the order they came in around and it'd still make sense. However, since it seems you don't really know yourself yet, it was nice to just say that, instead of making something up that isn't you. There was a general "lost" feeling I got from this, so it's at least a bit cohesive.
IcarusIsFlying - I felt a lot of what you had to say wasn't needed...the off-hand comments, mostly. It would've been fine if it was funny, but it just felt like I was finding out needless information. I mean, I'm sure this is you, but...I feel like this could be about any gay English guy living in New Zealand.
Jaxswim - Odder.
Pretty sure that's incorrect English! But about your entry itself, I like how you actually put forth at least a bit of emotion in this. The way you decided to describe why these songs meant something to you is what really pulled me in! It's easy to just list 3 songs and what they mean, but you did it in a way that felt genuine and unique, so I appreciated that!
Dessy Fenix - Well, you didn't lie @ the first song. Know Yourself is an excellent choice in a trinity about yourself...go figure, right?
Anyway, your deconstruction of "Schoolin' Life", and how it applies to you as a gay male, was the highlight for me. I really love when people can find their own ways to relate to a song, even if its not how originally intended. I think everyone should be able to find their own meanings in songs, and you did that in a way. It was that part that I felt like I got to know you a bit better.
Sam - Your entry looks clean! Good job on the graphics.
Anyway, I think it's really cute how you decided to relate the songs that mean something to you with your actual name. The best part was that it didn't come off as tacky or forced to me; I know for a fact "Animal" is really important to you, for example! I think even if I hadn't known that beforehand, reading about why you chose it would convince me. Overall, I think this was a great start!
Pecinta Mariah - Although it kind of annoyed me at first how your songs were in collapse tags, with no indication of what your songs are going to be BEFORE I click the collapse tag, I do think you ended up adding a cute little touch to your entry, blatantly stating 3 things that you are, and a song that correlates to that. It's like you built a little TL;DR in there (I read it, don't worry!) Anyway, I found out a bit about who you are, without being bogged down with walls of text, yet I still felt a personal touch here. Good job on that front!
MusicLoverDude - Okay, so the way you chose to format your entry is a bit...messy. I'm not exactly sure how to describe it, but it could be cleaner. That's not the important thing here obviously, but it's something to keep in mind! Anyway, I meant it when I said you could use 3 pop songs if you could convince me, and to me...you did. I really love how you related the lyrics in the bridge to your own experiences in life to build a deeper connection to a song most others would just find to be a "BOP!!", and I think it's a testament to my personal belief that a song doesn't have to be a ballad to mean something. Also, this was very undeniably you! I don't think I'd be able to see any one else doing an entry like it. My best piece of advice is to make your text more pleasant to read next time.
Witch_Privilege - Short and sweet, okay! I thought your description for Just Dance was the best part, because I think a lot is portrayed just in the one part about dancing around in your apartment to the song. Other than that, little pieces of personality were spinkled through this entry, and it was a really nice touch. Way to go
jpow - I was going to yell @ you for the small ass text on the first part, but let me not. Like I feel like I just watched you grow up and now I'm all emotional.
I could see these images in my head as I read on, and you just described everything so perfectly, and your song choices couldn't be more fitting for the story you decided to tell. It was very obvious that they all were SOMETHING to you, and I genuinely appreciate that!
Petals - Petals, the rarest PePe. I would've appreciated context to these songs...I thought the "Act" idea was cute, but...to me, it just felt like these were the first 3 songs that came up on shuffle in your iTunes and you decided to make an entry out of it.
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A Bomb - Yes this is very Bomb! I know it's Bomb because 3 seconds into your entry and I am attacked for my skin color.
But yes, personality is bursting at the seams here, and that makes your entry a stand out! I liked the inclusion of a favorite line because I'm just sitting here thinking it could've legit been written about you (especially the last one :eek) Just remember to not **** up your formatting next time and we'll be fine!
Supowerpower - The inclusion of an instrumental was a very bold choice! I loved it because you basically HAVE to put your own meaning to the song; there's no lyrics to tell you what you should be thinking, seeing, or feeling. It's up to you as a listener to make your own story for it, and what you may find within it can be more revealing than somebody else's words ever could. It's a pretty small thing that I think added a lot to your entry. Sidenote: I'm really sorry to hear about your mother. Losing a parent isn't easy, I know.
Theus - The "Love" trinity hasn't happened yet.
This tells me nothing about you, either.
Musickid203 - Definitely original.
The songs seem like an odd mismash of songs, but at least you made your entry entertaining and unique.
wesleywalrus - Welcome back to the game, Kitt! I thought Adam didn't let winners play again, but I was wrong! ANYWAY, I liked the inclusion of "Anytime You Need a Friend"...I guess, to me, it tells me a lot about the type of person you are. It was a real stand out choice in your entry.
Yvess - SCREECHING @ LIFE OF THE PARTY'S SINGLE COVER.
I liked the picture you made up top, though.
Anyway, I am confused about something. You say in the beginning "I am not a fan of changing who I am just to get what I want even if I am living in a world that is constantly developing and changing.", however, the quote you highlighted in "Breakaway" includes "make a change" - most likely referring to a change in ones self. Also, thematically, they all felt very one-note...I get that it's important to be yourself, but I still don't know what you're like as a person.
Kyle. - Welcome back to Trinity! Your persistence is to be admited to be honest.
Anyway, the biggest issue I had with your entry is that to describe one of your choices, you used a quote from the artist herself. It tells me what the song means to HER, but not to you. Besides that fact, I did get to see some parts of you in the first and third songs, so that's good.
Colton Haynes - The entry was very introspective. You let us into your mind a little bit, and I think that's a great way to approach the "Me" trinity. I learned some character traits about you through this entry, so I think on that part you did a good job!
Rian. - I'm on mobile so I can't write much sorry.
All this told me is that you stan for people and have no identity outside of it.
genetic fail - Although simplistic, you told a story about personal experiences throughout the entry, which I thought was a creative approach! The only thing I would've suggested is that there be a bit more depth.
Prismatic - Invisible was a pretty good choice, I think; It's one of those songs that feels personal to everyone. Anyway, I like how you had a story to tell with your entry, moreso than just slapping three songs together and calling it an entry. I also liked how you weren't afraid of alienating judges by including a K-Pop song (although 2 of us are K-Pop stans, lucky 4 u!) Solid overall!
rl231 - I wasn't sold on "Hello" at first, but the fact that you gave the song your own personal twist is what convinced me. The other 2 choices didn't really seem as out of place, though, and you gave good reasoning behind your choices!
8thPrince - Okay first of all, the formatting was so on point! Obviously, you could have done the same thing to similar effect without it, but it was a very nice touch! I absolutely adored how unique of an entry this was, too! You gave us insight into the type of person you are in a very creative way, and all the song choices made perfect sense for the facets of your personality you were conveying! I'm shocked there wasn't even one K-Pop song, though.
Marvin - I don't really think using a song not even technically released was a good idea, as we don't have any semblance of an idea of what it sounds like. It's very hard to judge a song on that. Besides that point, I think you had fair reasoning for the songs you chose.
Moonchild - I love the story of how your current name came to be.
It made such a cute pairing with "Fly Me To The Moon", too! Your song choices, for me, definitely stand out because I honestly hadn't expected anyone to put songs like it on their trinities, and it lets me have a good picture of the type of person you are - which is the whole goal of this challenge, Well done!
URBAN - First of all - you're a liar!
You murdered me in that Slasher game.
No, but seriously, I always see you trying to engage with other players in any game you play. You're so welcoming to others, so I would say that you didn't really lie with the first part of your entry. The whole aura surrounding your entry showed a lot of personality, which is a really good thing given the premise of this challenge.
lovesong - The way you decided to present your entry was very Tumblr in a non SJW way! Anyway, I do think your write ups were better than the song choices themselves, but that's not to say they were horrible or anything - they just could've been better~