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thank you matty for the amazing banner!
[episode 9 - the burn book - the elimination]
our top 3 have completed the challenge, and the judges have spoken! first, i will share the comments (if provided) by the judges concerning each entry:
Nait Phoenix
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Originally posted by Matty
It's not really even a burn. I know you mentioned that you had difficulty in this challenge because you can't say mean things to people, but Julian knows this was for fun. I wish you would have dug more and got into it.
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Originally posted by Mitchie
He's the second best for me. I mean, he used simple phrases yet he managed to come up with an effective drag.
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Originally posted by ChapStick
i enjoyed the "miss-try-too-hard" comment, but in the end i think your entry lacked the creativity i have come to expect from you in the past. remember the consistent quality of your entries in top member a while back? i miss that. Doc has been the frontrunner for a while now, and i'd like to see someone challenge that position.  |
ắttitudé
I don't really mean this. 
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Originally posted by Matty
Miss Diego, Dora's lessor cousin... what is this? I feel you did not use this opportunity well to burn Julian like I know you'd be able to do. Reading your entry felt like watching a cat trying to growl like a lion. On top of that, it is VERY similar to what was said in Mean Girls plus and minus a few words.
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Originally posted by Mitchie
I won't say that it's that bad. I actually think that it's quite good but there are other things that he could have said other than "fugly skank." I mean, it's kind of weak compared to the other entries.
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Originally posted by ChapStick
the fugly skank part...  i agree with matty and mitchie. as for the wooper comment, i thought that was quite funny. wooper is adorable, though.  i really think you could have done A LOT more with this. you and nait had very similar entries style-wise... which definitely made doc's entry stand out even more. this was the semi-finals. we needed more from you.  |
Doc
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Originally posted by Matty
I loved your entry. I loved the links to his twitter and the blog post about his nudes, it gave it that extra bitchy touch. One negative is that in a real burn book you wouldn't be able to do that. The other negative is your wording, it feels a little lack luster like some words could be taken out.
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Originally posted by Mitchie
Well, his entry is the best (as always  ). He really dragged you with that.  |
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Originally posted by ChapStick
i have nothing to say. pure brilliance.  |
now to find out who is eliminated and who your top two are...
your entry this round didn't impress the judges, but you hung in to reach the final 3! you made it into the populATRLity trinity. unfortunately, the road ends here for you in the competition. it was a pleasure having you! 
the next challenge will be posted tonight! you better be ready to BRING IT!
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i bet.
