I looked at three random entries from each batch and here were my thoughts on them (note: I'm not a judge):
Batch 1:
- Your first song was the highlight because it was the most unique. Your entry was the strongest when you used very personal details; it makes the whole thing more enthralling. Really good and solid entry. You might need to chill a little with that writing.
- This really stands out of the crowd, and I like it for that! It's unexpected and I think it's gonna be a dark horse entry this round. The last song was kinda a let down in comparison to the other two.
- I'm glad you connect to these songs so much, but you kept everything so general and your song choices weren't anything very interesting either. This entry is like a song that tries to be so relatable that it doesn't say much of anything.
Batch 2:
- Your trinity was okay in a technical sense, and the song choices were interesting, but it left me wondering what the point was. You don't need to tell a sad story, but it should feel like there's a point. Why were these the three aspects of you that you felt needed to be written about? I also don't think your third song fits what you're saying it's about.
- It didn't really seem to have any driving force forward; you were just stating three aspects of yourself without any intent behind it. However what you wrote, especially for your third song, was really interesting.
- I don't think this fit the challenge. I'm glad you had a focus but this seems really thrown together to me and it isn't what I was asking for in this challenge.
Batch 3:
- I thoroughly enjoyed this! It was a good read and I like how you split it up. You showed with this entry it's definitely possible to have a great trinity with only pop or pop-like music. It also felt connected and cohesive. I do wish you told a more unique story.
- Really really cool although I'm not sure I get it? I still hope you continue to bring this kind of ambition.
- It felt like you were just stating facts about yourself. It's great that you're this kind of person, as you say, but why is this something that's one of the three most important tenants of you? It doesn't really seem like you asked yourself that question.
If you want you can guess who is who.
Also
https://www.dubtrack.fm/join/holy-trinity