Quote:
Originally posted by Arturdork
Time Passed
Time passed here in my room
Time passed without you
And in my memories
It hurts looking
Always tripping on my clock
Now the time will almost stop
If only you can hear me
I need to tell you
Even though
From what had happened
It wasn't my intension
I wanna tell you that
I know that I was wrong
So what if I lost
I'm sorry if I failed
I wanna tell you that
I'll never forget you
And if you can't come back
It's not easy for me
Living like this
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I like the line bolded. It's a really cool metaphor. The problem is the title isn't very memorable, especially in comparison to that line. If you changed "time passed" to something more powerful and strong, then these lyrics could reach their full potential
I've got a matching beat with this too ya'll.
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