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Tournament: PLΔTINUM HIT 7
Member Since: 1/6/2014
Posts: 1,893
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My reviews weren't bad or anything but is it ever too late to show my true potential?
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Member Since: 1/1/2014
Posts: 41,181
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Originally posted by Obsession
I'd seriously like to read it tbh. It sounds unconventional and I'd love to see how they approached songwriting. I like the idea of a different approach.
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I think that what you imagine this song to be is far from what it actually is, but I feel like the member won't post it, so I'll just let it linger as a PH legend 
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ATRL Contributor
Member Since: 9/2/2011
Posts: 21,728
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My first mixed review 
But it was very helpful too! I need to be sure to be more careful with word choice, thank you Bloomers!
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Member Since: 4/14/2011
Posts: 48,397
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Thanks to Tymps and Bloomers for reviewing my song too! 
Honestly if I were a musician I'd be a mess, I guess I'm more of a free spirit poetry kind of guy I don't really like being limited by meter and rhymes and all that. It just flows from my heart
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Member Since: 1/1/2014
Posts: 41,181
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Originally posted by ClarksonSlays
Meh. We get scores on a set day or you decide when you receive them?
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Guuuuuuuurllllllllllllll
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Member Since: 1/1/2014
Posts: 41,181
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Originally posted by LoKoPaNdA
Oh wait I just saw the review for my song. Thanks Truth Teller, did I lose or something? The insight was helpful either way  |
Results are tomorrow, so you'll find out soon  
I can't wait to see what you can deliver next after WF/BF so I hope you make it through 
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Member Since: 2/26/2012
Posts: 23,655
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So let me explain what my song is about
It's about misery of someone who would feel better when he/she hurts someone to keep her/his "sanity"
my song is definitive and I tried to position myself as "Misery" itself
and I know it sounds like a poem rather than a song (poem can consist of rhyme and rhythm and syllable too, well depends on the style of writing) and Elegy, Ballad and Imagery are my types (I joined the Department of Literature faculty btw)
by joining this competition, I hope I can learn to write simple yet powerful songs with great rhymes and rhythm
Thanks for your inputs guys!
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Member Since: 1/1/2014
Posts: 41,181
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So, I'll give you some schedule details so that you know what's going on
All the scores are in minus Matty's. However, it's barely been 24 hours since the deadline closed, so if he needs more time, it's completely understandable. The game has already moved at 4 times the standard pace of the games section, with 55 reviews from 3 judges coming 24 hours after the deadline closed, so we're way ahead of schedule and we'll continue doing the best to make the game run smoothly without long waits and gaps.
The second challenge is ready, I'll start discussing it with the judges very soon and we also have 2 possible numbers for eliminated contestants, but I can't reveal either of them yet.
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Member Since: 8/17/2013
Posts: 5,341
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Originally posted by Truth Teller
I think that what you imagine this song to be is far from what it actually is, but I feel like the member won't post it, so I'll just let it linger as a PH legend |
They probably won't, and tbh I'm not really sure what I'm supposed to be imagining for this song.
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Member Since: 1/1/2014
Posts: 41,181
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Originally posted by Obsession
They probably won't, and tbh I'm not really sure what I'm supposed to be imagining for this song.
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I think you imagine it as an unconventional, quirky, unexpected song with an intriguing topic...
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ATRL Contributor
Member Since: 8/19/2013
Posts: 43,104
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I honestly don't know what my song is about. The roses blooming in cheeks is about my crush and how his cheeks are always red, the aurora line and the following rose line was just luck. The silver and gold line is about my crush being obsessed with someone else exactly the way I am with him (when I'm so much better honestly  ). Finally the "stuck on her" part just felt right, he was dating a girl for a while when I liked him, but then he came out so he ain't "still stuck on her." So it's about him, but kind of not too, because we're not really friends or anything like the aurora and rose line suggests, but we're definitely acquaintances.
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Member Since: 8/17/2013
Posts: 5,341
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Originally posted by Truth Teller
I think you imagine it as an unconventional, quirky, unexpected song with an intriguing topic...
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Well...from the reviews, I'm really expecting a Jam (Turn It Up) remix about a movie character.
But if it's more along the lines of yours, it'd be a pleasant surprise
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Member Since: 1/1/2014
Posts: 41,181
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Originally posted by Obsession
Well...from the reviews, I'm really expecting a Jam (Turn It Up) remix about a movie character.
But if it's more along the lines of yours, it'd be a pleasant surprise
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It isn't
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ATRL Contributor
Member Since: 1/1/2014
Posts: 22,001
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Only two more reviews left
Overall, not negative, more mixed. Im happy 
Especially for being my first entry, I'm currently listening to sia + getting slayed and being inspired for my next song
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Member Since: 2/26/2012
Posts: 23,655
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let me write a sonnet for my next song, I should read more Dante and Shakespeare's work
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Member Since: 8/19/2013
Posts: 2,514
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Welp it was good knowing you guys but I'm obviously not making it thru!! 
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Member Since: 1/1/2014
Posts: 41,181
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Originally posted by ClarksonSlays
I honestly don't know what my song is about. The roses blooming in cheeks is about my crush and how his cheeks are always red, the aurora line and the following rose line was just luck. The silver and gold line is about my crush being obsessed with someone else exactly the way I am with him (when I'm so much better honestly ). Finally the "stuck on her" part just felt right, he was dating a girl for a while when I liked him, but then he came out so he ain't "still stuck on her." So it's about him, but kind of not too, because we're not really friends or anything like the aurora and rose line suggests, but we're definitely acquaintances. |
Sometimes luck works out for us. It was clear to me that the song was not overthought, which worked in your favour. It was on point without being necessarily polished but everything came together, made sense and surved a purpose imo. I hope you can recreate this next week if you make it through
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Member Since: 7/15/2012
Posts: 30,915
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Originally posted by Truth Teller
So, I'll give you some schedule details so that you know what's going on
All the scores are in minus Matty's. However, it's barely been 24 hours since the deadline closed, so if he needs more time, it's completely understandable. The game has already moved at 4 times the standard pace of the games section, with 55 reviews from 3 judges coming 24 hours after the deadline closed, so we're way ahead of schedule and we'll continue doing the best to make the game run smoothly without long waits and gaps.
The second challenge is ready, I'll start discussing it with the judges very soon and we also have 2 possible numbers for eliminated contestants, but I can't reveal either of them yet.
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If I'm in danger, save me. If I'm not, eliminate the higher number of people
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Member Since: 1/1/2014
Posts: 41,181
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Originally posted by Eros
Welp it was good knowing you guys but I'm obviously not making it thru!! |
You were in my top 10 so you never know
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Member Since: 1/1/2014
Posts: 41,181
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Originally posted by HausofNiko
Only two more reviews left
Overall, not negative, more mixed. Im happy
Especially for being my first entry, I'm currently listening to sia + getting slayed and being inspired for my next song |
Someone's not paying attention in class
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