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Originally posted by Truth Teller
Just tried it at the gym and it goes OFF
Which makes me even more furious for Remy Ma, cause this would've been bop of the decade if she hadn't screwed up
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Listening closely, I can live with 99% of the verse. I particularly like these bars, which are actually quite poignant considering JoJo's career trajectory:
"I was all the way down, you was all the way gone
Now you tryna come back cause I'm all the way on"
The problem is the ending is one of the most inane endings of a rap verse in history.
Cause it not a compliment when I say you fab
You just a F-A-B with your fake ass, bitch
Her attempt to add a comma into the final line of a verse just doesn't ****ing work. She tries to rhyme "fab" and "ass", but due to the metre of the verses, "bitch" is the syllable that should rhyme with "fab. All she had to do was remove "bitch", end her verse with "ass" and find another insult/syllable before "ass" or "fake." and it would be fine. Ugh.