The judges are not inept to understand your lyrics. Your main problem is the opposite, that we have the ability to go a little beyond fancy word choices and realize the execution lacks logical connection and meaning. You weren't the only one who got this comment and it's fine for round 1.
What is a meter?
And okay, well I'm not about to "sort this out" via PM and then have you spit in my face.
Although I will say, Euphorae told me to change one line and told me the judges would drag me for it but it happened to be TT's favorite line in my song. Glad I listened to myself for that one
And mess @ me always getting praised for my ideas but never the execution
Ngl sometimes I feel like the judges are too inept to understand my lyrics so they just take it for face-value but I know I need to be more accessible but then I end up being too basic so I add more imagery and it's just a basic imagery-filled clunky ass mess
Does anyone else feel me on this?
Btw I literally CANNOT @ my song describing what my place in the competition rn.
Damn right, it's a Ceiling of Fate.
If I get a critique like yours I'm gonna be mad because my song makes perfect sense from start to finish. We'll truly know if these judges are inept then.
Although I will say, Euphorae told me to change one line and told me the judges would drag me for it but it happened to be TT's favorite line in my song. Glad I listened to myself for that one
Originally posted by Hugamari on my acclaimed hit Siren Song
****ing hell, man. You always take these types of things and impress me with them. It's almost as if you can feel the ups and downs in the rhythm of the song like the song itself is water. It truly amazes me whenever I think of that first round and I placed you second-to-last, right above Girlicious, and now you're here and still managing to impress me! If there was ever an underdog, it would be you.
