Tournament: ATRL's BTM 2009 - THE RE-UNION SHOW - ROUNDS 3 & 4 - Page 39

The Knowledge

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Originally posted by Flashing Lights

This is way too much. The deadline should be extended. Make the challenges fast and simple.

I agree. Nobody will read everybodys story when it comes to voting

Evan

I say mylicious should kick all these lazy asses out of the house! And I thought I was lazy.

The Knowledge

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Originally posted by Evan

I say mylicious should kick all these lazy asses out of the house! And I thought I was lazy.

I'm not lazy lol. I just have other things to do. And writing stories will not be my priority right now.

Evan

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Originally posted by keriihill

I'm not lazy lol. I just have other things to do. And writing stories will not be my priority right now.

Excuses, excuses. You're on ATRL for hours responding to threads, so why can't you take time to write a story?

The Knowledge

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Originally posted by Evan

Excuses, excuses. You're on ATRL for hours responding to threads, so why can't you take time to write a story?

Wow. You time my posts?

Scary. I'm not on for hours.
I need to go somewhere now. Bye

Evan

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Originally posted by keriihill

Wow. You time my posts?

Scary. I'm not on for hours.
I need to go somewhere now. Bye

lol No I just see your name on "the members online" thing for hours. :-/ So don't try to lie!

The Knowledge

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Originally posted by Evan

lol No I just see your name on "the members online" thing for hours. :-/ So don't try to lie!

I keep it logged on so i don't have to type my password everytime i intend to browse

Evan

Whatever. You're online right now, so you did have the time to make up a story.

Also, I thought you needed to go somewhere?

JimMy

I wrote my story last night but I won{t post it here hahaha

I sent my stuff to mylicious

The Knowledge

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Originally posted by Evan

Whatever. You're online right now, so you did have the time to make up a story.

Also, I thought you needed to go somewhere?

I have to go to school for a bit. I need school shoes, I lost mine at the gym. My brother is still at work so...

mylicious

Okay..
Ya'll wanted to be part of the Game, now when it gets tough, some of you say that the challenges are way to much?
Come on...If you don't wanna do the Challenge, quit the game, end of story!

Deadline will be tonight, you have about 10 hours from now, Challenge was opened for days now and almost nobody expect Evan & Jimmy posted or pmed me their stories..

And be ready @ Elimination tonight for a shocking Challenge!!!

Crank_It_Up

Tonight?!?!

I better get my act up and finish it asap.

muzik_freek

Putting the finishing touches on mine

muzik_freek

Title: Rapture
Genre: Drama
Rated: PG-13

Trailer
*Soft piano music* Matthew has always lived a hard life, constantly mistreated by his father (Dad: I don't give a **** what you're doing, do what I tell you to now), mocked by his peers (Random teenager: God you're so stupid!), then his life got hit harder (Mom: Honey, we’re moving to California.) Now, 2000 miles away from where he called home, his life begins to turn around (Mom: Why don't you go outside and meet new people. - Matthew: I just want to get out of here.)
(Dad: Hey we got internet, now, so you can't talk to your so-called friends back in Illinois) (Matthew: [to himself on the computer] Whoa, this girl is awesome!)
(Matthew: [on phone with best friend] Dude, I met her online, and she's the most amazing girl ever, but she lives in Pennsylvania, but I'm gonna go see her)
(Mom to Dad: Baby! he’s run away and don’t know where he’s at)
(Matthew: [to himself on the bus] Can’t wait to surprise her like this!)
*Matthew arrives to her house and peeks through the window*
(Matthew: [crying on the phone with best friend] I peeked in and saw her making out with another guy)
Based on a true story
(Girlfriend: You can forgive me right?)
A tale of deception.
(Best friend: YOU DID WHAT!?)
One’s attempt at happiness…
(Matthew [to Best friend on phone]: It’s my decision and I’ll do what I want.)
… can cause the biggest misery.
(Best Friend [to BestFriend2]: He’s making idiotic decisions)
(Matthew [crying to himself]: I’m so stupid!)
RAPTURE
Coming 2010

Plot
Matthew is a 16-year-old living in Illinois, who has had a bad life. His father treats him more like a slave than a son and being really shy, he has only a few good friends. One day he got the news that he and his family were going to move to California. This news really upsets him but has to move there since he has no one in Illinois to live with.
Now in Cali, Matthew is very quiet, rarely leaving the house, only for school. He stays in his room playing his guitar most of the time. For Christmas he’s given a laptop and the dad sets up internet in the home. Matthew spends most of his time on the computer now, chatting with his friends when he stumbles upon someone on the internet. It’s a girl living in Pennsylvania who shares many similar interests as Matthew, her name is Laura. They begin to talk online, overtime on the phone, and eventually decide to become boyfriend and girlfriend, despite never meeting each other.
Matthew gets anxious to see her so he saves up to buy 1 bus ticket to go see her. Knowing his parents won’t approve, he decides to run away and head to Pennsylvania. He doesn’t let her know that he is on his way in order to surprise her. However, he was the one to receive the big surprise. He arrives at her home 2 days later and was about to ring the bell when he saw in the window Laura making out with some other guy. Instead of knocking, he just leaves heartbroken. Matthew calls his best friend for advice on what to do, but when the advice is to confront her about it, he ignores it.
He returns to his girlfriend’s and acts like he didn’t see a thing. For the next 4 days they spend time together but he never brings anything about her cheating. He eventually returns back to Cali after just having the time of his life. Once back home, he’s lonely again and in an effort to be closer to her, he decides to go to college at Pennsylvania.
It’s now months later and he’s getting ready to leave to college. He’s packed up and ready to go and saying his goodbyes when he hugs his best friend who whispers in his ear “don’t forget what she’s done and the pain you felt.” Matthew just looked down, got in his car and drove to his new home, which is still 3 hours from where his girlfriend lives. For weeks, he lives the life of a normal college student, school, work, and party. He keeps in contact with is girlfriend by talking to her every night before bed, but doesn’t plan to go see her for a couple more weeks.
Matthew’s world falls down again, just a few days before he’s supposed to visit her. His girlfriend calls him, like every night, except this time she was crying. She confessed that she has been cheating on him and now she’s pregnant. Matthew erupts, starts crying, and says he wants nothing to do with her. His roommate's friend, Melody, comes into the room to pick something up when she see's him upset. She begins to comfort him and he begins to feel better. They eventually spend time together and Matthew begins to gain loving feeling towards her. They start dating and Matthew is once again happy.
A couple months later, Matthew gets a call from Laura explaining her current situation. Her baby’s daddy has now left her and she is to raise this baby alone. She claims she needs someone and would like Matthew back, claiming she’s very sorry and has made a mistake. Matthew considers taking back his first love but is immediately talked out of it by his best friend. It was difficult for Matthew to say no, but he knew he would keep getting hurt if he took her back.
3 years have passed and we see the Chicago skyline. Matthew is now living in Chicago with Melody, across the street from his old home. He has finally living the life he always wanted.

Crank_It_Up

Title: Kryptonite

Genre: Thriller/Sci-Fi/Drama
Rated: PG-13

Storyline: What will you do if you had powers that you never knew and you were the reason of the whole new species appearing on Earth? Well, a college guy, Ben, is going through this typical, athlete, cool, all-around guy who's popular with girls. But when a new female teacher got hired...He knew something was wrong. She was there, everywhere he went. She was painful. Something about her was just off. Ben knew something was suspicious, something wasn't right. To his surprise, she's trying in every way possible to entrap him for love but when he found out she was an android, he has to WATCH out...for her...and others...or he'll be killed.

Summary: As seen in the beginning, Ben is packing up everything for his college experience and departures shortly after, away from his weeping parents who love him very much. When he arrives college, it's found that his cousin was largely popular former alumni so he was cool, getting into different girls and got good grades. Everything seemed to be going well for him but his heart pierced...all when Ben laid his eyes on that gorgeous new teacher, Miss Miana. Suddenly, girls didn't like him. He stank in playing football. His grades were going down the drain. Ben didn't understand what was going on first, but when he began seeing Miss Miana, everywhere...He knew. It was all her fault. Everytime she was there, his heart hurted, like Kryptonite hurted Superman. But all she was trying was to get his attention and love. In one scene, Miss Miana physically became stronger and stronger and proceeded to put in her efforts to rape him. Luckily, his parents came in one night and he made it out. Ben did report it to the police officers, unfortunately, Miss Miana turned on her charm and was let go free. Back to the cat-and-mouse game, Miss Miana was chasing him everywhere he went. So Ben finally decided and to check her out on the net to see what the hell was up inside her mind. An android. An android to kill everyone on Earth, but him first. Because he had the powers to wipe out the whole species. The teacher has now become pissed and went into the overload mode, chasing him still, but this time to KILL.
Ben has to run away, to avoid being drowned, choked, and destroyed in every way possible.
But he has to face them, when they arrive. With his newfound powers, Ben ends up destroying the whole species, barely...
Just months away, just when he thought everything was done, and his life was back to normal...
A whole new, even more dangerous species arrived and Earth is doomed. Will he save the world, again?
(The End)

mylicious

so there are still 5 missing...
Challenge will be closed in 2 hours!!

Angelo

LFRRRRRRRRRRRRR @ the challenges! This is torture mylicious! hahaha

JimMy

-Title: NEVER SAY NEVER
-Genre: Drama
-Rated: G

-Sinopsis: This is a dramatic story about dreams, a man who is going to face so many obstacles in life but is a fighter no matter what. This is the debut of Adam Lambert as an actor, Jimmy is the big brother from a poor family in California, they are devasted by a deathly earthquake and his family is almost broken but nothing is going to stop him even death, he is going to meet so many emotions but at the end the fame and glory is waiting for him with the arms wide open.

-Summary: This story starts in a place where the stars are impossible to reach and the dreams are in black and white... a little town in California. It's the year 1985 and all the people is recovering of a deathly Earthquake 2 weeks ago.
In the middle of the mess, destruction and chaos a kid with shine in his eyes is playing the guitar and singing while the people is throwing him coins and applauses... His name is Jimmy.
The enviroment in her family is heavy and dark, full of negativity and frustation. His father Joseph is an adamant person who hides scars from the past with his pride, her mother Marie a sweet woman who is abused by his husband; Jimmy is the first of 3 kids and has 2 sisters: Virginia and Rox.
Jimmy wants to be a biggest star and that's his dream but his father is insecure and is not supporting him, Joseph lost his legs because he has some complications with diabetes . Jimmy is playing the guitar because he need money to buy medicine for her sister Virginia who needs an open-heart surgery, his mother can't work because of her husband pride and Jimmy is at the front of the family as the big brother. Rox was rapped in the school and is pregnant, her father inmediatly slapped her in the face and she went down, the family is almost broken.
Virginia is the only member in the house supporting Jimmy's dream, everyday she pray to god for her family and her brother's dream, -"Can you play the song that I love, I want to hear it before fall asleep" she said, Jimmy started to play the song and then her heart just stopped at the middle of the song, it was a hard moment in Jimmy's life. In her funeral Jimmy's head starts racing mixed feelings and all the moments when his sister said: -"Reach your dreams, Don't stop!, you can do it, never say never", then he removed the tears and went to his house, took the guitar and all the money... Then he looked back and left a letter in the door.
The big journey of his life started, he had a coldest night ever playing his guitar in the middle of the night, he started to play Virginia's favorite song and his tears started to fall. Next day a ray of light touched his face and woke up, the first thing he saw was a beautiful girl with green eyes, she said: "Are you okay? Hold my hand, my name is Barbara and you are outside my house, I saw you through my window when you were playing the guitar, do you want a coffee?". He accpeted and they talked for hours about each life, she found something special in him, it was love at first sight.
"My father dorotheo has a record label, maybe if you play the song of your sister in front of him he could give you a chance!"
And it happened, they went to see Dorotheo and Jimmy played the song with his heart in the hand. Dorotheo was really impresed with Jimmy's talent and finally gave him a contract to start recording his first album!
Barbara invited Jimmy to her house, that's when he met Barby's sister Rosemary.
Rosemary fell in love with Jimmy and tried to catch his attention but failed, Jimmy is in love with Barbara. Jimmy found his inspiration in barby's eyes and wrote a lot of songs.
6 Months later Jimmy started the recording process at the same time a relationship with Barbara, Rosemary was really jealous and stole Jimmy's guitar. Rosemary destroyed the guitar and talked with her father trying to bash Jimmy's contract, saying too much lies, "Jimmy is not a good boy, he is looking at me in a bad way and tried to touch me" she said. Dorotheo ran to the studio and started to hit Jimmy in the face, "The police is coming".
Barbara slapped Rosemary in the face and she said -"You want to know the truth? Okay I'm going to talk, Jimmy is a good boy, too much good for me and he don't even look at me. I'm just jealous because you have everything and I'm empty"
Barbara started to cry and inmediatly called his father. Rosemary was sent to a school in europe and finally Barby and Jimmy were happy.
1 yeah later Jimmy finished his first album, the first single was accpeted in the radio and his career started! His dream finally came true. Then he went to his hometown to see his family again, Joseph started to cry saying "I'm sorry son, please forgive me...I'm not a good father for you and your sisters and I'll never be, I'm just blinded with my reallity and I was insecure... I just wanted to protect you" finally they closed that bad chapter with a hard hug. That day he went to the cementry and left a bouquet of red roses in his sister's grave. "You were right Virginia, Thanks for everything wherever your are".

THE END.

-Characters/Cast:
*Jimmy - Adam Lambert
*Virginia Isabell - Taylor Swift
*Rox - Leigton Meester
*Mrs Marie - Nicole Kidman
*Mrs Joseph - Robert De Niro
*Barbara - Katy Perry
*Dorotheo - Hugh Grant
*Rosemary - Ashley Tisdale

The Knowledge

I have an external exam in 5 hours. This story can wait. I'm sorry but it's only Friday morning.

arkl

Title: MY WAY
Rating: R-13

Teaser: The story happened in a suburban village of Memphis, Tennessee where the uncanny killings took place. For the 24th time on 24th of November, an old man died of the same murdering techniques as were the previous 23 victims of the suspect --- slithered necks, total derailing of 6th vertebrae of the spine and the shocking emasculation. Who could have such grotesque fatal torture? The answer lies in your lust.

Plot: Michael Dennis, a 28 year old police undercover investigates the chaos around Overnight KTV Bar and has taken the services of the resident star-of-the-night pole dancer/prostitute, Rebecca Fordham as an accomplice for a speedy revelation of the puzzling killer. Its been 5 months now and still, the pursuit for the total recovery of the order in their town is interminable. But one recurring theme keeps uprising everytime a new victim gets slayed: MY WAY by Frank Sinatra. According to reports, each casualty had sang My Way prior to their very death, causing a huge blockpoint but a pivotal element to deciphering the scenarios.

Eventually in the long run, the partnership between the officer and the ho is seemingly having a connection thats way beyond the professional border. Rebecca developed a soft spot and finally fell for Michael and so is Michael to Rebecca. Wedding bells are ringing...

The night after the 45th killing, November 25, Michael tested the waters firsthand. Grabbing the mic, Michael started vocalizing to the tune of My Way. With that, he will be able to lure the suspect and trap him under his control. Grace under pressure, Rebecca tried to hold herself up for the job in the center dancing while totally dumbfounded with Michael's drastic move. He could get kiilled! Later that night, the unexpected happened.

They were both found dead in Rebecca's room. Michael died the same way as all the other victims - slithered necks, total derailing of 6th vertebrae of the spine and the shocking emasculation. Rebecca baited all the men who sang My Way for a sexual pleasure deceitfully, ignorant of Rebecca's real deathly intentions. Rebecca's first commands the men to on the bed facedown, giving Rebecca a much more advantaged position on breaking the victim's 6th vertebrae using bare hands. Trace the slits and place the fingers at the breaks and press it down til the bone derails. Then goes to the ritual neck slitting and genital removing. On the other hand, Rebecca died of multiple stabs in the stomach. A blood dripped note was lying beside the bed table and it reads: "MD, I love you but I had to - RF".

It was found that Rebecca was suffering from a mental disturbance caused by an early childhood trauma based on the medical prescriptions the police found in her belongings. Along with it, a private diary dating back from an 11 year old Rebecca up to the present. It reads:

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THE END.