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Tournament: ATRL's BTM 2009 - THE RE-UNION SHOW - ROUNDS 3 & 4
Member Since: 6/12/2008
Posts: 7,308
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Hmm..just write your story 
It should not end after 5 sentences tho...
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Member Since: 6/7/2009
Posts: 15,638
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Hmm, I'm not sure.
Can you send me the pm I sent to you?
I can't find it on my sent items. 
I'll figure out something...I just gotta WERQ! 
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Member Since: 10/28/2008
Posts: 22,771
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OMG That was close.......
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Member Since: 9/7/2006
Posts: 8,163
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there better be a double elimination this week. gotta get bitches out of the houseeeee!
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Member Since: 1/19/2006
Posts: 4,466
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 Damn Hollywood has taken most of the good ideas.
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Member Since: 9/7/2006
Posts: 8,163
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ooooo..... i have an idea... but im gonna post it tomorrow.
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Member Since: 1/20/2009
Posts: 17,143
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Quote:
Originally posted by danitykanelover
there better be a double elimination this week. gotta get bitches out of the houseeeee!
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That's not me, I'm here to win this game. The title is mine b*tches!!!!
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Member Since: 6/12/2008
Posts: 7,308
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Hmm..
Challenge will be closed in 24 hours..
Are the housies dead?
What happened? So much Silence...
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Member Since: 6/7/2009
Posts: 15,638
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I'm going to post it tonight.
I'm still tweaking it to make sure it's the right one so I don't get eliminated. 
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Member Since: 6/12/2008
Posts: 7,308
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Quote:
Originally posted by Crank_It_Up
I'm going to post it tonight.
I'm still tweaking it to make sure it's the right one so I don't get eliminated. |
Great
Work, work, work
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Member Since: 2/14/2007
Posts: 15,229
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Quote:
Originally posted by mylicious
Hmm..
Challenge will be closed in 24 hours..
Are the housies dead?
What happened? So much Silence...
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Angelo SLAYED the BITCHES one by one 
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Member Since: 6/12/2008
Posts: 7,308
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Yall have time until FRIDAY
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Member Since: 9/7/2006
Posts: 8,163
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ok then im gonna post tomorrow. im so tired i need to just do my homework and go to sleeeeeeeeep.
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Member Since: 10/28/2008
Posts: 22,771
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Im waiting for someone to post first so I'll get an idea on how to construct it. 
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ATRL Senior Member
Member Since: 6/15/2007
Posts: 29,795
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i'm not even a contestant yet I asked mylicious if I could do it and he said yeah so I'm gonna PM it to him and he can choose whether to release it....
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Member Since: 6/12/2008
Posts: 7,308
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Okay, People,
this is Mattys Story:
its called....
SIN WAY
If made into a movie it would be "Rated R"
The "kinda long" story line:
Justin was the big man on campus, the player, the one. He met his biggest challenge one day and that challenge was a woman named Karen. Justin tried to be his usual self with Karen but things were different with her. He decides that she is the woman that he needs in his life and they become an item… That was all to change. One day, Justin’s brother Evan told him about a concert he wanted him to go to in Las Vegas. Justin was hesitant but decided to go. To kill time while there, the brothers go to a strip club where Justin meets the owner named Erin. The two hooked up and had a one night stand which made something in Justin snapped. This led him to murdering Erin and everyone else he contacted with. 5 months later he returns again after supposedly killing his brother. Justin then commits suicide because he didn’t feel he shouldn’t live anymore. Karen would never see her boyfriend again, and neither would their child…
The short summary of the entire movie/soon to be novel:
Justin was the biggest player on his college campus. He was known for hitting up the hottest women, have a one night stand, then sneak out of her house and never speak to her again. One day Justin spots this girl he’s never seen before and her name is Karen. Karen has met guys like Justin so she knows how to be precautious. Well Justin finally seduces Karen and does his usual player thing. This time he feels a sense of guilt and hurt that he can’t control when trying to “cheat” on Karen. Justin confesses that he can’t live without her and the two become a permanent item. Later on, Justin’s older brother Evan gets 2 two tickets to a popular underground band that’ll be playing in Las Vegas and wants Justin to go with him. Justin finds it hard to leave Karen but goes to Vegas anyway. While in Vegas, Evan tries to test Justin’s old ways by taking him to a strip club. There Justin meets Erin, the owner of the club and former stripper. He then gets so wasted that the next morning he finds him self in a motel room with Erin. He starts to freak out cause he notices he’s cheated on Karen. Justin doesn’t know what to do, then all of sudden something in him snapped [mentally]. Erin wakes up and decides to take a bath. While bathing, Justin comes in, plugs in the hair drier, drops it in the bath, and Erin dies of electrocution. He then goes to pay for the motel room and then before leaving he tells the manager that there was a dead woman in his bathroom. Justin is never seen again, but numerous murders were being reported. 5 months later… Evan gets a letter from Justin telling him to meet him in a specific location in the middle of the desert in Vegas. Once there Justin confesses that he’s killed all those people cause he’s talked to them and told them about Karen and didn’t want Karen to find out. Evan had a feeling that was the cause and told Karen which infuriated Justin. He then took out a gun and put it to his brothers head and shot… Justin, thinking his brother is dead, heads out into the busy streets of Las Vegas and shoots anyone that’s near. The police surround him and Justin breaks down. He takes the gun to his head and he’s about to shoot himself until he sees his brother alive. Evan tries to communicate with Justin to put the gun down but he won’t listen. Justin expresses that he doesn’t deserve to live anymore and pulls the trigger and falls dead. Back at home, Karen is watching the live footage crying. She then totally breaks down after seeing her boyfriend kill himself. The phone rings and Karen gets up to show that she is pregnant. The scene stops and fades to black as the screen says she was 6 months along. At also mentions after the previous fact, that as a child Justin had suffered from many major depressive disorders which caused the murder spree.
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Member Since: 7/15/2007
Posts: 6,502
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I think something like this might've been done already, but oh well, I worked really hard on this.
Title: The All-Seeing
Story Line:
Jenny, a 16 year old girl, notices the vanishing of many of the people around her. As more and more of her friends and family members disappear, Jenny breaks down and is put into rehab. After making her escape from rehab, she meets David Greene, a nice 19 year old who she falls in love with. David helps and guides her, but things change when they return from their visit to Jenny's old neighborhood, where people kept disappearing. They get into a fight, and after David leaves, Jenny finds that David is the one who killed the people around her, and that he was spying on Jenny for who knows how long. David returns while Jenny's talking on the phone with the police, and Jenny decides to end her life, plunging a knife into her head. David is caught for his murders, and is given the death sentence.
Summary:
16 year old Jenny Hartigan hears that several of her friends, classmates, and family members around her are disappearing. The story starts with the T.V. playing the news, stating that Seth Marshall, a 17 year old boy who was Jenny's ex, disappeared late one Sunday night after a huge party took place. Later, it's announced that her 8 year old little brother, Jonathan, had also vanished. Shocked, Jenny attempts suicide because she still loved her ex and she also really loved her little brother. Her attempt fails when another one of her classmates, Raymond Heether, talks her out of it. Raymond also goes missing a few days later, and Jenny loses her faith, and attempts suicide yet again. This time, however, the police come just in time to save her. Jenny is put into rehab, due to her concerned parents. Meanwhile, as she's in rehab, she hears news of 3 more of her classmates gone missing, Danity Minch, Krystal Niva, and Indigo Veronica, all three of which used to be her best friends at one point. Jenny breaks down in rehab, and later she's able to escape. Scared, lost, and lonely, Jenny meets a nice boy, David Greene, who she moves in with, and helps and guides her. 3 months later, she finds out that over half of her neighborhood disappeared, so she asks David to drive her down there. Jenny and David both acted terrified when they saw no one there. The same policemen who stopped her from committing suicide show up, and ask them what they're doing here. The cops state that all of the people who did not go missing were evacuated, and transported to a safe shelter, and that no one was supposed to step foot in the neighborhood. Jenny and David return home, where they get into a fight. David leaves after the upset, but meanwhile Jenny finds a key hidden in David's underwear drawer. Curious, Jenny attempts to use the key on every door in the house, but finally the key works on one door, and Jenny steps inside the room. Jenny nearly has a heart attack with what she finds in the room. Here, she sees the heads of all of the people who had gone missing on the shelves of a bookcase, and she found telescopes, video cameras, and pictures of her. She looks on the video cameras, and finds that David had been taping her every move the whole time. Jenny immediately calls the cops, but it was too late, as David returns. She then, at her most terrified state, breaks down yet again, and runs into the kitchen to grab a knife. She puts the knife to her head, and tells David that she knows what he's done, and plunges the knife into her skull. She drops to the ground, dead, as David starts weeping, and caressing the dead body in his arms. The cops show up, and arrest David. He's later given the death sentence in a trial. At the end, the funeral of Jenny is seen, and her parents are there, revealing that David never laid his hands on them.
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Member Since: 6/7/2009
Posts: 15,638
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Aw crap, that much?!
Guess it's a good thing that the deadline is Friday.
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Member Since: 11/5/2007
Posts: 19,997
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I'm gonna send my story tomorrow 
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Member Since: 11/30/2007
Posts: 26,796
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This is way too much. The deadline should be extended. Make the challenges fast and simple. 
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