An overall positive critique - I'm just glad it was a progression from last round, at least to Jackson. I do disagree with the "poetry" comments. The way I look at songwriting - it's practically poetry just put to music. When you say that a certain type of poetry wouldn't work in music - I don't really get at that. Our entry definitely wasn't the safe-commercial type, but that comment rubbed me off as if our entry needed to be more commercial / Top 40 like. Hm, maybe it's just our different perspectives. Am excited to see the other judges' reviews.
ANYWAYS, 3 more reviews and I'll post.
