I'm SO sorry! My phone died in school & I just got home! Explanations will be edited in later.
SAVE:
e437 - '1000 Forms of Fear' /// "Dressed In Black" (This really touched my heart and the song itself is absolutely phenomenal. I really don't know what else to say but that you are an amazing person and I hope you keep in that mind forever
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VDK - 'Salute' /// "They Just Don't Know You" (I could have never opened up the way that you did. And my vote isn't even just based on that or the fact that I'm a Mixer. I was actually really surprised by your choice, and I love how the song itself was a tiny risk since obvious, great choices "Little Me" and "These Four Walls" were available. Just an amazing entry overall and I offer my condolences
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Pedro - 'Shakira.' /// "Dare (La La La)" (Two for two! I REALLY love how you took this challenge and chose such an UNCONVENTIONAL song; this would probably be one of the last, if not THE last song to send in when someone thinks of "personal". I just love how you took a completely different approach, and it definitely was SUCH an experience to write about. I wish I could meet Queen Shaki as well
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OFF:
Capital B - 'Little Jagged Pill' /// "You Learn" (Uggggggghhhhh I HATE this, but while I loved the song, I just felt that the connection was too general compared to other entries. I'm sorry!
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Truth Teller - 'Bionic' /// "Stronger Than Ever" (I LOVED the song, but I was quite confused with your write-up. I felt that there was no consistent theme / concept in the essay, and that too many different concepts were introduced in one entry. I think if you just did one quote and elaborated on that, or picked one theme and strung two / three quotes consistently with a main idea, the entry could've been amazing!
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prezli - 'The Spirit Indestructible' /// "Believers (Arab Spring)" (Likewise with "You Learn", the essay was just way too general compared to the other entries. You could've included an example or two and elaborated since you had a good amount of words left!
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Dollas n Diamonds - '1989' /// "I Wish You Would" (I'm sorry, but I was just lost in that essay. I have an okay idea at the main message / connection you try to make, but with other entries they provide more concrete explanations / connections whereas your essay had me confused a bit
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