The answers to my clues:
1. Your application was in-depth and creative.
givemethatpop
2. You gave great reasons, but I don't know how seriously you're taking this.
rihannafan
3. Nothing really special about yours. The standard "I am top model because..." application.
KyKy
4. Fabulous application. Your quotes were perfectly used, and you gave us solid reasons.
Vulps
5. Strong entry, articulate...but nothing to really set you apart.
Josh
6. Your honesty is appreciated, but there's not really much to your application.
TheGeoKing
7. Really short...you could have put more time into making it great.
Zim
8. Your application was short, but I see potential.
Toasty
9. You're trying to be the bitch of this cycle? Mission accomplished.
True Skarlet
10. One of the most creative and effective applications. A definite 'in.'
DvnR
11. Did you type this on mobile? It's really really short.
Georges
12. Insipiring application, but almost...generic.
Jwow
13. Excellent reasons and everything was supported. Great job.
Ammer
14. It's almost as if your application was a joke and you meant to send in a different one.
P!nk
15. Wonderful job in setting yourself apart, but not being bitchy. Perfect.
Monkey
16. Very generic...I got no sense of who you are.
SLAYANNA NAVY
17. Everything a Top Member should be.
freebitch
18. You didn't really stand out, but I think you're worth moving forward. Make it fierce from now on.
QuiQui
19. Wow. Flawless.
Evun
20. Your application was so-so, and your reputation may hold you back.
Love<3
21. Creative, fun, and still being yourself. Perfect.
Owl