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Member Since: 8/18/2013
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Originally posted by Corsola
Did anyone even do fairy type this round? I really wanted to do something fantasy-like and magical to go with fairy type but I thought it'd be super picked so I didn't  |
fairy wasn't on the challenge list of types tho, and I guess you could only use the types provided in the challenge post
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Member Since: 8/7/2015
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Greetings Himeros
Let's sex
I wanna be gay above you
I wanna be G.A.Y
I wanna sell my sings
And chart good.
Don't let the ARTPOP era die.
Touch me, touch me, don't be gay
Touch me, Touch me RT Fave.
I wanna be your...
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Member Since: 3/15/2013
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Mess wasn't that just a random photo that didn't display every type? That's a mess if you're right
I kinda wish someone did fighting type and submitted a rap about beating someones ass
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Member Since: 2/4/2014
Posts: 7,207
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Originally posted by swiftie13
Post some of your favorite lyrics of all time. Go
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'emsum, summ, bluhm, brum, brumm, bum, carum, come, crum, ***, *** crumm, ***, come crumb, come *** dum drumb drum, from, frum, ft frum, garum glumm, glum genum g-grum gum gumm
harum, hum humm klum, crumb *** *** crumb crumf lumb lum, ma'am, marum, mum mum mum marum, neuron, pflum, phlegm plumb plumb, prem qualm rum prumprum rum, sham, slam shurum, schtum shum shum scrum scrumb scrum schrumm scthum slum slum sum squalm strohn, strum stun
Absurd, outword, ant bird, binkered, bluebird, byword, catbird, catchword, chauffeured, concurred, co-heard, cowherd, crossword, deferred, demurred, deterred, foreword, game bird, incurred, inferred, interred, keyword, kingbird, misheard, nightbird, occurred, password, prefered, preferred, quibbered, quest bird, redbird, reoccured, redbull, retford, reheard, reword, Ryheard, Scrub bird, see bird, sedge bird, sure heard, shorebird, snow bird, songbird, starbird, succored, transfered, transferred, uncured, unheard, unheard, unstirred, watchword, word, young bird, baby bird, firebird
What you mean?!
flying bird, frigate bird, gallows bird, gray catbird, gray kingbird, hummingbird, ladybird, mockingbird, myna bird, myrtle bird, overheard, phoebe bird, satin bird, thunderbird, tropic bird, time bird, undeterred, wading bird, wedding bird, word incurred, word insert, word preferred, word referred, work transferred
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Member Since: 8/19/2013
Posts: 26,488
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Somalia Bosnia
Cuba Colombia
Equador Mexico
Bhutan Morocco
Botswana Ghana
India Serbia
Libya Lebanon
Gambia Namibia
Bali Mali
Chile Malawi
Bequai St Vincent
Trinidad and Norway
China Canada
U.S.A. U.K
Nepal Nigeria
Ethiopia North Myanmar Panama
Philippines Nicaragua
Palestine and Greece
Peru and France
It's so simple do the dance
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Member Since: 1/4/2014
Posts: 6,751
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The judges comments are so low getting out...what is this, X Factor Afghanistan? 
Pears get delayed by a bunch of goats trying to cross the road making her way from Kandahar to Kabul for the show? 
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ATRL Contributor
Member Since: 8/19/2013
Posts: 43,104
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Originally posted by RihsusChrist(ATG)
The judges comments are so low getting out...what is this, X Factor Afghanistan?
Pears get delayed by a bunch of goats trying to cross the road making her way from Kandahar to Kabul for the show? |
I'm out
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Member Since: 1/1/2014
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Quote:
Originally posted by RihsusChrist(ATG)
The judges comments are so low getting out...what is this, X Factor Afghanistan?
Pears get delayed by a bunch of goats trying to cross the road making her way from Kandahar to Kabul for the show? |
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ATRL Contributor
Member Since: 4/3/2014
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Originally posted by Corsola
Did anyone even do fairy type this round? I really wanted to do something fantasy-like and magical to go with fairy type but I thought it'd be super picked so I didn't |
It wasn't an option
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Member Since: 8/7/2015
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Quote:
Originally posted by RihsusChrist(ATG)
The judges comments are so low getting out...what is this, X Factor Afghanistan?
Pears get delayed by a bunch of goats trying to cross the road making her way from Kandahar to Kabul for the show? |
Microwaved. 
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ATRL Contributor
Member Since: 4/3/2014
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Originally posted by RihsusChrist(ATG)
The judges comments are so low getting out...what is this, X Factor Afghanistan?
Pears get delayed by a bunch of goats trying to cross the road making her way from Kandahar to Kabul for the show? |
Hehfjdihebf bitch
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Member Since: 8/18/2013
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nnnn the out-of-the-blue ruthlessness
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Member Since: 8/18/2013
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Swimming Pool needs to pull a top 10
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Member Since: 8/19/2013
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Quote:
Originally posted by RihsusChrist(ATG)
The judges comments are so low getting out...what is this, X Factor Afghanistan?
Pears get delayed by a bunch of goats trying to cross the road making her way from Kandahar to Kabul for the show? |
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ATRL Contributor
Member Since: 4/3/2014
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Originally posted by Kunst
Swimming Pool needs to pull a top 10 |
Stan for Kendricks breakout smash
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Member Since: 8/7/2015
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I feel dumb flopping so early LOL but it's hard being an indie legend that needs 6 years to create an EP!
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Member Since: 8/19/2013
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Originally posted by rihsuschrist(atg)
the judges comments are so low getting out...what is this, x factor afghanistan?
Pears get delayed by a bunch of goats trying to cross the road making her way from kandahar to kabul for the show? |
نعم الحمد لله
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Member Since: 8/19/2013
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Post in my best of and not Temporal's to irritate her xo
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Member Since: 1/1/2014
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Originally posted by Citrus
Post in my best of and not Temporal's to irritate her xo
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same
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Member Since: 9/12/2012
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Hugamari's Comments
Batch 3, Part 2
(I may have more typos than usual, @ me with your lashings if you find 'em)
Citrus - Ellis Dee
Well, I know you weren't subtweeting me because I actually found the title of your song cringey just because it was so obvious what you were referencing. Anyway, on to the entry itself. It's better written than most entries this round, from a technical point, and you have an interesting concept, I suppose. Besides for you using "baptismal", though, I can't quite point out what it is that keeps it from really engrossing me. Maybe it's the lack of repercussion from doing LSD, thus romanticizing it, that bothers me. This whole song is the high. (Unless that bridge was supposed to be the crash, but you followed it up with the pre-chorus, which makes me believe otherwise.) Still, as I said, you have better technicality than most and a not completely played out concept, so I can't ride you too much for it.
Auburn - Burnt
"Was all I needed"*/"Is all I need"*. I get an odd amusement out of "my former self can burn in hell" because it sounds so dramatic it's almost funny.  Anyway, I'm going to tell you my biggest complaint for this song right now: It's too typical. Fire is a common trope in songs, and self-empowerment songs are a dime a dozen, so combining those 2 doesn't quite make it novel. You didn't give us a reason for needing to start over, and for that reason, I can't be invested in this song at all. It's too general to feel personal. This is also a very small tiny thing, but shell/hell and brain/rain aren't cute. I do stil see more from you, though, so don't think I gave up on you. 
Dylobs - A Backyard Grown from Blood and Tears
You getting this exclusive new type tea from Pokemon Stars.  Come ON green type! Anyway, I actually like how you told a story here, and you incorporated your type without your song being ABOUT the type; that's something else I really liked. Some particular lines I was fond of were "...where dead limbs collapse onto fallen leaves", I don't find this important to the story, but it sets a tone, and I think it reflects how the girl in this story feels. The final two lines are SO powerful as well. I enjoyed the personification of the trees, almost as if they're her friends who want to help, but don't know how. I may be giving you too much credit here, but I think this was a really well-told story. I do have some issues, such as rhyme choices (briskly, in particular, bothers me. Don't ask why because I don't know!) I am, however, willing to look that over for now!
Achilles. - Happy Little Bluebird
I feel like something changed between the last time I saw your entries to now, but I really enjoy your style this time around. Once again, I'm in love with your chorus(es) (even if unencumbered is a bit big of a word to use). You have a song that isn't convoluted in its metaphors, and it feels bittersweet to go through. I'm going to believe that was your intent, and it works wonderfully. You also captured "Flying" type in a way I wouldn't have guessed anyone to, but it makes so much sense seeing it now. I think someone may have commented on this before, but the bridge, to me, was the weakest part, but it was adequate. I'm also going to add that I don't think the repetition in the outro did nothing for me, but the question posed did. To not end this on a bad note, this was another entry from you I really enjoyed. Way to go! 
8thPrince - Fourth State
I find this entry to be a tad wordy. An example of this would be the third line. I can see the idea behind it, yet I can't help but feel it could be more simply-stated. I'm also looking for the stand-out line here that really hits me, but the song is so into its concept that I don't really see it. I do appreciate the concept, by the way. (Amazingly, your entry is like UFO's entry with a wider vocabulary.) You have your technicalities down, but something feels very impersonal here. Maybe it's the vocabulary I mentioned earlier.
Legacy - The Fire is Melting
"Push me, drag me, slap me/Until I feel the cube melting in me" this is making me cackle Actually, this whole entire thing has me SHOOK, half-tempted to give you a 10 on that alone. However, this ignores a lot of technical things, like I didn't get a sense of rhythm at all in the verses. I enjoyed your entry for the novelty of it, if it's any consolation.
minho - Half Moon
I know the style you're going for is simple and not convoluted, and mostly you did that. One problem I have, however, was the repetition in the chorus. I know pop songs do that all the time, but I don't think it translates well into text. Now, with that, even with the relative simplicity of the lyrics, there were some parts I liked. "It feels like the path ahead/could fall off the edge of the road" put a very clear picture in my head in a way that isn't so on-the-nose about what you were going for. The whole entire start of the second verse was a real highlight as well. Like last round, I can very easily see vivid images of everything, and that's what imagery is supposed to do. That's lost on some people, I think.
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