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Tournament: PLΔTINUM HIT • season six
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Originally posted by Nnmmo
I don't like my comments at all. I feel like the judges are thinking that we're songwriting pro's. I mean...it's the first real song that I wrote so the comments were harsh. I didn't know that I had to be a top notch writer to compete in this tournament.
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We're just being honest, because that's the only way you'll be able to improve as a songwriter. Maybe this was just a bad one for you and you can do better. Take the criticism and use it to improve yourself. There were others that got just as much criticism as you. That being said, there are some really good songwriters here and it wouldn't be fair to them if we praised everyone equally. The truth is some songs were better in this round than others.
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Let me make results part 2 real quick and hopefully we can get them on the next page
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Member Since: 9/1/2012
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Originally posted by GotSkill
CONGRATULATIONS! Both of you took this incredibly difficult challenge by the horns and owned it! Both of you, as well as Speezy, will receive a special prize that will be revealed after results are all posted.
But we still have 21 ( ) more contestants unaccounted for. 12 of you will move on. 9 will have their journey end here. Stay tuned for more...
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I feel like these are connected somehow 
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Member Since: 8/17/2013
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Originally posted by GotSkill
12 more will make it, and 9 will be eliminated
OMG thanks for noticing. you're 4th, Obsession is 9th
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I wasn't even expecting top 11, omg.

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Member Since: 9/12/2012
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Well I won't be here for the live reveal of who gets eliminated, but I will tell you guys this: PLEASE do not let us discourage you from writing. In the first season on Platinum Hit, there were only 12 contestants, and I only came in 6th. Only? Yeah, the other writers all got eliminated due to no submission. I was the first actual elimination from that season.
I then tried again...I tried harder. I ended up winning the next season.
If writing is something you genuinely enjoy, do not take it hard if you get eliminated from this round!
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Member Since: 8/19/2013
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wait slay 
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Member Since: 5/22/2011
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Oh cool, I made it. Wasn't expecting that. Nice way to spend my break.
Back to writing my term paper on how Britain Colonialism in Nigeria Caused Religious Division Between the Muslims and Christians I go! 
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Member Since: 1/3/2011
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Originally posted by EuphorianSea
I am misunderstood. That's all.
But anyways, there's no need to take out all your frustation on me just because you didn't make it either.
I wasn't gonna leave your ass bone-dry without a clockT in there, was I now?
It's not my time yet and you know this.
'Easy target', my ass.
Pffffftttt!

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I just had all the words to "clock" you and use that Christina GIF
Its kind of fun going back and forth with you using this gif
Looks who's pressed now

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Member Since: 9/1/2012
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Originally posted by Hugamari
Well I won't be here for the live reveal of who gets eliminated, but I will tell you guys this: PLEASE do not let us discourage you from writing. In the first season on Platinum Hit, there were only 12 contestants, and I only came in 6th. Only? Yeah, the other writers all got eliminated due to no submission. I was the first actual elimination from that season.
I then tried again...I tried harder. I ended up winning the next season.
If writing is something you genuinely enjoy, do not take it hard if you get eliminated from this round!
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Originally posted by Celebrate
I just had all the words to "clock" you and use that Christina GIF
Its kind of fun going back and forth with you using this gif
Looks who's pressed now

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Aw, I didn't make the Top 12 and yet here you are...still as threatened as ever. How cute. The pettiness that revolves around such a foolish creature like yourself. Good luck sis! Hope you make it! 
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Member Since: 9/2/2012
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Originally posted by Hugamari
No, you don't have to be a songwriting pro. These comments are not to bring you down, by the way. We're only trying to help you improve with the comments.
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Yeah but there was a lot of biased opinions in them. I mean, just because you don't think that something isn't good, doesn't mean that it's really not good.
If you wanna leave some imagination to the song then that's your thing but sometimes I like songs that are straight up sex. Why should I get low scores if you think that the song should be wrapped in metaphors? I thought we'd get judges based on our word-choosing, rhyming overall flow of the song but no. I got judged on whether if the song should leave imagination or not (which is opinionated)
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Originally posted by EuphorianSea
Aw, I didn't make the Top 12 and yet here you are...still as threatened as ever. How cute. The pettiness that revolves around such a foolish creature like yourself. Good luck sis! Hope you make it! 
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You mean here WE are since we haven't exactly made the next part yet
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On some real talk,
I definitely think you'll make the next round. I on the other hand am not so sure based on my comments I received from the judges

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Ugh, lemme pack my suitcase.
Thankfully I packed light.
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Member Since: 1/3/2011
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I think we are waiting for the NEXT page 
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If you're going to do anything creative, be it painting, songwriting, graphic design, etc., you have to be able to take criticism. That just comes along with the creative fields.
I will add that while I don't think my criticism is 'harsh' per se, as a writer myself, I find it more helpful when someone points out where I can improve, and that's basically where I'll give the most detailed feedback. Since I gave very brief notes this time I didn't follow my usual feedback model, which is to point out both strengths and weaknesses, but I'll definitely do that later in the game!
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Member Since: 1/1/2014
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Final results are ready
Get to page 34 if you want 'em 
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Member Since: 1/3/2011
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Fine, to post til the next page we go GotSkill 
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Member Since: 8/19/2013
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If I make it, I'm going to be so shocked tbh...
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Member Since: 9/1/2012
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Originally posted by Celebrate
You mean here WE are since we haven't exactly made the next part yet
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On some real talk,
I definitely think you'll make the next round. I on the other hand am not so sure based on my comments I received from the judges

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Oh dear, my sources tell me otherwise.
I think you're fine btw, just trust and believe in the power of yourself. That's what I always do when **** hits the fan. Even if you are eliminated (in a hypothetical situation ofc)...at least you're capable of understanding WHY. If anything, I'm the one at risk especially when taking into consideration of me being a veteran in all of this. We'll have to prayer together, I guess, which is something I don't do that often sis. 
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Member Since: 1/3/2011
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I'm anticipating EuphorianSea taunting me if i don't make the next round 
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