[KeshasFansRose]

Originally posted by conatus

Congrats Colton and KeshasFansRose!

Thank you :hugs: congratulations, yourself

[KeshasFansRose]

Not me having wrote an unusually shorter lyrical song yesterday

[Skywalker]

Originally posted by JakeKills

All 140 words or less, once you remove the repeated parts (and the "oh" and spoken-word intros in a few cases).

Cher — Believe
Taylor — Welcome To New York
Rihanna — We Found Love
Dolly / Whitney — I Will Always Love You
Troye — Bite
Coldplay — A Sky Full of Stars
Joni — Big Yellow Taxi
Katy — Unconditionally
Kylie — Can't Get You Out of My Head
Madonna — Holiday
Perfume Genius — Queen
Lorde — Ribs
Sam — Stay With Me
Rihanna — Stay
Shania — Man! I Feel Like A Woman!
Taylor — Safe & Sound


The things you can say in 140 words.


The Big Three (Believe, Holiday, CGYOOMH) all represented. The Country Crossover Trinity (Dolly, Taylor, Shania) all here. Multiple Record of the Year winners.

Sometimes simplicity really is key!

[Achilles.]

Originally posted by Meowster

Sometimes simplicity really is key!

Simplicity has never been my specialty.



This is the worst possible challenge you could give me.

I literally wrote a 5-6 page essay for the ANTM finale. I don't do simple, brief, or concise. Look at that sentence. I just used three synonyms were one word would have sufficed.

[Skywalker]

Originally posted by JakeKills

Simplicity has never been my specialty.



This is the worst possible challenge you could give me.

I literally wrote a 5-6 page essay for the ANTM finale. I don't do simple, brief, or concise. Look at that sentence. I just used three synonyms were one word would have sufficed.

It's okay - I love being repetitious in my thought process and focus so much on definite connections (sometimes superfluously) that I would probably have issues with this challenge as well. Especially since all of my thoughts typically work in triplets lol.

[Dylobs]

Originally posted by JakeKills

All 140 words or less, once you remove the repeated parts (and the "oh" and spoken-word intros in a few cases).

Cher — Believe
Taylor — Welcome To New York
Rihanna — We Found Love
Dolly / Whitney — I Will Always Love You
Troye — Bite
Coldplay — A Sky Full of Stars
Joni — Big Yellow Taxi
Katy — Unconditionally
Kylie — Can't Get You Out of My Head
Madonna — Holiday
Perfume Genius — Queen
Lorde — Ribs
Sam — Stay With Me
Rihanna — Stay
Shania — Man! I Feel Like A Woman!
Taylor — Safe & Sound


The things you can say in 140 words.


The Big Three (Believe, Holiday, CGYOOMH) all represented. The Country Crossover Trinity (Dolly, Taylor, Shania) all here. Multiple Record of the Year winners.

Heartbreaking.

Even the best song off PRISM has less than 140 words

Walking On Air

[Intro]
Tonight, tonight, tonight, I'm walking on air(x2)

You're giving me sweet, sweet ecstasy
Yeah, you take me to utopia
You're reading me like erotica,
Boy, you make me feel exotic, yeah

[Pre-Chorus]
Just when I think I can't take anymore
We go deeper and harder than ever before
We go higher and higher
I feel like I'm already there

[Chorus]
[I'm walking on air (tonight)
I'm walking on air
I'm walking, I'm walking on air (tonight)
I'm walking on air]x2
I'm walking on air

This is pure paradise,
Even heaven is jealous of our love
Yes, we make angels cry,
Raining down on earth from up above

[Pre-Chorus]

[Chorus]

[Intro]

Heaven is jealous of our love
Angels are crying from up above

[Chorus]

Tonight, tonight, tonight, I'm walking on air
I'm walking on air(x2)

[Aurora]

Originally posted by JakeKills

Simplicity has never been my specialty.



This is the worst possible challenge you could give me.

I literally wrote a 5-6 page essay for the ANTM finale. I don't do simple, brief, or concise. Look at that sentence. I just used three synonyms were one word would have sufficed.

I'm the same and I won this challenge in Season 6, after being dead last the challenge before. Besides, you've got immunity and a Top 3 going towards your average. Unless you really **** it up, you should be fine.

Also mess @ all of those huge iconic songs and then "Unconditionally".

[Rimo]

am I eliminated?

[Rimo]

How the **** am I supposed to know what are interludes?
This ****ing **** sucking ***** Tinashe brought interludes with only laughing and "oh ****" and you call this short?
It's not my problem I want to be brought back

[Rimo]

This is injustice!

[Gavin.]

nnnnnnn


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Ok at 116 right now. Think I can do a second verse with 24 words

Guess no bridge though

[Nait Phoenix]

I have a perfect song for this challenge… that is 141 words long…

[KeshasFansRose]

I've got 2 songs I've wrote of 140 words or less but need to decide which one I should pick and refine. Anyone I can send them too?

[Nait Phoenix]

I'm still conscious… I'll be happy to read what you wrote…

[Aurora]

Originally posted by Qatari Monster

am I eliminated?

No.

Read why here: http://atrl.net/forums/showthread.ph...86504#30586504

Round 2 is here: http://atrl.net/forums/showthread.ph...87022#30587022

All links are and will always be in the second post, under the OP.

(Note: the challenge aim is 140 words, you can use less, but try to aim for as close to 140 words as you can as to make the most of it.)

[ausdaniel]

Anyone else willing to read mine please PM me Not to sound cocky, but I love my chorus. The verses though are the parts I'm unsure about. Happy to read yours!

[KeshasFansRose]

Originally posted by Nait Phoenix

I'm still conscious… I'll be happy to read what you wrote…

Sent

[Dylobs]

Originally posted by ausdaniel

Anyone else willing to read mine please PM me Not to sound cocky, but I love my chorus. The verses though are the parts I'm unsure about. Happy to read yours!

Only if I can send you mine

[Nait Phoenix]

Originally posted by Sam 

No.

Read why here: http://atrl.net/forums/showthread.ph...86504#30586504

Round 2 is here: http://atrl.net/forums/showthread.ph...87022#30587022

All links are and will always be in the second post, under the OP.

(Note: the challenge aim is 140 words, you can use less, but try to aim for as close to 140 words as you can as to make the most of it.)

Hey, Sam… my song goes over 140 words only because one part is repeated, but the end is different. Is there anyway you can overlook it?

Example:
Roses are red
Violets are blue
Everything gold
Belongs to you
Roses are red
Violets are blue
Everything gold
Isn't so new

[KeshasFansRose]

I debuted with a generic sex anthem and now I'm gonna fight for my creative freedom in round 2 with a more meaningful song. Y'all are getting a song from my second album, Badlands Dystopia