[Hugamari]

I ****ing hate that gif

Like how were there exactly enough volleyballs

[Jackson]

Originally posted by Temporal

My Siren Song was actual trash, I can't even lie. The first verse tho >

ugh my imagery was so on point that round

No man can resist
The roll of her hips
The rush of lust on her lips


Every man wants to hum along
To drown in the depths of her siren song
But even that girl gets a little lost
In the harmonies of her siren song


But secretly
The man rises from his dreams
And stumbles to the shore to find his love
But crushed and crazed
He won’t let the men escape
Till the bottom of the ocean is their home


Before He Cheats WHO?

[UFO]

[Bey Admired]

Originally posted by Temporal

Challenge will go up tonight, deadline is in the middle of next week. You'll get more details in a bit; I'll send out PMs when it's up!

Thanks darling!

[UFO]

Originally posted by Jackson

ugh my imagery was so on point that round

No man can resist
The roll of her hips
The rush of lust on her lips


Every man wants to hum along
To drown in the depths of her siren song
But even that girl gets a little lost
In the harmonies of her siren song


But secretly
The man rises from his dreams
And stumbles to the shore to find his love
But crushed and crazed
He won’t let the men escape
Till the bottom of the ocean is their home


Before He Cheats WHO?

Aw, I remember when I helped you write this #1 song

[mxtthewdelrey]

I was gonna post this

[UFO]

Originally posted by mxtthewdelrey

I was gonna post this

Bop!! Rock tho >

[Hugamari]

Working on my first entry right now. I hope it goes over well.

"Your dad's gay ask me how I know (how?)
He ****ed me in the mouth til the great white came out
Then he gave me your tuition and said "go blow it out"
It's his birthday so I'ma blow his candle right out"

It's a really personal song for me.

[swiftie13]

lovesong is back Mirrorwriting was ugly as hell tbh

[Jackson]

Originally posted by UFO

Aw, I remember when I helped you write this #1 song

Just looked at the PM I sent you and only one of those sections is any different than before you helped me and I'm pretty sure all you did was tell me what you didn't like

[UFO]

Originally posted by Hugamari

Working on my first entry right now. I hope it goes over well.

"Your dad's gay ask me how I know (how?)
He ****ed me in the mouth til the great white came out
Then he gave me your tuition and said "go blow it out"
It's his birthday so I'ma blow his candle right out"

It's a really personal song for me.

"right" is unnecessary and disrupts the flow of that line. Also, the third line is a bit clunky so you might want to fix it. Other than that, it has a great sense of relatability!

[swiftie13]

Originally posted by UFO

20/20 equals one, get ur math right

[Jackson]

Originally posted by swiftie13

lovesong is back Mirrorwriting was ugly as hell tbh

hoping you win so you can change your uglee username

[Temporal]

Originally posted by Jackson

ugh my imagery was so on point that round

No man can resist
The roll of her hips
The rush of lust on her lips


Every man wants to hum along
To drown in the depths of her siren song
But even that girl gets a little lost
In the harmonies of her siren song


But secretly
The man rises from his dreams
And stumbles to the shore to find his love
But crushed and crazed
He won’t let the men escape
Till the bottom of the ocean is their home


Before He Cheats WHO?

[swiftie13]

Originally posted by Hugamari

Working on my first entry right now. I hope it goes over well.

"Your dad's gay ask me how I know (how?)
He ****ed me in the mouth til the great white came out
Then he gave me your tuition and said "go blow it out"
It's his birthday so I'ma blow his candle right out"

It's a really personal song for me.

same

[UFO]

Originally posted by Jackson

Just looked at the PM I sent you and only one of those sections is any different than before you helped me and I'm pretty sure all you did was tell me what you didn't like

I honestly don't remember I'm pretty sure I wrote you an essay on what I thought was good and bad though. I never give anyone feedback without giving them a few compliments to lessen the blow. I also remember you asking me which direction you should take and you thanking me but I guess that didn't happen either

[swiftie13]

Originally posted by Jackson

hoping you win so you can change your uglee username

where was the support last season when talent didn't win?

[swiftie13]

Originally posted by Jackson

ugh my imagery was so on point that round

No man can resist
The roll of her hips
The rush of lust on her lips


Every man wants to hum along
To drown in the depths of her siren song
But even that girl gets a little lost
In the harmonies of her siren song


But secretly
The man rises from his dreams
And stumbles to the shore to find his love
But crushed and crazed
He won’t let the men escape
Till the bottom of the ocean is their home


Before He Cheats WHO?

this is your peak.

[Jackson]

Originally posted by UFO

I honestly don't remember I'm pretty sure I wrote you an essay on what I thought was good and bad though. I never give anyone feedback without giving them a few compliments to lessen the blow. I also remember you asking me which direction you should take and you thanking me but I guess that didn't happen either

No you did a good job which is why I asked you for help and keep wanting you to be a judge until you betrayed me in Season 7

Originally posted by swiftie13

where was the support last season when talent didn't win?

Well ClarksonSlays was a terrible username too but in hindsight Tempura isn't much better, what a wasted opportunity

[UFO]

Originally posted by swiftie13

20/20 equals one, get ur math right

I'm pretty sure 20 carrots out of 20 carrots is still 20 carrots