[Jackson]

the new line kinda just seems like pretty filler, don't stress about it too much

[ceremonials]

I feel like the other is more filler I don't think I'll resubmit but let me edit it in my final draft

[Aurora]

I like this song much better than Snowflake Secrets because it's snatched and skinny. SS is fat.

[Jackson]

Originally posted by ceremonials

I feel like the other is more filler I don't think I'll resubmit but let me edit it in my final draft

Probably, one is just prettier filler than the other

I've made a few small changes to mine since submitting too but nothing substantial enough to need to resubmit

[Achilles.]

I hope after round two we go on hiatus for the holidays because woo who has the time

[Dylobs]

I have the time!

[Achilles.]

Remember when Aurora gave us a 24 hour challenge on New Year's Eve.

[Aurora]

Originally posted by Achilles.

Remember when Aurora gave us a 24 hour challenge on New Year's Eve.

Wow what a ****ing jerk.

[Buyonce1814]

Next week should be Bu week with topics based around my multiple personalities.

[Achilles.]

Originally posted by Aurora

Wow what a ****ing jerk.

Luckily I had / have no social life and managed to write my sole #1 hit that night. Thanks, jerk!

[Aurora]

yay everyone hates my song coming for #8-OUT, a Dope tea.

[Kunst]

I'm so much more confident this round. I'm not trying to pull a Demi with my confidence and end up with underwhelming results in quality and numbers but I certainly feel I managed to merge the right imagery to portray my type, and still make the song about a centered theme, from a very specific perspective

[Kunst]

Watch the judges rip me to shreds, and have me eliminated knowing my luck

[Buyonce1814]

Originally posted by Buyonce1814

Next week should be Bu week with topics based around my multiple personalities.

Bu week

I think Bu Week needs to be a thing. Make it happen. There's so much y'all could write about

Bu, the drunk
Bu, the desperate
Bu, the depressed
Horny Bu
Bu, the fatty
Bu, the quitter
Bu, the wise
Bu, the good friend
Bu, the benevolent
Bu, the forgiver
Bu, the apostate
Bu, six inch heels

[Achilles.]

Originally posted by Aurora

yay everyone hates my song coming for #8-OUT, a Dope tea.

Prince holds the record for biggest drop-off of all time because "Purple Rain" went 4-off after it recharted following his death.


I'm gonna match him.

[Cupid]

Originally posted by Buyonce1814

Bu week

I think Bu Week needs to be a thing. Make it happen. There's so much y'all could write about

Bu, the drunk
Bu, the desperate
Bu, the depressed
Horny Bu
Bu, the fatty
Bu, the quitter
Bu, the wise
Bu, the good friend
Bu, the benevolent
Bu, the forgiver
Bu, the apostate
Bu, six inch heels

Keep it

[Aurora]

Originally posted by Achilles.

Prince holds the record for biggest drop-off of all time because "Purple Rain" went 4-off after it recharted following his death.


I'm gonna match him.

Mess, I never knew it charted that high after he died.

[Buyonce1814]

Originally posted by Cupid

Keep it

Great title for a Horny Bu theme

[keshaspearsxo]

Originally posted by Buyonce1814

Bu week

I think Bu Week needs to be a thing. Make it happen. There's so much y'all could write about

Bu, the drunk
Bu, the desperate
Bu, the depressed
Horny Bu
Bu, the fatty
Bu, the quitter
Bu, the wise
Bu, the good friend
Bu, the benevolent
Bu, the forgiver
Bu, the apostate
Bu, six inch heels

😷

[ughgabriel]

Description: A song about grief. It's the story of a mother who had a terminally ill son and how she dealt with the situation. This song is the eulogy she wrote for his funeral.

Artificial Paradise

[Verse 1]
As we were surrounded by the green
A miracle took place in my garden
For seasons I carried with a seed
Which I would never forget to water

So I fed your soil to help you grow
With a promise the mountains still recall
I'd be your shelter when the wind blows
But the fields didn't warn us of the downfall

[Pre chorus]
Through all the storms and droughts we overcame
I still saw your dry leaves waiting for the rain
And though I'd do anything to end with your pain
I won't let you rot
I won't let you rot

[Chorus]
Fructified my faith as your petals fell
But this forest contained the weight of hell
For you I made
An artificial paradise
I cut you from the root and I still ache
Cause your remains are lost inside the lake
I kept you safe
In an artificial paradise

But Eden wasn't heaven
Inside of nursery glass
And Eden is no heaven
When my rose has turned into grass

[Verse 2]
Some cycles don't always follow their course
Nature said I'd be dust before you bloomed
But the decision came from a bigger force
You flourish, you vanish but we're always doomed

[Pre Chorus]
Through all the storms and droughts we overcame
I still saw your dry leaves waiting for the rain
And though I'd do anything to end with your pain
I won't let you rot
No, I won't let you rot

[Chorus]
Fructified my faith as your petals fell
But this forest contained the weight of hell
For you I made
An artificial paradise
I cut you from the root and I still ache
Cause your remains float around inside the lake
I kept you safe
In an artificial paradise

But Eden wasn't heaven
Inside of nursery glass
And Eden is no heaven
When my rose has turned into grass

[Outro]
And it all came down
I hurt but I understand
I had to let you wither
So I could blossom again