citrus: I am obsessed with your use of vocabulary. You are able to combine words in such amazing ways. This was a great story, and i was totally expecting some fantasy/vampire/cult thing to happen, but the ending was a hilariously awesome twist. Great job, and you have proven yourself yet again to be a great writer!
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dripdrip: LOVE the story and the lesson. Did the girls run off to commit suicide at the end though? Great job! A couple of spelling/punctuation errors, but all in all, a really creative and inspiring story.
Sebas
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this is the final round so i'm going to take into account the scores i gave both of you in the last two rounds.
I really enjoyed both of your entries, you guys are great at this.
Your writing styles are different! Citrus uses more the figures of speech and his texts are narrative while emmy's texts are more descriptive! Both of you deserve to be winners, you guys not only delivered great entries but also showed interest in the game!
Anvarie
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citrus:a very descriptive story, with a nice twist
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dripdrip: besides a few grammar mistakes and wrong words, it was a perfectly enjoyable tale with a wicked lesson